Date: 10/20/09 12:21 am Title: Chapter 2
*grins*
this is AMAZING. this is why i fangirl you, because you leave me grinnig and breathless the entire way through.
god how i loved their banter, their talking about themselves pre-fall and eve their parents...
plus, the sex was just HOTTTTTTTTT
but i DIED laughing when Bill woke up and Tom was gone. When I saw the line about the shoes i was all I FUCKING KNEW IT. god girl, you're making me grin and blush over here, grin ad blush
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! This chapter was a lot of fun because they got to snipe at each other, have their sweet little moments, and also get it on. ;D I think everyone saw Tom's boot theft coming. Personally, I would've stolen those shoes myself, heh.
Date: 10/19/09 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is so amazing. But what I really wanted to comment about is how intriguing the universe you had created here is to me. I would love to read more about the world of phantomrider!Tom. Would you ever consider continuing this?
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I've had a good time writing this universe and these characters! At the moment I'm not planning a continuation, but if inspiration strikes, it's definitely possible. :)
Date: 10/19/09 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
*g* very very hot! And very sweet and very enjoyable. Lol at the boots- Summer Wine shone through there. xD the sex! omg... great sex. definitely a favorite
Author's Response: Hee, thank you! I already had that bit of thievery in mind when the song was mentioned, but then I read the lyrics and it seemed even more appropriate. ;)
Date: 10/13/09 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know whether to marry you (yet again?) or have you killed. What a place to stop, woman!!!
My toes curled along with Bill's DX
Date: 10/10/09 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn, I'm glad I didn't try to finish this last night when I was tired! I ADORE this. Your details are amazing and I am constantly blown away by how real everything is. I cannot WAIT for more of this!
Date: 10/10/09 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
:OOOOO
Oh snapples!
This story already has me hooked by a fishing rod.
Tom has the "PHANTOMRIDER" haha, this is too priceless!
xD
Date: 10/10/09 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooh, this is so different and oh so awesome... I wish it were longer than two chapters though. :0)
Date: 10/10/09 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
*ENTHRALLED* ...I'll forgive you for not putting up more Code 483 this time. ;D
Guh, this is quite a beautiful little piece of work.
Author's Response: Muahaha, my diversionary tactics are working. :D No, seriously though, Code 483 is next in line for an update. Very pleased you like this one too, though!
Date: 10/10/09 09:32 am Title: Chapter 1
me thinks the phantom rider is going to sex him. and then bill will thank him.
also, fucking awesome set up, would be so cool if you used this "world" i guess? in another story sometime.
Author's Response: Hmmm, you may be on to something there. ;) I may use this world again, since this fic is going to be relatively short. We'll see!
Date: 10/10/09 02:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE your writing style so much. It's so unique and so full of imagery; I can see everything so cleary that it's like watching a film. You're such a talented writer, and I love it!
I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm blushing now, and so glad the imagery comes across the way I want it to. :) Look for the next chapter soon!
Date: 10/10/09 02:22 am Title: Chapter 1
*pitches a fit*
NO, tell me now!
Great new world, Lady person. Great new world.
Author's Response: You know I'm giving nothing away. :P Glad you're liking it though, bb!
Date: 10/10/09 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1
You create the best worlds. I am continuously amazed at what you think up and share with us bby, thanks so much. :)
Author's Response: Thank *you* so much for reading what I write! :)
Date: 10/10/09 01:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Um.
Can the phantom rider do Bill while hes still IN his boots?
xD
I ALWAYS love your writing, and this is no exception. I cant WAIT for more from you ^_^
Author's Response: Hm, maaaaybe he can. We'll just have to see. ;D So glad you like it, and this one should be updated pretty soon!
Date: 10/10/09 01:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Meeeeeeeehhh... I CAN'T WAIT!!! wefgeryhortherngslgneh Please UPDATE SOOOOON!! ASAP!! ROFL.. Ahahahahaha..XD
Author's Response: Will do! XD Hopefully within the next week!
Date: 10/10/09 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Intense. And hot. Bill has all the luck...! And your parting words remind me of the lyrics of Summer Wine x3
Author's Response: Hee! You're right, Summer Wine is totally appropriate here. Not to give anything away, but it may become even more appropriate in future... ;D
Date: 10/10/09 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1
This is probably one of the most intriguing plots you've ever posted here, in my own humble opinion. I love the background information like with Fall and that you aren't giving too much away about it (yet?). Really absorbing and entertaining read, I can't wait until the next part.
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you. I was hoping this one would go over well, but I scribbled it down over the course of a single afternoon so I wasn't sure! Next part should be up within the week, with any luck.
Date: 10/10/09 12:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Would that I had time enough for a proper review, but I'm totally full of glee for this fic! You make world building look so easy, and I love the atmosphere you've got going here - even the minor characters have a voice and I think it'd be in Tom's best interest to take the boots while they're still on Bill, if y'know what I mean. ;) More soon?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hearing that you like it is a huge compliment, because I adore your fics, too. Completely agree that Tom ought to take the boots while they're still on Bill, and you'll see if Tom also agrees very soon. ;)
Date: 10/09/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
You are a total prat.
And this is definitely a proper review. Shut up.
Author's Response: I'm going to print and frame this review. Not even kidding.