Date: 11/03/09 10:19 am Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
I love this Tom, he's great. I look forward to more. :D
Author's Response: yeah,, i think this is my fav Tom too! Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/03/09 10:19 am Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
I love this Tom, he's great. I look forward to more. :D
Author's Response: :D Thanks for the review! [again!]
Date: 11/03/09 08:52 am Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
I laughed my ass off almost the whole way through that. :'D
Author's Response: I laughed so hard writing this I had a headache! Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/03/09 06:08 am Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
zomg sugar! this is so fucking cute!! i love Tom trying to seduce Bill, maybe itll happen again? OH! i fucking love the part where you had Tom admit he read fan fiction, and then had him proceed with their story lines!!! i laughed so fucking hard!!! i love you sugar!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey honeysugarcookiecake goddess! And yes, more seducing to come and yes, Tom reads fanfiction! I'm happy I made you LOL!
Date: 11/03/09 05:35 am Title: DAY 1 - "You must be Bill. Bill Trumper, right?”
"apparently to them I’m a vampire, I’m a lunatic that murdered like 397 people, I’m kidnapping kids, I’m fucking dead horses, I’m really a girl if you splash water on me, I’m a mute, I have a Snuggie, I’m a cake-shop owner, I’m pregnant, I’m a total dick to my son, I’m a doll or I’m fucking a doll, I ordered a freaking bride-boy, I'm a doctor/pedophile,I'm in an interactive murder mystery, I’m a janitor in a crazy house kidnapping patients, I have a twin brother that I fuck like crazy since birth—and I don’t tell mom, and in every freaking story, I’m STILL a slut?!”
Okay.. that.. that..*laughs* is the best thing ever. Ever. Best I've ever read x'D I recognize so many fics in there. I was like 'oh, read that. And that. And that. That one I read twice....' x'D He's really read a lot, hasn't he? And you're so right about the still a slut thing, lol!
*Reads on*
“I really thought I you were going to go all fanfiction on me and kidnap me!” - HAHAHAHA! And Tom's "L.O.L" made me L.O.L as well.
Hahaha all in all.. you're awesome xD
Date: 11/03/09 04:39 am Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
lmao, I laughed hella at this one.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/03/09 03:16 am Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
I loved all the stories you listed! I was dying while reading it and was like 'read that, read that, .....'. Lol. This was a good chapter! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I loved those stories too [seeing that I wrote two of the ones mentioned]
Date: 11/03/09 01:04 am Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
LOL! I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm happy you loved it!
Date: 11/03/09 12:35 am Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
This made my night. I got so excited when I noticed you updated.
This was hilarious. OMG you must be have like such a great sense of humor because the stuff you write on here. You made both Tom and Bill's characters hilarious in their own way. I busted out laughing the part of Bill in school with his mic...“Because it’s…the dick to my balls?” The whole pick up line thing... funnest thing ever.
Oh I liked how you mentions fanfics from the site. I obviously spend too much time on here because I knew of all the ones you mentioned.
Anyways, I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Author's Response: I am a hilarious person, I'll admit :D. And all the fanfics nods, were to show a little token of appreciation to the life of the fandom. LOL. LD thanks for the review.
Date: 11/02/09 11:11 pm Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
Great chapter! Funny too...*sit's and wait's for next update*
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm happy you thought it was funny!
Date: 11/02/09 10:39 pm Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
Haha!!!
Date: 11/02/09 10:31 pm Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
So I've thought this was an interesting story from the beginning, but after reading the little speal about fanfiction, I knew I had to comment and tell you how much I love this story :)
I'm recently getting over a cough and everytime I laugh I start coughing really really badly, and during this chapter I think I went into a 20 minute coughing fit and my mom even tried to come over to see if I was alright.
Great job.
Author's Response: Oh gosh! I'm sorry! Don't die! LOL next chap I'll give u a special shot out for all ur trouble! :)
Author's Response: Oh gosh! I'm sorry! Don't die! LOL next chap I'll give u a special shot out for all ur trouble! :)
Date: 11/02/09 10:16 pm Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
Okay, I read the first 3 chapters of this and I think it's great! The writing is very simple, but I don't really mind because the storyline is so unique and the characters are really entertaining.
I love shy little Bill, and Tom is just absolutely amazing XD I love his attitude and what he was teaching Bill in chapter 2. And I started laughing hysterically in chapter 3 when Bill said why he couldn't give up the microphone XD And his terrible pick up line.
Like, what I told you to put your toupee away?
I think you meant "What IF I told you", right? Minor mistake, but just pointing it out so you can fix it :)
Oh, and I also laughed at the references to all the other fics XD Haha, this is interesting, keep it coming!
Author's Response: Yeah, the writing's simple only because i have to imagine my self as seventeen year-old Bill who's shy. it'll develop with his confidence. Oh and thanks, I fixed that line :) Thanks for the review too!
Date: 11/02/09 10:07 pm Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
hahahah tom!! your mom is hot!!! whta the fuck with that!! XD
please continue!!
love this story!! i want to see more of tomxbill !!! XD
Author's Response: Tom is an honest person? Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/02/09 10:05 pm Title: Day 4 - “Because it’s…the dick to my balls?”
I know I said it in the last chapter (at least I think I did?) but I really, really, reeeeeeaaaaally love the Tom you've created here. :D
I was literally cracking up hysterically at the references to the different fics. XD
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D i'm happy i made you LOL
Date: 10/29/09 08:28 pm Title: DAY 3 - “What’s so important about cupcakes?”
'Make those duckies shit themselves!'
That has to be my favorite line in a ff EVER! keep writng please!x
Author's Response: you liked it, really? That was so random to me! Thanks!
Date: 10/29/09 06:46 pm Title: DAY 3 - “What’s so important about cupcakes?”
Awww....poor bill....wicked entrance tom......most of this was adorable.....can't wait for more
Author's Response: =D
Date: 10/29/09 05:06 pm Title: DAY 3 - “What’s so important about cupcakes?”
lol thats too cute
cant wait for mondayyy :D
Author's Response: Yay, it's monday!! :D
Date: 10/29/09 04:17 pm Title: DAY 3 - “What’s so important about cupcakes?”
Omg this is goin to be awesomeee!!!!!!!!!!
I love it already :)
awesome awesome awesome
great ideaaaa...
while i was readin . I could picture the whole thing in my head,i can imagine this thing happenin XD
''Hey Im Bill Trumper and i wnat to be made in to a Rockstar''
so fantastic!!!
I love Tom's attitude!
Update soon plzz
xoxo
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really trying to create that MADE persona! Thanks for your review too!
Date: 10/29/09 02:43 pm Title: DAY 3 - “What’s so important about cupcakes?”
I love this Tom. Seriously. *wipes happy tears*
Author's Response: LOL, as Tom would say. "Aw, don't go emo on me!"
