Date: 04/30/23 07:35 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 07/07/19 05:52 am Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
This was a good story!
Date: 05/13/15 05:16 am Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
Ughhhhhhh!! You write the best botTOM. I love you. :)
Date: 11/18/11 03:07 am Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
Sexy!! I'm glad they finally said something to eachother in the end. :) Well done. You capture the energy and electricity between them very well. :)
Date: 03/12/10 12:25 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
Damn, *squirms uncomfortably* and that should teach me not to click on an NC-17 story written by you while at the office. *fans self* Very, very hot!
Date: 12/14/09 04:20 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
Wow. That was.. incredibly hot.
Date: 11/04/09 06:42 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
smutty. surprisingly, both of them got to be in both positions. wow.. :) quite fast and short, but i don't feel that it's uncomplete, it's perfect.
Date: 10/07/09 12:44 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
the end was sooo cute *w*
Date: 10/03/09 11:26 am Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
So, absolutely sweet and hot xD but I love the tender moment at the end.
Date: 10/01/09 06:49 am Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
AWE.
Hot && Sweet.
That calls for a job well done.
:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^_^
Date: 10/01/09 12:58 am Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
holy hot shit. that was awesome, haha.
just...wow, dude.
Author's Response: Haha thank you! :P I'm glad you think so! Thanks for reading and reviewing ^_^
Date: 09/30/09 10:52 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
HOLYSHIT I KINDA SORT OF JUST DIED HERE! (yes, caps were needed)
Baby, that was.... exquisite to say the least! This is the best birthday surprise ever, and you're amazing! *loves it*
*loves you moar*
Author's Response: EEEE I was so nervous, love! I was hoping you'd like it. *glomps* I LOVE YOU, BABY! *snuggles forever*
Date: 09/30/09 10:46 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
Suuuuuuuuuper hot. :)
Author's Response: Haha thank youuuu! :D
Date: 09/30/09 08:24 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
Wow just, Wow. That was great!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy that you think so ^_^ Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 09/30/09 07:21 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
I loved it! Very good! Keep up the good work! =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you loved it ^_^
Date: 09/30/09 07:19 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwperfect.
Author's Response: Hehehe thank you! :D
Date: 09/30/09 06:48 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
really sweet and lovely loved it! i am speachless as it is such a good peice of writing xD *claps* BRAVO! hehe
Author's Response: Oh, wow. Thank you so much! :D I'm really happy that you loved it :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/30/09 05:53 pm Title: Sugar, Spell It Out
Honey. Typos. Lots of them.
Aside from that, this was very steamy. I didnt like the changing of positions mid-coitus, it was a lil awkward, but most of it was good. I really love the way you describe their bodies, their differences, and similarities.
Author's Response: I'll check the typos, thanks for letting me know about them! I wanted to make them change positions because well, it was something I felt was necessary in this story. But I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!