Date: 12/12/09 02:04 am Title: DAY 11 - 12 - "I'm Dante and I'm your MADE coach."
Way to go Tom!!!!!!! Dante deserved that, plus a little more!
I'm hoping this mean's he will be Tom's coach again..or maybe not-if he has fallen for Bill and find's an awesome replacement coach--thank you for the update!
Date: 12/12/09 01:56 am Title: DAY 11 - 12 - "I'm Dante and I'm your MADE coach."
yay...more reviews= fast posts.... i'm glad bill and tom are at least talking and now its really obvious that tom wants him...i wonder what ppl at bill's school are going to think of tom's little outburst...and queen is a rock band with a gay lead singer...so was this tom's stand on gay rights or am i reading into this way to much???? idk chapter 8, chapter8, chapter 8!!!! lol
Date: 12/12/09 01:42 am Title: DAY 11 - 12 - "I'm Dante and I'm your MADE coach."
Oh Tom.. You didn't have to keep yourself away from Bill.. You're perfect together!!XD
Hahahahaha..XD A scandal, but a good one.^^ Such a good update!! hopefully Bill and Tom will be reunited sooooon!!^^ *huggles*
Date: 12/12/09 01:38 am Title: DAY 11 - 12 - "I'm Dante and I'm your MADE coach."
OMG!!!!!! This chapter was hilarious at the end and really sad atthe begining and middle....stupid to
for leaving bill for stupid reasons, stupid bill for blowing up and not talking and possibly picking his made coach... But it all happens for a reason right? I Loved the end, I'm glad tom called bill HIS song bird..... Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 12/12/09 01:31 am Title: DAY 11 - 12 - "I'm Dante and I'm your MADE coach."
I had been grinning like an idiot when Tom went after Dante, but at the final line about staying away from his songbird I became all teary eyed and was like "Awwwww!! :,D" I loved it. Can't wait for the next part! :3
Date: 12/12/09 01:27 am Title: DAY 11 - 12 - "I'm Dante and I'm your MADE coach."
Awwww!
Cant wait for the next chappie!!! :)
Date: 12/12/09 01:25 am Title: DAY 11 - 12 - "I'm Dante and I'm your MADE coach."
Can't wait to read more!
And aw, Tom's so in love. ^^
Quick question: You said that this is your last fic. Does that mean that you're not going to finish your others? Just wondering, because I really enjoy "Sturdy Wings", and am just wondering if it's going to be completed. :)
Author's Response: By the new year all my loose fics will be done. And I'm updating SW Monday. The wait is not my fault! LOL go attack Grimaldi >,<
Date: 12/12/09 01:24 am Title: DAY 11 - 12 - "I'm Dante and I'm your MADE coach."
gASp! dante's a little bitch! lol. he got what he deserved ^__^
Author's Response: :D exactly! Oh, and here's your Support Tomii :D
Date: 12/11/09 08:26 am Title: DAY 10 - “Are…are you inviting me?”
aww who ever wrote that mean review can go shove cake up there ass and poop it out there ears. then they can shove it up there nose and and dance to 99 red baloons naked wearing nothing but honey over them.... then i will do magic and make all the bee's in the word come over and sting them!!!!!!
ok... that went a little to farr. but i hope you get the point! =] keep writing the story! it is awsome if you stop writting ill cry...
Author's Response: XD, you are cut-throat! [can i use that 99 red ballons, bit? for next chap?!] :3 thanks for the review, hon!
Date: 12/10/09 04:18 pm Title: DAY 1 - "You must be Bill. Bill Trumper, right?”
Hey this is a realy cool story, I love it! And don´t be upset about such reviews, I think every FF writer gets a negativ review sooner or later. I got a real bad one, i was realy shocked about it. But who cares you got reader that loves your story!
Date: 12/10/09 01:35 am Title: DAY 10 - “Are…are you inviting me?”
wwhy!!!!!!!!
evil cliff hanger
whyyyyy
Author's Response: Because I have to evil eventually! :3 thanks for the review, hon!
Date: 12/09/09 08:03 pm Title: DAY 10 - “Are…are you inviting me?”
Dang. Crap review. I love this story, but it's up to you how quickly you get it to me. Enjoy you're life and don't worry about you're readers (well obviously respect them, but you know what I mean... I hope). I feel bad for slightly abandoning a fic I'm doing because I lost my hard drive, holidays, and exams. But I'm hoping my readers won't kill me for it, seeing as I update in the end. So I just wanna say as a reader/follow writer screw said person, because you can have all the life you want!! That being said, thank you for entertaining me! I love this story, and can't wait for more (when it eventually arrives) Have a happy holiday season- you freakin deserve one! (Sorry for the rant, I'm a lil pissy in general and I feel the need to write that out)
Okay byes!!! XD
Author's Response: Finally! you understand me! Dnt worry i loved your rant! :3 thanks for the review, hon!
Date: 12/09/09 06:49 pm Title: DAY 10 - “Are…are you inviting me?”
I was so happy when I saw this story was updated :). Keep up the good work, can't wait to know what's gonna happen with Tom & Bill!
Author's Response: :3 thanks for the review, hon!
Date: 12/09/09 06:22 pm Title: DAY 10 - “Are…are you inviting me?”
WTF noooo why is tom leaving bill as his coach T_T nooo please post soon!!! T_T :]
Author's Response: :D i like your reviews :3
Date: 12/09/09 05:28 pm Title: DAY 10 - “Are…are you inviting me?”
Ignore the haters, they're just jealous! Loadsof people LOVE tis fic, including me, it's a realy smart idea and very well written! Keep up the great work!
GASP! TOM!!! NOOOOO!!!!
Author's Response: Aww! Thanks! Thanks for the review! Sorry I'm late!
Date: 12/09/09 05:22 pm Title: DAY 10 - “Are…are you inviting me?”
I can no longer be your MADE coach. Sorry.
OH HELLS NO, I'd being going for the freakin' CUNT.
Author's Response: lol!!! WTF?! Thanks for the review! Sorry I'm late!
Date: 12/09/09 04:30 pm Title: DAY 10 - “Are…are you inviting me?”
luv it ooo what tomiiiiiiiiii lol please continue
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Sorry I'm late!
Date: 12/09/09 04:24 pm Title: DAY 10 - “Are…are you inviting me?”
NOES TOMMMMM D': write soon! lol darn u and ur cliffy DX
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Sorry I'm late!
Date: 12/09/09 04:12 pm Title: DAY 10 - “Are…are you inviting me?”
MEIN LIEBE
i jst danced the jigg wen i saw u updated...it makes me happi to no u're givin up ur tym to write it...so bwt that review made public...SCREW DA ASSWHOLE >X(
dick move...
omg wow this story took a turn for the cool-bill BT waaaah...i lvd picturin tom as billa's coachi...bt i guess u hv summin realli xitin in stall...so i AIN'T complainin XP
Author's Response: ::dances:: Thanks for understanding! Thanks for the review! Sorry I'm late!
Date: 12/09/09 03:45 pm Title: DAY 10 - “Are…are you inviting me?”
This was completely amazing, your stories are amazing :D
And sorry if ani of us fans of this story or any other of your stories, come across too strong, we all realise that you have your own life but we just can't wait till you put ur brilliant mind to work and post more chapters.
Well aniway, i hope that, that one review won't put u off of writing fiction, and plzzzzzzzz don't let the smexy tom, who became an asshole lol leave poor billy :S x
Author's Response: Thanks you soo much! you really made me feel better! Thanks for the review! Sorry I'm late!