Date: 01/20/10 11:03 am Title: Chapter 2
wow ! Loved this story ! I would really like to read more... sequel ? :D
Date: 11/29/09 03:16 am Title: Chapter 2
I read this when I was on the cruise, that one half-hour of internet I paid for, and OH SO WORTH IT. Love this so much, and I hope you know this screams for a sequel. This is so meltingly sexy, and I love this deconstructed post-Fall world of yours.
Date: 10/22/09 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
Such a cute story and yet so hot *.* LOVE IT
I hope there's a sequel 8)
Date: 10/22/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW, just WOW.
I love the whole phantom rider legend thingy, this is awesome! I love it :))
Date: 10/21/09 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Totally great. I love sci-fi, and this piece was wonderfully written. I'd love to see more! :D
Date: 10/21/09 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ack. Kind of sad that Tom left, but of course, he IS the Phantom Rider. Hahaha whenever i say Phantom Rider in my head, i always put an empahasis on the Tom part (PhanTOM) xD
Is the Fall something you made up? Anyways, it was cool :D
Date: 10/21/09 05:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Corny and smutty, but yummy nonetheless. You also don't seem to have done too badly with continuity, unless you corrected it all before I got here XD
Author's Response: I confess, I actually read through the smut myself this time, hence lack of continuity fail. XD Usually I finish the smutty bits and then am like 'oh fuck it' and either post or send it off to you.
Date: 10/21/09 03:30 am Title: Chapter 2
oh this was so good. very different for you but you did it exquisitely :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It was fairly different from my usual worlds and plots, so I'm glad I could pull it off. :D
Date: 10/21/09 02:28 am Title: Chapter 2
*claps*
OMG Total LOVE for this. will there possibly be more????
Author's Response: Glad you like it! I wasn't planning for more, but we shall see. ;)
Date: 10/21/09 02:15 am Title: Chapter 2
I don't think I can even review this properly, I'm so in love with it. I get the idea that this is going to be one I'm going to think about for a long time. And if you ever have the urge to expand upon this somehow, I wouldn't be sad. Not at all.
Author's Response: I am unspeakably pleased that you like it so well. I've had such fun writing it! And you know, I wasn't thinking of writing a sequel or follow-up, but if I ever have the time, I just might. Seems as though plenty of people wouldn't mind seeing one!
Date: 10/20/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
YES! Most definitely more than enough! It was funny and yet HOT. I really like this Phantom Rider. He knows his tricks.
Author's Response: Why thank you! He most certainly does know his tricks. ;) I love writing outlaws like the Phantom Rider.
Date: 10/20/09 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well it's not enough for me. YOu need to write a sequel where they meet again and Tom stays for good! But otherwise this was amazing.
Author's Response: We shall see about a sequel, since there is clearly overwhelming demand for it! ;) Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/20/09 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Tom is not gonna shoot him. Even for those boots which I'd love a picture of btw. As for the thank you, I'm sure he'll think of something.
BTW, The world you've created is pretty wicked, I wish you'd go into more detail but at the same time I'm glad you left it up to the imagination.
Date: 10/20/09 09:56 am Title: Chapter 2
AHHH!! I LOVE IT! =)) I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thank you! Good to hear you enjoyed it. XD
Date: 10/20/09 09:47 am Title: Chapter 2
That was so great *_*
I really hope you're thinking of doing a sequel/follow-up to this. *crosses fingers*
Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, initially I wasn't considering a sequel, but with all the requests for one... we shall see. ^_~
Date: 10/20/09 06:14 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm quickly becoming addicted to your stories. You do such a good job of creating these worlds--all the little details are just so perfect, creating such a complete picture in just a few lines.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I do love writing the random little details, so I'm glad you like them as well. :)
Date: 10/20/09 04:27 am Title: Chapter 2
I like this, very nice. I hope someday you'll find the inspiration to write a sequel where they meet again ;)
xx
Author's Response: Glad you like it! With so many requests for a sequel, I may yet wind up writing one. ;D
Date: 10/20/09 03:35 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow I loved it i wish there was more :3
Author's Response: Thank you! Seems like everyone wants more of this one, so we'll see. ;)
Date: 10/20/09 02:43 am Title: Chapter 2
Ahhh! Bby it was amazing, as usual. I love that Tom stole the boots in the end.
Author's Response: Glad you liked! I think this Tom is always going to be a bit of a thief no matter what. ;)
Date: 10/20/09 01:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Loved it. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D