Date: 06/25/08 01:10 pm Title: Make Me.
i giggled and smiled through the whole chapter.
what have you done to me? XD
Date: 06/25/08 12:54 pm Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
huuuuuw poor thingie Tom... *thongie tim?? xD*
Date: 06/25/08 12:44 pm Title: Best Brother Ever
ngaaaaaaaaaaaaw *moaaaans and pants* okey *respects people around...* Niiice C:
Date: 06/25/08 12:36 pm Title: The Proposition
Uuuuuuew C: I luuuurve it C:really logical plot you got there xD
Date: 06/25/08 11:54 am Title: Make Me.
Oh of course it ends on a cliff hanger. It really is lovely, but it's better as a short story and not drawn out for too long. Very cute, great job.
Date: 06/25/08 11:30 am Title: Make Me.
GASP! OH JEEZ! You know you can't take forever after something like that! The little break before was okay, as long as you update again soon! *screams* Please?
Date: 06/25/08 11:22 am Title: Make Me.
aaawwww this was an awesome chapter :D
finally things are progressing! i love how they're both slightly confused but yet still confident about it all ^_^
so realistic and just peerfect :)
it's great, you should update this one more often XD
Date: 06/25/08 11:21 am Title: Make Me.
Tom shakes his head and turns around to leave, but he spins back around with an offer. “Do you need me to find you a girl?” he asks with a brotherly smile on his face. He’s just trying to help. He hates seeing Bill back here all alone, so he might as well help him right now the best way that he can.
Bill glances up at Tom from beneath a thick glare.
“No.”
“A boy?”
“Tom!”
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That made me laugh!! lol
And then Tom spelling out Benefits with the hangman. I knew something good was going to happen. and ohhhh yes it did. SOOO HAWT.
Date: 06/25/08 10:50 am Title: Best Brother Ever
The world didn’t end; it kept on spinning.
An airplane didn’t crash into their hotel.
People didn’t die, wars didn’t break out, no bombs exploded.
No police kicked down the hotel door and entered with handcuffs to arrest them for their wrongdoings.
No paparazzi jumped out from behind the bathroom door with flashing cameras yelling, “Gotchya!”
That's exactly how i would feel if they really did have something going on :P
Lovely idea
Date: 06/25/08 09:32 am Title: Make Me.
Ahhh!!! You updated!!!! *squeee!*
This was a fantastic chapter!! I LOVE the last part, homg, awesome!!!
Date: 06/25/08 09:00 am Title: Make Me.
ooooh i wanna know if Tom heard him! more please. asap
Date: 06/25/08 06:47 am Title: Make Me.
Aw~ sweet chapter! ^^
I like the way Tom made him guess the word "benefits", the way Bill sang it, and how they're testing each other!
And the end! Aw~ so cute!
Great chapter! *-*
Date: 06/25/08 06:41 am Title: Make Me.
I just read your story and I totally love it :D I was wondering when someone wrote something like this.
They should know that something like benefits wouldn't last. Or they just stop doing it and never be the same again or they fall in love :-p
Seem like the twins are definitely in love. That was so cute when Bill said I love you to Tom. I just love the way that you write this story so I hope you will condtinue as fast as you can :D
Date: 06/25/08 05:09 am Title: Make Me.
AW JEEZ. That made my eyes water!!! So frickin ROMANTIC at the end!! I LOVE IT. I'm so glad that they brought their troubled thoughts to the surface =]
OMG. Ker-FAAAAAAAVE~
Date: 06/25/08 04:53 am Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
oh gosh I love the simile about the autographs and the fans in the beginning x'D
Aww poor Bill, you ARE that stupid =[
*pats his oblivious litto head*
Date: 06/25/08 04:36 am Title: Best Brother Ever
Their first night was suuuuper cute!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Especially since we're constantly reminded of the change in their relationship *w*
Date: 06/25/08 04:32 am Title: Make Me.
*flails*
IT'S BACK!!!
Aw jeez, how sweet, all cuddled up like lovers :D
I hope the next update comes sooner, I NEEEED to know what Tom's thinking!
Date: 06/25/08 04:27 am Title: The Proposition
*trembles with excitement* H'OMG. I'm almost SCARED to see what happens next!! BUT I CAN'T STOP!! O___O
Date: 06/25/08 04:08 am Title: The Proposition
Oh my, this is a new twist on things. I'm excited to see how this turns out! -Races off to the next chapter-
Date: 06/21/08 02:02 am Title: Tom Needs His Ladies.
ohh, I want more, pretty, pretty please.