Date: 01/12/08 10:19 am Title: Chapter 4
ARGH!!! F*ck!!! Damn!!! Hey, one thing... I know it sounds really really stupid and selfish, but could you add another character. I mean, everytime I read things like this, I imagine that I jump in and change the story, that I'm there for Bill, Tom or anyone who needs help. So... could you try, please??? If you don't want to, I understand. It's just... please??? If you do, I'll give you a discription of myself. Just please, think about it.
Anyway, great story. Write on!
Author's Response: hey there!!! I think i might just be able to fit you in somewhere... it'd b good to have a girl to jump in and save Bill!!! Wanna send me that description and i'll see what i can do!!! ;) I think that would rock!!! Thanks you! Mwah Lawa
Date: 01/12/08 06:18 am Title: Chapter 3
nice...:)
Author's Response: Fank u!!!! n fanks to everyone who's reviewed this story tooo!!!! I would have replyed to all of you but have been busy writing and revising for school unfortunately! :( but thank you for reviewing and i'll keep writing more sooooooon!!! mwahrnluv muchlyrnLawarnxxx
Date: 01/11/08 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aww that's so sad! Poor Bill!
Date: 01/11/08 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
he even protected him!!!!
aaaaaahhh!!! tom...that bitch!! argh!!! I need to kill something before I explode with anger! xD poor bill hasnt done anything to him!!! bitchhh!!!
(very pissed mood)
Date: 01/11/08 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
I ........
hate tom
hate tom
hate tom
hate tom
hate tom
hate tom
hate tom
hate tom
hate tom
hate tom
............SO GODDAMN MUCH RIGHT NOW!!!
how the fuck could he?! just because of the others!!! arghhh!!! I hate people who are easy going by others! xC
good story!!! so angsty and yet so cool!!!!!!! xD
Date: 01/11/08 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
gosh, Tom was such a coward!
I can't believe he hit Bill just to keep his reputation. Boys, they're assholes, most of the times!
I liked the chapter, hope you update soon! :)
Date: 01/11/08 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really like it :D More soon? :)
Date: 01/10/08 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: 01/10/08 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg you can't stop there!! update soon!! =] =]
Date: 01/10/08 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very well written! I like it. I wonder what Tom did to poor Bill! Update soon!
Date: 01/10/08 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
nein! He hit Bill? bad, Bad, BAD Tomi!!! *hugs Bill*
I liked it. =)
*waiting for more*
Date: 01/10/08 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg...you better post a new chapter soon,poor bill:(