Date: 02/01/10 12:32 am Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
Ha! You know, I'll read anything, including things that I'm not partial to. (Meaning Jorg/Bill pairings)
Suffice it to say, that I only read it bc it was YOURS.
And I was not dissapointed.
Now! Off to that sequel that I see you posted!
Author's Response: Sounds like me >_< Why do I ALWAYS end up reading Major Character Death?! D: I keep holding out for a happy ending, but noooo
And the fact that you read it because it was mine made my heart flutter happily ^_^ Thanks :)
Date: 02/01/10 12:30 am Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
I enjoyed reading this story, all ten chapters without stopping. Simone's a bitch, usually i tend to be sympathetic on her thinking of how hard it'd be to face your twins are in love, but in this story... I hated her.
I consider myself lucky cause you've already started writing the sequel -which I will also read today-
Kisses, hugs and thousands of thanks for sharing your talent!!
Velia
Author's Response: Simone's gonna continue to be a bitch, too >:D It's not often that people choose Jorg over Simone...and part of the purpose of the fic is to show that it's not always like that :3 Thanks for reading!
Date: 02/01/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 8: Age 15, Part 1
Finally he got what he wanted, what will the consecuences be in teh morning, I wonder.
Let's read to find out!
Author's Response: You'll see! And I think it was a long time in coming, don't you? xD
Date: 01/31/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 6: Age 13
Now we know how the tight-clothing style started. In his favor, I have to say the do fit him well.
Nobody suspects a bit of what's going in Bill's mind, uh? Are they still thinking of him as a too young innocent boy?
Author's Response: Of course! >:D Or they assume he's trying to get a boy at school lol
Date: 01/31/10 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 5: Age Twelve
Well, he was a bitch at twelve, after that? I'll have to read the next chapter to know, right? Why didn't anybody came in the moment they were kissing? It would have bought his rep up.
Author's Response: He WAS a bitch at twelve! ^_^ Lol
Date: 01/31/10 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 3: Age Ten
I liked the chapter. The beatings I didn't but, I understand that are necessary to show the strenght and determination of Bill about his new aspect.
***I think I have to take an English couse again... I had to look for ucky in the dictionary, the sad thing is I didīnīt quite understand the explanation... ***
Kisses!
Author's Response: ucky is like...yucky. xD Something you really don't like lol. I think it's mainly a fanfiction word anyway :3
Date: 01/31/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 2: Age Nine
What can I say? I can't still understand all the messy toughts of Jorg, but I'm sure he'll regret bringing all the revenge thing on his son one day. Maybe.
See u next chap!
Author's Response: Well, he's still grieving over Simone (because he loved her so much) and slightly pissed that she left...
Date: 11/26/09 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
:D
That was a good ending. Could be better, but it was good. I'd have liked it better if it was sad and anticlimatic, like Jorg ended up leaving Bill there or something. I don't know. That's just me.
But gahhhhhh Zaubermaus.
Author's Response: Lol You'll love the sequel, then. ^_^
Date: 11/26/09 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 9: Age 15, Part 2
Okay, I lied I guess xD Because apparently they are in America. I'm so unobservant, it's terrible. But yeah. You've got me excited for the sequel ;] Tom/Bill smut is always more fun to read than Jorg/Bill smut xD
Oh, and I did read 3' by 3' :D
Author's Response: Isn't it amazing?
...I don't think I'm done with the Jorg/Bill pairing yet, though D: So it might be a while before I er...start the sequel. And by 'awhile'...I mean January >.>
Date: 11/26/09 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 8: Age 15, Part 1
:O
That was...hot xD I hate to say it but Jorg/Bill sex the way you write it was really amazing. You wrote it amazingly well. There was just one thing I found wrong with it:
Okay, I didn't mean my tattoo when I said 'it', but thanks to the English language...
If they're in Germany, it shouldn't be the English language .___. Unless it's set in America which I don't remember reading anywhere...but yeah, that's the only thing I found wrong with it.
...andIdecidedtostartwritingKCagain
:P
Author's Response: It's set in America XD I just never mentioned it, I think. Except how I might have mentioned that Tom moved to Germany a while back with Simone. :)
...andiloveyou. Happy Thanksgiving :)
...andImightwritesomemoreJorgBillstuff :)
Date: 11/21/09 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
OMG! This story is... I'm too lazy to explain how awesome dis story is. But I'm so glad your writing a sequel!! YAY!
Author's Response: Lol Thanks! I'm still stuck on the Bill/Jorg pairing, though, so it might take awhile XD
Date: 11/20/09 03:38 am Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
woohoo!!! that was awesome
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/15/09 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.:DDDDD.
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't think I'm done with Jorg/Bill enough to do the sequel yet. I might be doing some side stories before then XD
Date: 11/15/09 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
good fanfic. Love ya
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^
Date: 11/15/09 09:52 am Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
I loved being your beta. Thank you lol. Ahhhh this is really the end...and the beginning haha. This story was so amazing and I can't wait to read ME. and 4 degrees of homosexuality does sound really interesting. I was reading your bio when I came across that. I can't wait for that too. :) . But again, thank you for letting me beta this.
*hugs & kisses* - Fragile
Author's Response: Lol You'll beta ME when I have doubts, too, right? LOL XD
Date: 11/15/09 08:13 am Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
4 Degrees of Homosexuality sounds really interesting! Really sad, but intriguing ending, I'll be awaiting the sequel!
Author's Response: Thanks! That makes two for 4 Degrees :)
Date: 11/15/09 08:12 am Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
This story is a great narrative. You've written it all, not just as Bill's POV, but as if he were actually talking to the reader. Sometimes the coloquel-ness of writing like that feels cheap, but I think u made it work well here. The story itself isn't a heroic work of art, but it's a good narrative, and it was really good at keeping me interested in reading, to see how exactly Jorg falls for his son... especially since it was really easy to know where the story was going. I never thought I'd be reading father/son incest and liking it... I don't find it hot, I'm neutral, but it's very intreguing and u did make it very interesting to read. Thank You for writing, and I will def be reading the twincest sequal!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I really appreciate your in-depth reviews of my work ^_^ I honestly don't write much more than twincest these days (IT'S ADDICTIVE, OKAY?!), but I constantly try to expand my horizons and change fic-writing styles (as seen in the Jail Series). I'm trying to do a real-time sequel, so we'll see how THAT works out XD
Date: 11/15/09 08:08 am Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
ok so usually i dont really like Bill/Jorg fics but this one got me hooked with the first word *grins* probably cause its you XD but yeah i cant wait for the sequel even though you said it was going to be TWIN-cesty yay!! go you!!
Author's Response: Lol So there might be possible side stories to go with this fic...maybe XD (Jorg/Bill)
And you were hooked because it's me? *happiness*
Date: 11/15/09 07:16 am Title: Chapter 10: Age 17
Aw NaH!!!!! That was the best, though i know bILL WILL break his dad's heart!!!
Ah bliss!!! Sequel please? ^^
Author's Response: Er...I have three paragraphs typed now? XD
Idk it's possible he might...it's possible he'll break Tom's heart instead. Who knows?
Date: 11/12/09 11:19 am Title: Chapter 9: Age 15, Part 2
At least he wasn't blown off - I sat reading the entire thing, dreading for the moment Jorg got home!!! ><
PLEASE DON'T BREAK HIS HEART JORG!!!!! Ooo I wonder how the twincest wil work with the dad/son thing? Or won't they be together anymore??
Continue!!! I'm getting headaches with all this not knowing!!! >< ><
Author's Response: I honestly have YET to figure it out, but I'm guessing heartbreaking scene between SOMEONE XD