Date: 04/06/11 01:34 am Title: Four - Dreams are Real
wow!!!AMAZING STORY...
Date: 04/04/11 11:17 pm Title: Fourteen - Conflicted
goddamit, i don't like joey!!!!!! i'm sorry, but i don't.......... great job, though!!!!!!
Date: 02/10/11 06:40 am Title: Thirteen - Pseudo-Identity
What?!! Bill didn't show up?!!! No!! Update!! This is to much Joey :P updateeeeeeee!!!!!!! Pleaseeee UPDATE!!!!
Date: 02/10/11 06:24 am Title: Twelve - Crashing
Oh no Roger! :( I hope he doesn't lay a hand on her! I bet it's about the credit card isn't it? And in a way I'm glad she didn't have her first kiss with Joey he seems kool and all but I'm hoping for Bill to be the one.
Date: 02/10/11 06:14 am Title: Eleven - Soaring
I don't like the fact that she likes Joey so much :-/ what about bill? :( damn this date is taking so long! :P I still can't wait to see the convo that will take place between her and Bill after this date it's bound to happen and I'm kinda nervous eeeep!
Date: 02/10/11 06:04 am Title: Ten - Strangers
Oh my this Joey guy doesn't seem so bad he likes tokio hotel! :D Ashley is lucky she has two men in her life haha. But Billy is still probably waiting on her :(
Date: 02/10/11 04:40 am Title: Nine - Preparations
I wonder what yosuke was going to say about Joey hmm what if Joey is some asshole just looking to get some ass :-/ me no like hmm. Well let's see how this date turns out. And Omg what if BILL is waiting on her or is worried :( I wonder if she will tell Bill te truth about where she's been at.
Date: 02/10/11 03:07 am Title: Eight - Mixed Emotion
I kinda see elles point of view on Ashley, I'd be worried also if my fried was like that. But the way she said "what if it's you controlling the dream" that was like Woah! It can't be it has to be real lol I still do hope this is real the convos she has with Bill and that he knows her I mean it has to be real. And I do hope they get to meet face to face one day not just in dreams.
Lol you got me thinking "inception" haha :)
Date: 02/10/11 02:38 am Title: Seven - Portrait
I just love love love the conversations between Ashley and Bill
Date: 02/10/11 12:32 am Title: Six - Hear Me Out
I like how Bill and Ashleys relationship is unfolding. I'm glad she let it all out I hope he opens up a bit more to her too. And it was so cute how Bill left her a message :)
Date: 02/09/11 11:57 pm Title: Thirteen - Pseudo-Identity
joey is awesome and everthing buuuuuuut wheres bill? cuz im really starting to miss him. he's coming in the next chapter right? *waits anxiously* xD
Date: 02/09/11 11:32 pm Title: Five - Like Magic
Wow that is just wayyy to eerie lol oh to have a lucid dream with Tom ;) haha I like the convo Ashley and Bill shared :)
Date: 02/09/11 09:46 pm Title: Four - Dreams are Real
Omygod!!! Omygod!!! Omygod!! In fan girling right now lol XD I'm so happy she knows who he is already. Omygod when they meet!!
Date: 02/09/11 07:34 pm Title: Three - Afterlife
"What happens to you when you die depends on what you believe. What you’ve done in your life. If you’re Catholic, you go to Heaven or Hell. If you’re Hindu, you’re born again, into a better life or a lesser life. If you’re Agnostic, you find out the thing you’ve wondered for your whole life. If you’re a follower of Islam, you find out where God has already chosen for you to go. If you’re Buddhist, you’re one step closer to achieving Nirvana. If you’re Atheist, you go in the ground no matter what. " i forgot to mention you described this beautifully, I will never forget :). And OMG the bristo in her dream is right there!! Please let her meet BK in real life not just dreams! Oh and the first chapter the notebook thing I forgot to mention again! was weird I wouldve paniced lol only if it was Tom though haha.
Date: 02/09/11 06:49 pm Title: Two - Wake Up Call
That's just scary to run away from a full grown man who's out to hurt but most of all who's suppose to be your father. I feel bad Ashley. I hope she's ok.
Date: 02/09/11 06:34 pm Title: One - Misery
Omg this is gooooood :) eeep on to the next chapter. Btw you are so detailed that I can picture all scenes perfectly.
Date: 02/03/11 03:27 pm Title: Thirteen - Pseudo-Identity
grr... much as i like joey, i like bill better.... are we gonna see him again next chapter????? *crosses fingers*
Date: 02/02/11 10:56 pm Title: Thirteen - Pseudo-Identity
sooo when are you bringing bill back??
Author's Response: Next chapter, pinky promise. :]
Date: 01/20/11 06:37 am Title: Twelve - Crashing
Joey seems a little too good to be true.... but she's really in for it now with Roger. its not going to be pretty isnt it? oww..
im curious of her reaction to Bill in next chapter now. i guess i'll just have to sit back, wait and see.:]
...Bill IS going to be in the next chapter right?...
oh and amazing work as always! keep it up your fans are lovin' it! xD
Date: 01/17/11 02:05 am Title: Twelve - Crashing
is it bad that i really, REALLY don't trust joey???? i have a bad feeling about him, but that may just be me.... XD great job!!!!!!1