Date: 10/04/09 04:21 am Title: Tom's cream
oh wow, fuck me... okay ja, please write more of this or like it
Date: 10/04/09 03:12 am Title: Tom's cream
LOVE the ending. totally creative XP
Date: 10/04/09 02:29 am Title: Tom's cream
THAT was freaking awesome! And soooooo hot. My god, I need ice water, ice cream...ICE. WHOO!
Please, please write more stories ^_^
I don't know how much you wanna know but, I'll tell you, my favorite part was the dirty talk and the spanking xD
Date: 10/04/09 02:00 am Title: Tom's cream
“No, but not everyone has a horse cock, you know.”
HAHAHAHA I JUST DIED. MORE MORE MORE.
Date: 10/04/09 01:25 am Title: Tom's cream
Oh, btw, my favourite part was the bunny.
I know, rait? In a smut fic, my favourite part is a bunny. I'm weird, arent I?
Date: 10/04/09 01:24 am Title: Tom's cream
I like it. I really liked it.
But once i read the word "cum", immediately, i cringed, and the effect was ruined. The word come is fine. But derogatory "cum" is so...vile sounding. I mean, maybe its just me, but, ick, every time i see it i cant see anything else but that word, and it ruins the story for me.
But ya kno...If i could look past that, this surely is very hot. ^^
~HJ
Date: 10/04/09 12:07 am Title: Tom's cream
*chukles evilly* I can now add that one to of my "favourite last lines" list... gah that was bloody brilliant.
*sigh* I'm feeling vaugely turned on... or maybbe I'm just craving pizza now that I've read this...
Oh well... :D that was fun! *puppy dog eyes* please, xJellyRollx, may I have some moar??
Author's Response: Yes, yes you may! I just gotta tap into my smutty brain and fire up something else x)
Date: 10/03/09 11:49 pm Title: Tom's cream
hahahaha this totally just made having an extremely bad headache and a cancelled marching band competition SOOOO worth putting up with.
i love how Tom had the wrong address!!!! too funny!!!
saturday night smut will never get old!
i love your writing btw!! :DDD
Author's Response: Ah ha, the smut was literally me and IzzyKaulitz going back and forth on MSN x) you can sort of tell the difference~ I had to end the story with him getting the wrong address! I'm happy I made your day :D
Date: 10/03/09 11:39 pm Title: Tom's cream
lol, funniest thing ever! XD
Author's Response: x) I'm happy~
Date: 10/03/09 11:38 pm Title: Tom's cream
BAHAHAHA!
That was fucking hilarious.
And reeeeeeally hawt. ;)
Great job! :D
Author's Response: Woot! :D