Date: 11/01/09 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 6: Age 13
Continue!!! ><
Author's Response: Lol next update will probably be Wednesday, if I remember XD
Date: 11/01/09 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 6: Age 13
D:
You changed the banner! D:
But I like it, especially since it shows that Bill's growing up and he's going to start looking like that soon. My mind doesn't like thinking about periods of time passing so like if you have a picture of Devilish-Bill on the front that's usually what I'll see him as. I guess because I'm visually perceptive or something? Anyway, I was thinking of doing that with another fic of mine on Mibba, for the seasons :] The background changing from fall to winter by ch. 5 and then winter to spring and so on.
So.
So-so.
Sew.
Why do I enjoy such fucked-up pairings? xD
I love how you make Bill jealous of the other women >:] Just shows how much his father has fucked him up :P
Oh, and I wrote a Halloween one-shot! :D If you have some free time and want to check it out ;] [/shameless whoring]
Author's Response: LOL Your shameless whoring works XD I'll check it out, ja?
And yes, banner change XD I honestly think the old one looked like crap, compared to this XD There should be more pics of Jorg online >.>
Date: 11/01/09 10:23 am Title: Chapter 6: Age 13
Wow bill is a trip man lol but then again if you want something you have to work to get it and I think bill is on his way to fucking him
Author's Response: I think he's on his way, too...but maybe when he gets a bit older, y/n? Jorg fucking a 13 yr. old freaks even ME out XD
Date: 10/25/09 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 5: Age Twelve
wow. this chapter was really interesting. awww our little Billa is growing up. lol. i was so happy to see that you had updated this. i wonder how he's going to set his little plan into motion. can't wait for more. ;)
Author's Response: I'm actually almost done with the story, as far as writing goes, so I'll most likely update more often, now XD Thanks for the review! ^_^
Date: 10/25/09 02:28 am Title: Chapter 5: Age Twelve
wooooow this is really really good. i love the narration from Bill, its nice to know what he thought of himself
Author's Response: I was going to do third person, but I really didn't want Jorg's input of anything at all in this story, and I knew if I wrote it in 3rd person I would be too tempted XD I'm so glad you like it!
Date: 10/24/09 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good story, but te gusto, means " I like you", " Me gustas" is do i please you.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! ^_^
You should check your Spanish grammar again, however. 'Me' and 'Te' are both indirect objects, and 'gustar' means 'to please'. It's one of those weird verbs like 'encantar', 'molestar', etc. Sorry for the confusion! ^_^rn
Date: 10/24/09 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 5: Age Twelve
D:
That's all I have to say.
xD
Author's Response: And you expected this to be a Jorg-rapes-Bill fic XD Nope. It'll be a Bill-seduces-Jorg fic XD
Date: 10/19/09 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 4: Age Eleven
uh oh...... Bill is falling for his baby daddy.
Author's Response: Even better--HE'S the baby XDXDXD
Date: 10/19/09 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 4: Age Eleven
.:).
Author's Response: ^_^
Date: 10/18/09 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 4: Age Eleven
Oh, wow. I could see all this happening.
Like, Bill dancing around in the dress? Yeah, I could see that xD Definitely. Too adorable.
Good job, Zaubermaus x]
Author's Response: Lol Thankies! I think I'm going to re-write the next few chapters, though, try to bring everything together a bit more and let you find out what happened to Becky and stuff...
Date: 10/18/09 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 4: Age Eleven
I feel bad for bill he had to lie to her. But I hope that they can still be friend
Author's Response: Er... >.> You'll see lol
Date: 10/17/09 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I looked at my Spanish notes again and realized that too, but thanx for explaining!
I'm gonna follow it, I like your story so far.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it :)
I'm in Spain, so I would hope I got it right XD
Date: 10/17/09 08:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Shouldn't it be 'Me gustas'? I thought 'Te gusto?' meant 'do you please me?'
Author's Response: No, it is supposed to be 'Te Gusto'. The 'Te' (you) is an indirect object, making it literally translate as 'Am I pleasing to you?'. Hope that helps and hope you like my story ^_^
Date: 10/15/09 04:55 am Title: Chapter 3: Age Ten
Wow this story is great dude... I'm honestly too lazy to explain why but you get the point :) FAVORITES!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *happiness abounds*
Date: 10/14/09 01:56 am Title: Chapter 3: Age Ten
this is getting more and more interesting with each chapter but its sooooo good. this story is like a drug that i cant get away from
Author's Response: Writing it is the same for me XD I'm already on Chapter 6, and I NEED to work on Flatline...but I won't >.>
Date: 10/13/09 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 3: Age Ten
.:).
Author's Response: ^)^
Date: 10/13/09 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 3: Age Ten
omg. three feet is amazing lol. thank you. i never thought i would read a fic like this or three feet. anyway, i love this chapter. i like how bill is starting to realize more and more of what's happening, but instead of being mad about what his dad is shaping him into, he's changing it into something he can deal with. i hope that made sense lol. this fic is so unique. i like it alot. i'm definately going to keep reading this. :)
Author's Response: Thanks :D I'm glad you are giving Jorg/Bill fics a chance :)
Date: 10/11/09 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 2: Age Nine
Haha, Jorg/Bill. I laugh. Also because in Singing These Tears (an upcoming fic of mine) I put in some Jorg/Bill because I'm evil like that >:]
This was good x] I just don't really like the first person as much as I like how you write third person. But that's really the only thing I see wrong with it, because you're a good writer and everything flows nice and smoothly.
Pedo, incest, cross-dressing, transgenders...I'm so bad >:]
Author's Response: LOL It was going to be 3rd person, it really was...and then Bill's like: NEIN! I WANNA TELL IT! -.- So yeah. The sequel will def. be in 3rd person, though XD
Date: 10/11/09 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 2: Age Nine
.:).
I've been a fan of three feet since the begging, it's an amazing story.
Like yours.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *is happy to have her story compared to 3 Feet*rn
Date: 10/11/09 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 2: Age Nine
Wow bill's dad is so fucked up!!
Author's Response: Yeah, and he's gonna fuck Bill up, too XD