Date: 10/11/09 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
This fic was sad,depressing at least that's what I think.Ok,I'm not the biggest fan of twincest,so in the end I was quite satisfied that their relationship actually ended(...I know I'm very cold hearted now).If I would start analyze what you wrote , there are a lot of things I would have to say.This passion that was in them some time ago , but somehow it's still present , in some moments when they look at each other, I think it's so real.I went through something like this too , obliviously with some big differences , but that feeling of al coming back if you take a good look to that person has happened to me too (and I think to a lot of other people too)so that's why I like this fic.You always write about feelings that are real , without exagerating them , or making them out of common,I like that.Even if the feelings in this fic are more complex than what I said here, but I just took the easiest way.
Well, now I really want a Tom/OFC fic , or something like that , I miss a good fic written by you.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading :) I really appreciate it. And I understand what you're trying to say cause I've been there too. You're feelings for someone may not be as strong as in the past but you still have some sort of connection with that person. rnNow about another Tom/OFC fic I don't know how long will it take me to come up with a new one so I can't really promise anything.
Date: 10/10/09 11:51 am Title: Chapter 1
It was hard to read. First of all, I'm thinking abput you as a het writer, so... it was a little bit strange, and I hope that you'll keep writing het. But this story is painful. Sad. And you can always make tears falling down. And this time... No tears,cause I'm never crying for slash stories *dunno why, I just can't*, but it's like emptiness inside of me.
I love your writing. I love the way you writing. I love your stories. Thank u for this one, cause I've already thought that maybe you stop writing and this gave me hope that I can expect for more.
Thank you.
Author's Response: Well... it was hard to write. I'm not very comfortable writing slash-twincest stories but this idea came to me and voila :)) thank you for reading
Date: 10/08/09 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
djdljdjk This was SO SAD. But so well written!
Christ, I'm almost crying here. The last lines were so bitter and upsetting. I also thought it might have been a suicide note up until then, but wow, this was certaintly powerful and intense. This was wonderful on so many levels, even if it was utterly depressing. Amazing job
Author's Response: Thank you :)rn
Date: 10/08/09 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was wonderfull. Sad, yes, but wonderfull.
Author's Response: I aimed for sad... and wonderfull :)) glad you liked it
Date: 10/08/09 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow.
I just happened to be listening to 'Zoom into me' while reading this, which made it much worse. That last line was so bitter and upsetting ;_; Poor bbs.
Great job, hun. Loved it
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) thanks
Date: 10/08/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This is very powerful stuff. At first I thought it might be a suicide note or something like that, but as I got to the end and read that last line, it was just...wow. That's all I can say ^_^ wow, wow, wow. It was really intense. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 10/08/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fuck, omg. I knew I shouldn't have read twincest from you, your het stories are very heartbreaking but Tom and Bill....;.;
I'm crying! Fucking Tom! I love the way you write, it's so mesmerizing and complex, in a good way. I really get lost in the words or what you mean by them.
Great story, I love it. You should do slash more often, even though your het is amazing as well.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm still new at this slash-twincest thing, it is my first actually, and I have to admit I'm not very comfortable in writing it but I gave it a try so I'm really glad you liked it :)
Date: 10/08/09 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
it was sad, really sad. I mean, how can they not love eachother. Cant you do a sequil to it? Very emotional and well written. good job
Author's Response: Thank you :)