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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/11 07:22 am Title: Chapter 13

this is a really good story!!
i cant wait for the rest!

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/11 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi,

At the end of the chapter I was just thinking of how much I hate Drunken drivers. They're the worst thing that could cross your way.

Poor Bill having to see all the movement around him not knowing what's going on. I've never been hospitalized myself, but it must be awful.

See you next chapter.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 13

aw, not cool, daddio. im craving a bit of controversy...:)

Author's Response: Just wait and see... ;)

Reviewer: noraa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 13

aww^^ they are cute!

Author's Response: Hehe, I think so too! :D

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 03:44 am Title: Chapter 12

mmm....feel like they'll be walked in on or something...hopefully

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/11 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 11

mm cute.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/11 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 10

aww, yes he did. :3

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 9

cute. i love tom's persistance...

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 13

Awww! So worth the wait, as always! Poor Bill tho, i hope its gonna get better with his dad.... The twins are just adorable together, love it and cant wait for more! 

Author's Response: Oh good, I'm glad! More with Jorg will be in the next chapter, so you'll find out soon :D

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 13

I agree, Bill needed some sweetness. Great chapter, I look forward to seeing if things get better with Jorg. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: I think so, too <3 Thank you for reading, more when it's written :)

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 8

now it begins...

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 7

cute cute~

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 6

cute!!!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 5

yay. happy convo!

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 13

well, so much for a happy "bill meets dad"..... ah, well, hopefully things will get better!!!!!

Author's Response: We'll have to wait and see, hehe >:)

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 4

can't be sure yet...gonna read on :)

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

oh man, this is gonna be rough...i have a feeling tom might take it out on bill a little, tho they are both victims here

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

hmm, im thinking bill has a problem and he's got some freaky rare blood type or something...

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

poor baby ;_;

Author's Response: I know ;_;

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 12:20 am Title: Chapter 12

it is quite cute, and im liking the steady progress it's making.... wonderful job and merry christmas and happy new year!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it! Thank you, and the same to you <3

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