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Reviewer: My Tokio Romance Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 03:25 pm Title: Hope

aaaaaaaaw...that was adorable!^^ I hope their conversation (well, the one I suppose they'll have because no issue gets solved without "the talk" xD)goes well!

Author's Response: Why does it always have to be that way? "The talk" allways pisses me off when I have to do it, because it means I don't understand my loved one well enough to get what their behavior means without them having to explain it to me like I'm a retard... ::grumblegrumble:: Anyway, yeah, they'll have the talk in the next chapter, with Otto in to provide the fluffyness.

Reviewer: Ash1986 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/09 04:27 pm Title: Dreamland

I can't wait for more of this story.

Author's Response: hopefully i'll put a new chapter up tomorrow

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/09 02:52 am Title: Dreamland

This is not a Bill I've seen on in fic before and I'm very interested to see where this is going. I like that the story has such an interesting concept and you have some different pairings. The writing is also very well done. I look forward to seeing more of this. :)

Author's Response: thank you very much :). I wrote it because I always read Bill as a good, though slightly awkward parent. I wanted him to be a bad one, even though I knew people might not like the idea of me hurting the baby in the process. ::shrug:: i'm happy with it though. :)

Reviewer: My Tokio Romance Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/24/09 04:09 pm Title: Dreamland

the ending was really breathtaking and you transmitted their pain and sadness wonderfully...I'm expecting their gathering with hope!^^

Author's Response: I am too. I'm worried i won't write it well enough...

Reviewer: theyaylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 04:06 pm Title: My safe haven

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: My Tokio Romance Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 07:47 am Title: My safe haven

I must say that when you started this I felt completely disturbed: not feeling attached to your own baby, oh my God! But now I kind of understand him as I can understand my mother and all the other mothers of the world! Those adaptation periods must be horrible! xD Just hope you don't put Bill and Gusti through too much shit before everything comes back to normal again! ^^ ...Because everything will come back to normal, right? O_o

Author's Response: of course it will. But PPD needs a bit of time to resolve itself and a lot of help and support must be given to Bill for the time to be as short as possible.

Reviewer: hatexhurts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 05:59 pm Title: Our Shangri-La

how long is this story gonna be? will bill get better and start to love otto? will gustav help bill get better. is there going to be a happy ending? please update soon!

Author's Response: lol. I'm not good at giving story lenghts, but I'm not going to make it more than 15 chapters, that's for sure. Gustav will help Bill, don't worry about that. And Bill loves Otto, just has a few issues he needs to get through so he can properly care for his baby again. He'll start getting better soon, just not in the next chapter, I would say. But it's going to be all about the healing from then on. :)

Reviewer: dea253 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 02:07 pm Title: Our Shangri-La

what is worng with bill oh my god give him a drama grammy lol

Author's Response: lol. he's got PostpartumDepression, so he needs a bit of help to pull through

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 01:22 pm Title: Pieces of Eden

Please don't tell me Otto is gone, he needs his mommy and daddy!! :(

Author's Response: He's not gone. Just gone from the chapter. He'll be okay. I can't hurt babies, you know :P

Reviewer: My Tokio Romance Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 01:15 pm Title: Pieces of Eden

The conversation with the doctor was priceless xD, but damn, this story has such a bitter aftertaste...i'm really sorry for the baby! :'(

Author's Response: I'm sorry for him too, but it's gonna be a rather lengthy process before Bill can get better. He'll have to rely on Gustav more, that's it.

Reviewer: IzzyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 06:20 pm Title: Locus amoenus

Awwwwwww, POOR BILL. That's all I have to say! :( Poor thing, I just want to hug him. Of course I feel bad for Otto too, but it's not his fault. *nods*

And I speak a little Romanian, I'm not totally fluent, but I can speak some, and what I don't understand, spreadxthexiubesc translates for me. She's my sister, and for some reason, I just...never really learned. So I never quite know what my grandparents are saying... I can't write it either, I can only speak it. And I still sort of suck at that. I also manage to get out of the trips to Romania, so that might have had a hand in it. Who knows.

ANYWAYS, I am really in love with this, and I feel SO BAD for Bill. D: This is so beautiful, though.

Author's Response: wow, sisters. Didn't see that coming. Tell your grandparents that nepoatele voastre sunt super tari si ma amuza la nebunie. Nu ma puteam astepta sa cunosc atat de tari, care mai si inteleg romana!rnrnIf you ever come to a trip in Romania (where in the country exactly?) you can give me a call and we'll meet up. :DrnrnAnd thank you for liking the fic :)

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 04:25 pm Title: Locus amoenus

Poor babe, and poor Bill
They're both lost

Author's Response: they'll be okay, hopefully

Reviewer: theyaylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 03:29 pm Title: Locus amoenus

D:

Oh NOES!!

Author's Response: It's for their own good. Both Bill and Otto's.

Reviewer: My Tokio Romance Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 10:26 pm Title: Our Shangri-La

bufff...great but disturbing! Let's see where does this go, shall we? :P

Author's Response: thanks :D

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 10:15 pm Title: Our Shangri-La

Poor baby! I feel for him more than Bill in a way. I'm going to fave this!

Author's Response: the baby is going to be fine. I don't have it in me to hurt a baby, so...

Reviewer: decode_me Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 08:18 pm Title: Our Shangri-La

oh wow.... i'm definitely tracking this story...

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: nigerianxpride Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 07:44 pm Title: Our Shangri-La

awwww....bill is sad.....really good start!

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: IzzyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 06:29 pm Title: Our Shangri-La

Aww. Poor Bill has post-partum depression, yes? Poor kid. And by kid I mean him, although I do feel bad for Otto, but it's not Bill's fault. My aunt was pretty much like that for a year after she had her third child.

I'd totally say something awesome in Romanian here, but the only thing I can pronounce correctly is cuvint. Which still isn't spelled right. EH.

I'll be on the lookout for updates of this, it seems promising! :)

Author's Response: lol. you know Romanian? (and even spelled like that it has the same pronounciation, so it's no biggie. It's the old way-before 1989-of spelling it)rnHe had a bit of post partum depression and a bit of nomal depression.

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 06:00 pm Title: Our Shangri-La

What a strange story
Looks like Bill hates his child

Author's Response: hate is a big word, so not really.

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