Date: 11/01/09 12:44 am Title: Chapter 9
Its ok if u do a few cliffhangers as long as u keep updatin ! and as always love it and happy haloween !!!
Date: 10/31/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
Cliffhangers arggggh.....I don't think bill killed him just knocked him out to get him to some other place.....maybe after this they left the city because I think the mob boss would find out tom is still alive and be pretty angry with bill....oh well I won't know till the next chapter....can't wait :)
Author's Response: That's a good theory! I can't tell you what'll happen though haha. But that is very creative!
Date: 10/31/09 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
UPDATE!!
Oh God ... Don't tell me that the job for Bill is kill Tom...
This is sad cause they love each other but it was Tom's fault ... D:
I want to see them together!
Update soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Date: 10/30/09 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
Omg ! yes so exciting !
Date: 10/30/09 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.....bill won't go through with it once he knows who it is he has to kill....but what will tom do?
Date: 10/30/09 10:08 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh boy is Bill in for a surprise, lol.
Date: 10/28/09 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
OMG nooooooooooo... I'm crying!!!
Tom... you stupid!! what did u do!?!?! ... n now what is going to happen??
This is so sad and so good at the same time, yeah I'm really in love with this story but this chapter totally killed me ... oh Bill D:
I'm also sad for Tom but he was absolutely stupid!
Author's Response: Don't cry! Tom is kind of stupid but you can't say that Bill wasn't asking for it. =\
Date: 10/28/09 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
OMG! I've just read the whole story! And I must say that I can't begin to say how good this is! And I'll be waiting right here for a new chapter ^^
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's means a lot to me!
Date: 10/28/09 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh man - this is going to be bad.
Date: 10/28/09 09:35 am Title: Chapter 7
Omg ! i feal like my heart just broke y tom ? y bill ? eekk ......thnks for the update !!
Author's Response: Sure thing! Thanks for reading. =D
Date: 10/28/09 09:04 am Title: Chapter 7
But...but...oh no. That's not good. :(
Author's Response: I know. =\ I didn't want to go through with it at first, but I think the story needed it.
Date: 10/28/09 06:30 am Title: Chapter 7
......NOOOOOOOOO.......tom how could you do that.....bill I thought you loved him.....oh well something will happen to bring them back together.....can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Haha time will only tell! Thanks for reading! =D
Date: 10/26/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
Omg omg omg !! so much suspense must know !! agh....
Date: 10/24/09 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
UPDATE UPDATE!!!
Oh Poor Bill D: he have to kill his mom but it wasn't he fault...
I don't like the dream that Tom had... I really don't like it, at all D: it scares me ...
I want moooooooooore and soon please!
Date: 10/23/09 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
omg anouther piece of amazing work keep it up !
Date: 10/23/09 06:26 am Title: Chapter 5
Awww....that made me cry now I need to washy face before I go to school....can't wait for more
Date: 10/21/09 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
i'm lovin' this story XD
i love when one of the twins is half psycho, but they're just looking for a friend. keep up the great work!
Date: 10/20/09 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really love this story!!! .. is just amanzing u have to continue soon .. PLEASEEE!!!
Date: 10/20/09 05:41 am Title: Chapter 4
"If I told you,I'd have to kill you." eek love it ! can't wait to see how the story continues.
Date: 10/20/09 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Amazing and truely captivating.