Reviews For Moonlight and Lies
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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

this is a good story!
i cant wait tell u post more!

Reviewer: VampSenn Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/09 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Crack fic galore! Though, may I make a suggestion?? A bit more dialogue. People tend to lose interest when there's just body paragraphs and no dialogue. :]

Author's Response: I'm getting there. I'm trying to write too many stories at once (under threats of death) and deal with school, work, and being seriously ill. I think I should have rewritten the first chapter because I wrote that while very sick..

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Uh oh. I wonder... curious to read more. Need more information to really review, but the banter was cute.

Author's Response: Yea, I know I'm not really revealing much of anything yet, but I've been seriously ill and that kinda killed my creativity. I'm glad to see you reviewing though and I shall work harder now that I'm better.

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/09 03:36 am Title: Prelude

Omg.... ... PLEAASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! This story is so mysterious.

Author's Response: Eeep! I will try to do so!

Reviewer: VampSenn Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 11:56 pm Title: Prelude

Oooh, I like! Write more!

Author's Response: I thank you for the review, and I am writing more as I get the time.

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 12:48 pm Title: Prelude

Uh Oh. Interesting. This must have been keeping Tom a wake and in turn woke Bill, but I'm curious as to what will happen next. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Many thanks for reviewing!

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