Date: 09/11/12 02:41 pm Title: Epilogue
Fantastic writing! Excellent work =)
Date: 06/17/11 12:48 am Title: Epilogue
WOAH awesome story! i read it on fanfiction a while ago but i never thought i would find it XD im glad i did
Date: 07/10/10 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Y'know. It ticks me off when stories do this... I read a story, find myself dragged all the way in, and when I reach the end, I want more. But the way I cure this is not by begging for more, no, it's by using time I should be studying (cause I'm a slacker like that) and make a damn banner for a bannerless story. It's how I find my closure. So, if you've put the pieces together, I made a banner for this story if you'd like to post it. If not, no offense taken. But I think you might like it. :P --> http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k224/Atanih/StrangersBannerForCandyCoatedSugarS.jpg
Date: 04/18/10 08:18 pm Title: Epilogue
I'm confused. Did Bill die?
Date: 04/14/10 07:33 pm Title: Epilogue
*jaw drops*
omg.
definetely didn't expect that ending :[
Date: 02/21/10 08:40 am Title: Chapter 1
awww T.T whyyy! why did bill have to die!! poor tomi T.T
but srsly, when Tom made poof! and started beating the shit out of Bill i almost fell of my chair, yelling "STOP IT YOU FUCKIN MORON!!" ^^"
Date: 02/15/10 08:17 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow...great story. Totally unexpected ending too. Loved it though!
Date: 11/03/09 05:48 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow death is a continuous cycle natural or delevered by others .......thanks great story ! but of course completly heart breaking..........
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 11/03/09 05:44 pm Title: Epilogue
OMG bill died??!?!?!?!?!? Poor tom taking the life that bill had lived before he got killed....I can't wait for the next story :)
Author's Response: Indeed. =[ Thanks!
Date: 11/03/09 02:22 pm Title: Epilogue
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
OMG!!!... So Tom killed Bill?!?!.. why... oh why?!... Now he is serial killer?...
It was a sad ending but the whole story is just amazing, I will be waiting for another one!
Author's Response: Technically David took Tom's hand and killed Bill that way, but yes, haha. And yes he's now the killer. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 11/03/09 12:21 am Title: Chapter 11
O.O Oh my god!
So Tom killed him or not??... Jesus girl u twisted the story but is so good!
I really love this! is so well writen n the things that happen in this story is just amazing!...
Just 1 more chapter left??! oh noooo!! I'm going to miss this so much!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 11/02/09 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
WHAT?!?!?!?!? I'm kinda confused did David stab tom or bill or did tom stab someone. And what was with bill practically egging tom on, practically begging tom to kill him....I don't want them dead they belong together!!!! Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: You will find all that out soon! Haha thanks so much!
Date: 11/02/09 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
omg !!! nooooo ....my mind is spinning....it's so sad....but u know who to tell a story really well thank u.*heart breaking*
Author's Response: Thank you! Don't be heart broken! Save that for the last chapter haha. xD
Date: 11/02/09 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! PLease don't end like his!I won't be able to sleep now!!
Author's Response: Haha sorry! There's one more chapter left though. It'll be posted soon!
Date: 11/02/09 05:37 am Title: Chapter 10
how the end???there's soo much more to be donee plss don't end soon!!!
Date: 11/01/09 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ok iam a little confused..........very interesting though...
Author's Response: It gets clearer later on.
Date: 11/01/09 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
i LIKE the story but some things I want to point out.
Tom has been raped with no condom I suppose: Bill is having sex with him right after with no protection. Not a good example !
In the morning Bill gets dressed : no shower, no tooth brushing before doing that ? Hygiene sucks a bit here.
Otherwise, very good story, very realitic.. Tht'as why I'm pointing theses things out ..xxx
Date: 11/01/09 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
......I didn't see that coming.....and I see I was wrong with who got knocked out in the last chapter....and really bill killed toms father......wow I really don't know what to say this completely changes everything I was thinking but I like this new twist....can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 11/01/09 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
'NEEEEEEEEEEEIN!!! Please don't stop like that!! Bitte bitte! new chapter like right now?? Please! omg.. I sound like an addict.. but I am.. So..
PLEASE? ^^
Date: 11/01/09 11:46 am Title: Chapter 9
Noooooo ... cliffhangers!!!.... D:
OMG Bill told him that he forgives him...I hope so!
Poor Tomi he has suffered a lot already, he deserves to be with Bill...
Update soon please please pleaseeeeeeeeee!!!