Date: 02/03/10 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Really enjoyed the flashback's-give's meaning to a lot of thing's.
Um...will there be some um...sexy sexy going on in the next chapter, you know, since it's been so long since they've been together and Tom can have those type's of visit's? They can do all kind of hot thing's even though Bill is pregnant.
Thank's for the update, can't wait for the next one!
Date: 01/29/10 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww thats so cute! Please write more soon
Date: 01/22/10 04:57 pm Title: Prolouge
YAY SMUT!!! ^_^ *is excited for the upcoming smut, then*
You're updating soon, right? (Like I ever update fast anymore. Ha. ha. ha. -.-)
And I learned the term 'conjugal visit' when /I/ was in jail LOL
Date: 01/22/10 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww! So adorable ^_^ This fic is def going in my faves!
I think you two work really well together, you're amazing :) And probably no sexitime during the conjugal visits with pregaBill...but come on. SOME smut? Pleaseplease please? I'll even take an hj... *_*
Author's Response:
Date: 01/22/10 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
Twin boys! Yippee! ^_^
And grrr, Georg >:( Stop tryin' to steal Bill from Tom! NOT COOL, Man!
Author's Response: Thanks! This is for chapter 4 review:rnrnthanks. Were honored that your reviewing this! For the visits they are contact visits. Meaning sex. Which I'm excited about. Lol. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/22/10 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh! I totally read erm...crap, what was it...'The Game'? The one that came before 'The Fuck It File'... I totes read that one :)
There are a few spelling/grammar errors in this chapter if you get a chance to fix them...
And the court case went REALLY fast @_@ I mean, mine dragged out MONTHS. but I guess it's all for the sake of the fic, right? :D
Date: 01/22/10 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really good so far (aka I'm gonna read more lol)
I've never been to Vegas or anything, but it seems a bit weird that he's going to prison before the arraignment. From personal experience, they stay in jail until then, since people typically don't go to prison unless they have more than a year's sentence (at least in the US).
But all in all, it's really good so far, so I'm gonna keep reading now lol
Date: 01/22/10 10:36 am Title: Prolouge
Oh i loved it! But Georg should watch out or I kick him in the ass!
Date: 01/22/10 09:51 am Title: Chapter 4
This chapter had me tense, happy, sad-lot's of emotion, loved it. Georg has me worried-in more way's than one. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank's for the update.
Date: 11/06/09 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awwwwwe this chatper was so cute!!!
BILL IS GOING TO HAVE TWINS??OMG!!*squeals*LOL
Bushido going for Tom??Seriously?!LOL
This is the first story i've read where Bushido likes Tom instead of Bill.I mean i know they are many out there but this is the first i've ever read one!!!!but i find it as disgusting as the others!!!*yeah i don't like Bushido that much...>:/
Wohaaa is Georg trying to fill Tom's stop??why is he touching Bill like that???
I think Gustav and georg would make a wonderful couple...as always!!No really..Tom should like hook them up or something!!!XD
BILL IS GOING TO HAVE TOM'S TWINS!!!*throws a baby-shower for Bill*XD
Thanks for the update!!
Date: 11/02/09 03:22 pm Title: Prolouge
Hey today I thought about the story and got the perfect theme song. Its from Bushido and Cassandra Steen and called Bonnie und Clyde. The song is exactly about what happened in cap 3.
Author's Response: I'm going to check that out when I get home! Thanks for the heads up and reviewing!
Date: 11/02/09 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
I don't trust Georg, he better not try anything Bill.
I can't wait to find out what is going to happen.
Date: 11/02/09 11:17 am Title: Chapter 3
Now i'm a little concerned about Georg..what will he try or how far will he take the promise he made to Tom? Bill and the babies better stay safe..please !! Can't wait for another update.
Date: 11/02/09 08:45 am Title: Chapter 3
I really really REALLY hope Bill turns George down when he pulls a move. Please don't let those two to be together. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 11/02/09 08:41 am Title: Chapter 3
I really really REALLY hope Bill turns George down when he pulls a move. Please don't let those two to be together. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 10/30/09 02:50 am Title: Chapter 2
UPDATE EVERYTHING BEACHES! I GOTS NOTHING TO DO!!!! Dx 5 fucking *'s
Date: 10/29/09 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
HELL TO THE YEAH! (i don't rly know wtf I'm agreeing to but eh) I love this!!!
Date: 10/27/09 09:06 am Title: Chapter 2
Ok I love it, but seriously Tom needs to man up if he wants to survive prison live, like Dom off the fast and the furious. Secondly, Now Billa knows he's pregnant he needs to group up, he's going to be a mommy soon. It's gonna kill me if Tom's all emo throughout the story and Bill's a emotional mess. I'm sorry, don't hate me, I just had to say it. I can't wait to read more.
P.S. YAY BILLA, TWINS!!! YAY :P
Date: 10/26/09 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Such emotion...God how will Tom react when he finds out about the twins?! Hope Tom catches a break!
Date: 10/15/09 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh god no Bushido is in this one to??
Awwwe poor Tom, i feel so bad for him, makes me wanna hug him and tell him everything is gonna be alright!!!
Hell yeah Gordon,that's how its done!!
Wait i didn't know Bill didn't know he was pregnant, i thought he was gonna tell Tom the night he got caught and didn't have time after what happened! That makes it even more sad!!I hope doesn't get too many years in jail, but he does have three charges huh?So it might be quite some time!!
Thanks for updating and can't wait 'till next chapter!!
Author's Response: Of course Bushido is in this one! I love Bushido and I hate to write him as an asshole but I have too....lol....Bill just thought he had the flu. Tom gets 3 years and if hes good them they can shorten his jail time to less but We'll see! Thanks for reviewing!