Date: 11/03/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAY just saw you posted it im reading it now!!!! =D
Author's Response: *Does Bill FlutterClap* YAY!!!
Date: 11/03/09 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
yay hugs! But thank fully i haven't gone too insane i should be goood when i read the new chapie =D
Author's Response: Eeep! I am getting it together, as we speak! I promise...ten minutes, tops!- *TSOA*
Date: 10/31/09 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
=( poor bill!! so glad you have are so far on the sequel though. love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! New chapter up in a few minutes! :D
Date: 10/28/09 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ok I have mixed emotions. I love you guys and this chapter was so great but you (T & Bmccray)(Jules blamed it on you 2) have tainted my Coal! I came up with him as a pierced sweetheart and you beaches make him into the bad guy. arggg. xD liebe.
Author's Response: Indeed. LOL!
Date: 10/27/09 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
xD Lolz xD I'm good, bad and ugly, good as well? :P I loved the chap!!! Ha, take that Bill ¬¬ Karma's a bitch, I'll get you one day, karma.... Anywho! I hope you continue soon!! :D
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Karma is an EFFIN Bitch..lol...anywho...sorry for the wait, but new chappie up in a few mins....lol! :D
Date: 10/27/09 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'll look in a second, but I have to tell you, I'm alright, didn't have the swine flu, just a really bad cold xD Lolz xD I'll go read the chapter...
Author's Response: Yuck, I had a bad cold about a month ago. I lost mah voice, and really, just added to why they call me TSOA...lol!
Date: 10/26/09 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG!!!! FUCKING COAL!!!!!!! HOW HE DARE TO TOUCH BILL!!!!!!! X(
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! XD
THANKS!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!
Author's Response: Lol, we are so glad to see such enthusiasm! Indeed, mo fo touched our Bill. *Pats Bill's head..."Pretty Bill..."* LOL, anywho, new chappie up in a few mins!
Date: 10/26/09 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
Man I was scared that would happen...can't wait to see how all this plays out&how what happened to Bill and what Tom chose to do will affect their relationship...
Author's Response: mmm....Bill and Tom will just have to deal a little bit longer...new chappie up in a few mins!
Date: 10/26/09 05:04 am Title: Chapter 6
dude omg you suck!!! ugh coal and ugh!!!! post soon!! im going to go insane wanting to know what happens next!
Author's Response: Whoo! Sorry for the delay, hopefully, you haven't gone insane yet! Hugs! New chappie up in a few mins...we promise!
Date: 10/26/09 04:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey now! Don't say that!!!!! Lol! Your going to make me feel bad for mentioning it! I don't remember most sex scenes unless I read the story a lot. Lol.
Author's Response: o_0 and that's how I feel about that.... *TSOA*
Date: 10/26/09 03:10 am Title: Chapter 6
I dont know what to say! This was heart breakingly good and i hope coal gets his face bashed in! The cindi with an I was funny as hell! good chapter and sorry this is short but you already know my feelings for this story! Lol! Love ya! Update soon!
Author's Response: Awww We love *you*! You're our bff we never even met...lol!
Date: 10/22/09 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
awww what the fuck Bill! post soon!
Author's Response: IKR? New chapter posted! :D Enjoy.
Date: 10/21/09 05:48 am Title: Chapter 5
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!
Next subject: xD I loved the chapter! Hmpf.... Stupid idiot Bill, dating himself (omg loool) Yeah, well, I'm sick and I'm bound to respond weird, please don't mind xD Anywho, I hope you continue soon!! And I hope that Anne has a good birthday!! (oh, wait, had a good birthday, I'm also late x3 I'm so baaaaaad x3)
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Chi....lol! Anne had a great Bday, much love for Anne...anywho...we hope you feel better! Is it swine flu? (Crosses fingers that it's not....) And as for Bill, poor poor Bill. He's such a narcissistic drama queen in this story...lol. And we have posted a new chappie...go see!
Date: 10/20/09 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
HAPPY BIRFDAY T!!!! This chapter is gold, even though I had a sneak peak. xD
COAL WAS SUCH AN AWESOME IDEA! HOW DID U COME UP WITH IT? xD
Author's Response: Hmmm....let us think....was it our dear friend Madi?
Date: 10/20/09 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
I want to scratch bills eyes how he dare to do that to his "tomi" and please do not tell me he is going to fuck that Coal = (whore) well i think if bill is going to do that I believe another character it is need I would love to see Tom with a person who will really loves him instead of a book and just out of the blue falls in love with another guy just because bill is a drama queen. Tomi leave behind that whore named bill in the past... love your story =) (im sorry for my grammar English is not my first language) =)
Author's Response: Aww...your English is awesome! Much love to you for the review, my dear. We thank you!
Date: 10/20/09 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ohz. The end half of the entire story being italicized was annoying, but it was good other than that. Happy birthday to Anne. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Yeaaah. My bad, that wasn't supposed to happen. LOL! 0_o (That's why they call me TSOA.) Anywho...I'll get the italics down next time.....I promise! :P
Date: 10/20/09 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
Mmmmmm why are they fighting!?!!?!? I want them together!!! Please continue!!
Author's Response: Lol, they have to fight...it's the Rules that led them here...lol. Anywho, we did continue....new chappie up NOW! :)
Date: 10/20/09 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
O_o OMG-WTF is Bill thinking?!?! I feel bad for Tom...Bill needs to tell Coal to F off and answer that text...I want to understand what Bill is thinking by doing this...
Author's Response: Bill is a TSOA, dontcha know? Anywho...new chappie up now...Go read! *hugs* Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/20/09 09:28 am Title: Chapter 5
Happy birthday Anne!
Now! This was the best ever! I feel so bad for Tom and Bill of course but more so Tom! I feel sooooooo bad asking for you to put in a OMC with Bill. Now Bill is going to add Tom to the file! I think Tom should soooo date a girl and get engaged or something to piss off Bill.
Is coal going to respect Bills file or no? He should have like an OCD thing going on. I want to know what happens next! If Bill really does do the smut act with coal or no. Jules! This is what should happen for that scene if you and T decided to put it in! Ready!? Ok!
So they get back to the hotel and get a little more wasted. Following me? Ok. So then they make out and coal starts touching Bill like there and Bill doesn't want it. He pushes him off but coal grabs his arms and forces him down on the bed. Mean while The G's and Andi decided to make Tom go and talk to Bill (how he finds what hotel he's in is up to you). So Tom goes up to the fourth floor and magically has a key card. He opens the door and see a horrible sight. Bill almost got raped and Tom heard him say no...stop and stuff. Yeah?
Well that was long review but it's was so worth it. Update soon like Thursday or Friday! Lol. No! For reals! Lol! Oh! Once again happy birthday Anne!!!
Author's Response: You are nutso, but we love you! (Even if we dont have memorable sex scenes....)
Date: 10/16/09 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG! U sent me this song and I never listened to it until now.
Author's Response: It is an awesome power ballad-esque song......