Date: 12/30/11 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
soooo i learned something of this story i learned that you should not judge other ppl, cuse you dont know how their home are, you dont know what their been trough, tou dont know their real personalitys, and most of all you dont know their love
Date: 04/17/10 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don´t really like this Brennen girl... She stole Tom from Lily...
Author's Response: lol Lily & Bill are supposed to be together <3
Date: 03/15/10 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh my God o.o She killed herself?! I hadn't expected her to. I thought things was finally going to work out for Heather. It was a very good Fic! I liked that it wasn't the usual happy ending, cliché kind of thing. Good work!
Author's Response: Well I'm glad I caught you by surprise. I didn't want it to be cliched. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/27/10 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 13
What were her "perfection" pills anyways?
Author's Response: My own made up drug :) Just drugs that make you feel like you're invincible. I'm sure there's one out there like that, but I've never done drugs before in my life, so I wouldn't know xP
Date: 02/05/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
It was a truly amazing story. Raw and powerful. I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/03/10 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 13
bravo, brava! whatever people say....
never thought I would read something so well fictionated, with it still being so close to a tragic reality, on this site. :')
Author's Response: aw thank you!
Date: 02/02/10 12:34 am Title: Chapter 13
Awwww that was a great story!
Did Lily and Bill get together?
Author's Response: thank you! & yes they did! :D
Date: 01/31/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
good job, bb :) i like how there was no happy ending. it wouldn't have been right if she lived. i'm glad you were able to finish. but you should have had me beta. :P love you.
Author's Response: thanks babee. and i dont need your help! lol i got thisss.
Date: 01/31/10 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
Nawww! =[ she died!!!! why????????? well, i guess thats the story right/ =[ Ireally really liked this story thanks for writting it =] i hope you write more stories (please write more!!!!) =}
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm sorry. I didn't want this story to have a happy ending, because I figured if it did, it would be like every other story out there, a cliche. So I added a twist. I'm sorry :) And thank you so much! Check out my other stories, if you'd like! Thanks for sticking with me! :D
Date: 01/17/10 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
ahh i love it! thanks soo sooo much ! pleaasee write more!! xx
Author's Response: thank youu! xx
Date: 01/16/10 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm confused!
Author's Response: aww, why?
Date: 01/01/10 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 12
girl its soo good, do more, do more! oh you know who this is. :)
Author's Response: LMFAO oh my god. ily <3 thank youu!
Date: 12/29/09 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh my god, I love this! the best thing I'vr read in a while! keep it up! and it better be a 'next' button up here in no time!
Author's Response: lol thank you!!
Date: 12/27/09 02:39 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow,greta story. Though this isn't much of a review, this was really really good.
Date: 12/21/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
ohh! wonder what itll happen next good job! but you kept us all waiting soooooo long!
Author's Response: thank you! and i'm really sorry, but I was grounded and had my laptop taken away =/
Date: 12/21/09 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 12
Lilys mother? Hmm.. intresting :)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 11/13/09 11:41 am Title: Chapter 11
AAWWWWW.... Heather and Tom sitting on a tree K I S S I N G... more please..
Author's Response: haha yepp =) soon! thanks !
Date: 11/13/09 09:07 am Title: Chapter 11
AWWWWW... :)this story is so great! :)
Author's Response: thanks ! :D
Date: 11/10/09 09:46 am Title: Chapter 10
This is fantastic! Really, really good. I love how neither Brennen nor Lily are mary-sue. It's really, really good! : D Keep it up!
Author's Response: YES! Success! I hate Mary Sues, glad you think they're not! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 11/09/09 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 10
ahhh!!! its so good , thanks so much for writting it and updating :) xxx
Author's Response: and thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :]