Date: 10/01/09 09:10 pm Title: "Ridiculous, isn't it?"
Oh...this should be a fun story maybe a little sad at times but fun non the less...can't wait forthe next chapter
Date: 10/01/09 08:51 pm Title: "Ridiculous, isn't it?"
*squeaks and falls over and DIES*
Yes, that's right. But I'm alive. YOU KNOW WHY???
COZ I"M SO AWESOME I CAME BACK!!!!! :) :)
Anyway, I loved, loved, loved, loved, fucking loved this, it was much better than I imagined.
And now I hate Simone too. *sighs* Well, I would've been wary of her the whole time anyway. Can't stand mother figures, gah.
But I'm glad Andi's being understanding enough. :) Bill knows how to pick em. =D
BTW, some random "pre-Simone/Gordon" flashbacks would be nice, even though I know its inhumanly possible for them to remeber, but what the hell! I want some little Bill and Tom being adorable and cute! (which they are now, really, but more is always nice)
keep going please! I'll eat you if you stop. I will find you and poke you and sing Love Is Dead loudly and off-key until you write again. I'm perfectly serious.
Be afraid.
XD
Date: 10/01/09 06:31 pm Title: "Ridiculous, isn't it?"
Aww poor Billa, you can understand that he's angry and confused.
Date: 09/30/09 06:14 pm Title: "You have a twin brother."
LOVELY, lovely...
FUCKING lovely. :)
I'm glad you just went right into it- no boring chapters before.
However, I can't say I like Gordon too much. Just the whole "no back talk, just do what you're told" sort of thing really grates on my nerves.
But, I hope you'll keep him to a minimum.
Also, maybe a little info on WHY Simone and Gordon adopted Bill, and not Tom.
Can't wait for Tom to show up, please make it soon. :)
(like, next chapter. XD)
Great story!!! *tracks & faves*
Author's Response: Thank you =D rnrnMore info on the adoption situation will be coming soon. Promise!
Date: 09/30/09 04:40 pm Title: "You have a twin brother."
“You have a twin brother.”
What?!
Oh that's a brilliant reaction, I mean what else was he supposed to think???
This is an interesting start.
Date: 09/30/09 04:35 pm Title: "You have a twin brother."
omg omg this is going to be monumental)
more))