Date: 06/18/08 06:02 pm Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
Awww, this is awesome! Why dont you finish it?? I really like it so far!!!
Date: 05/28/08 11:03 am Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
awww.. poor Tom!
awesome story!
~ golden_leafs
Date: 05/14/08 04:38 pm Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
Awww! ;.; Poor Tom! Little does he know that Bill only said it like that because he thinks it's how Tom wants it! ;.; I hope you update soon! I love this! =]
Date: 04/20/08 07:44 pm Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
awwww. Bill is so naive that it's cute 
Like, of course I love you Tomi. You're my brother 
huggles imaginary Bill
Atleast Tom told him his feelings. I'm sure that it's a mutual feeling. God this is such a wonderful story. I love it. Can't wait for your next update. Good job with this chapter 
~Ria 
Date: 04/20/08 07:21 pm Title: Best Brother Ever
squeals Yes, I like this "Brothers with benefits deal" 
It's like eating cold chocolate covered strawberries on a hot summers day
lol @ the thought of them believing that a relationship with strings will not start to form. They are so living in denial
see you in the next chapter
~Ria
Date: 04/20/08 07:06 pm Title: The Proposition
Wow... is this really what I think it is? gulps slowly
naïve Bill is cute 
I have a feeling I'm going to be enjoying this story more than I should
Let the hottness begin... and I'm so liking the way you started this. In character and very eye-catching 
~Ria 
Date: 03/11/08 08:19 am Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
Aw man!
Bill neeeeeeds to understand what Tom's saying.
And he neeeeeds to say it back. The way Tom means it. So there can be lots of cute and fluffy twin time :D
Date: 03/04/08 12:26 pm Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
aahhh!!! so hot and yet so CUTE!
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Date: 03/04/08 09:57 am Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
O.o Is Bill and idiot? Like seriously? Poor Tom, having to confess and then Bill totally misunderstanding. Though, that would be a REALLY cofusing situation.
Date: 03/04/08 05:57 am Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
Oh, they're both so silly. They both feel the same way but they're still pretending it's only about the benefits. When we can all see it's love!
I was really happy when I saw you'd updated this. I love it!! ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 03/04/08 03:44 am Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
Very cute!!
I feel so bad for Tom.
I hope Bill will fugure out Tom's true feelings.
This is hot yet awesomely sweet!
Date: 03/04/08 02:06 am Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
Silly boys. ;)
Date: 03/04/08 12:59 am Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
oh my goooooooooood
it's here, it's here, it's here *chantig and doing victory dance*
I've been so scared that you wasn't going to update and then THIS my it was...I can't even explane it...there's no words meaningful enough
I felt so sorry for Bill in the last chapter and then in this we get to see that Tom feels the exct same thing, sooooo cute !!!
and poor guys for being so insecure about it all :)
I laughed so hard at the Georg thingie, it's awsome that you put in these little aspects to make the story more colourfu...it really gives the reader alot
and the little philosofical part *dreamy eyes* somehow it fited so well and it jst added to the wickedness of the situation ;)
the sex is as always AMAZING and oh so hot
and the I love you thing, so heartbraking, Tom shows his feelings and then Bill doesn't respond the way he had hoped (although I think Bill would have had he not been so scared of his own feelings.
It was really sweet when they were in denial and the reader got to see how their feelings developed and then Tom finally realized and came out *smles goofily* their great arn't they
honey I must tell you that this story is one of the best things I have ever read and I do hope you will continue still or else I might have to kill my computer and no one wants to see that happen ;)
Much love Lucy on Fire
Date: 02/03/08 10:57 am Title: Best Brother Ever
aaaaahhhhh *smiles warmly and sinks down into chair* now I am seriously pleased and in order to keep you going and not forgetting *rolls eyes* like last time I intend to tell you just how wonderful this really was.
First of all LOVE you for recovering my sanity !!! secound of all this is so GOOD I mean come on who can't totally melt when they read about the twins in these hot and sweet moments :) you write their characters in such a beautiful way and I am dying to read more ;)
and the damn butterflies in the stomach thing LOVE it, absolutly amazing and please let Bill have it his way next time...no clothes. sweety you might have just saved my life THANK YOU :D
Author's Response: Ah, the one review I was expecting. ^_^ Well, I couldn't live with the knowledge that I was driving someone insane, so of course I had to restore your sanity! =D Lol, well.. I do believe that Bill is the type of person who can get his way, so things will probably turn out the way he wants next time. =D Aw, thanks! Hopefully I won't take like.. a month for the next update! I will NOT forget about it this time, I swear. =]
Date: 02/02/08 07:54 pm Title: Best Brother Ever
Wow, even though you never actually write a complete sex scene, you made it seem like i just did.
The way you described everything was just perfect.
It was passionate and loving, which was adorable.
i love how you have them both questioning their new feelings for each other.
truth be told, i love that confusion, you write it so well :)
great job love ^_^
Author's Response: Hah, I beat around the bush when it comes to writing sex scenes 'cause I'm mooching off of other's stories... Otherwise I have no knowledge of it. But I'm glad it's working for you. Awww, thanks. =]
Date: 02/02/08 03:39 pm Title: Best Brother Ever
This is really good. Can't wait for next chapters! Thanks!
Author's Response: Lol, well thank YOU for the review. =D
Date: 02/02/08 12:44 pm Title: Best Brother Ever
So glad you continued it!! It was really good!!! This is a good story, keep it up!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I will.
Date: 02/02/08 11:27 am Title: Best Brother Ever
Learn to love?? i think he already does, hehe. i loved it!!
Author's Response: Lol, you're right; he might already love it. Thanks, I'm glad you love it!
Date: 02/02/08 11:26 am Title: Best Brother Ever
soooooooooo GOOD!!!!
omg!!!
No paparazzi jumped out from behind the bathroom door with flashing cameras yelling, “Gotchya!”
I LAUGHED SO MUCH BECAUSE OF THIS!!! xD
BRILLIANT!! and HOT
Author's Response: Haha, thank you!! =D
Date: 02/02/08 11:03 am Title: Best Brother Ever
This is not over. Go make more. XD
Author's Response: Hah, I will. =D