Date: 10/06/09 02:28 am Title: Chapter #1
Well I think you have a nice name. It's very original.
Jezzabella is the name of a famous strip joint in the states so yeah ;)
Update soon.
Love Jezzabella
Author's Response: LOL, thank you. Your's is pretty, too, but you should probably not tell people about the strip joint part ;)
Date: 10/05/09 11:27 pm Title: Chapter #1
i like it. ^^
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
Date: 10/05/09 09:41 pm Title: Chapter #1
I quite enjoyed the start of this. It seems like it'll be a good story. I adored your word choice with everything. I'm looking forward to see how you portray Bill in this.I am quite picky with Bill/OFC just because I've read so man cliche ones. I'm hoping you'll update soon :)
Author's Response: I'm so so so glad you think it's not too cliched!! Thank you so much!! It should be updated soon, I'm thinking just a couple days!!
Date: 10/05/09 12:19 pm Title: Chapter #1
Good Job :D
I like where this is going. You've captured Bill's thoughts wonderfully. Please Update sooooooooon!!! I wanna see what happens. You're a really great author.
Love Jezzabella (my real name)
Author's Response: Thank you! Bill's gonna be a little snob in this! But only for a little while ;) At least your name sounds like girls name, mine Amaryllis, eeewwww! lol Thank you again!
Date: 10/05/09 04:25 am Title: Chapter #1
Looks like a wonderful story in the making. Look foward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll like the next chapters just as much! :)
Date: 10/05/09 01:25 am Title: Chapter #1
I like it so far and hope you continue to update soon. :)
Author's Response: It will be updated soon!! Thank you so much!!
Date: 10/05/09 12:54 am Title: Chapter #1
Good detail. Intriguing. I wonder where you go with it. Keep going; will follow. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! I appreciate your feedback! :)
Date: 10/04/09 11:24 pm Title: Chapter #1
please continue! you've got my attention!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!!! :D There's plenty more to come!