Date: 10/05/09 03:46 pm Title: “What is the cause of his unhappiness?”
Very dramatic and suspenseful. Was on edge the entire time. One grammatic error. Should of is a no no. Should have is correct. Looking forward to more, will keep following!
Date: 10/05/09 03:43 pm Title: “What is the cause of his unhappiness?”
Yay!
I love you! xD
I don't mind cliff hangers, it just builds up the anticipation.
I honestly can't wait to see what happens next and to see what's up with David; super creepy there.
But, yeah, I'm patiently waiting for the next chapter xD
Date: 10/05/09 11:17 am Title: "So this is it?"
Whooooooohhh Now don't stop here.. please please *puppy eyes*
Date: 10/05/09 04:13 am Title: "So this is it?"
The lack of a 'next' button makes me go grrr. : I really really like this so far. Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 10/05/09 02:15 am Title: "So this is it?"
Ugh! Cliff-hanger!
Date: 10/05/09 12:45 am Title: "So this is it?"
so does the dude still live there?
Date: 10/04/09 10:40 pm Title: "So this is it?"
Looking forward to the next piece. Good layout of a story thus far. Seemed rushed a little bit again, like the first two. But not bad either way.
Author's Response: I was a bit afraid of that. Ah...I'm just so excited about this story. Trust me, I'm gonna slow it down. I would hate to ruin this piece.
Date: 10/04/09 10:23 pm Title: "So this is it?"
Ah, my gosh!
Did David adopt or kidnap Tom and like force him to kill people? And then did Tom run away and live with Georg? What's going on there? I have to admit, I don't like Tom's life very much.....and Bill's such a sweetheart; I feel bad for him.
I feel bad for Simone too 'cause it's like, she just wants everything to work but, it's like, crumbling around her.
Ah! I wanna know more about Tom but his creepy flashbacks....are creepy. I hope he meets and talks to Bill soon. ^_^
Author's Response: David is not a nice person, but rest assured that everything will fall into place.
Date: 10/04/09 10:19 pm Title: "Ridiculous, isn't it?"
I can only imagine how you finish this. Good work.
Date: 10/04/09 10:11 pm Title: "You have a twin brother."
A good rise of suspense. Nicely done.
Date: 10/04/09 10:01 pm Title: "So this is it?"
Keep it comin!
Author's Response: Thank you =D
Date: 10/04/09 09:34 pm Title: "So this is it?"
oh yay!i can hardly wait for this, please don't make Tom so bad that Bill hates or loathes him? like, 'he is a jerk but i think we can work this out anyway' kinda thing? and Tom can like stop thinking about girls all together?
Author's Response: Don't worry, =) Everything will work out in the end.
Date: 10/04/09 09:01 pm Title: "So this is it?"
OHMYGODFUCKING~YES~
*squeaks and tumbles over* YAY, yay, yay! :)
Before I say anything else though, OHMYGOD GORDON YOU FUCKING BASTARD- can I stab him with my eyeliner? It's all nice and pointy....
XD
But yeah, Gordon is an assbucket. And Simone is right up there.
I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY can't wait for them to meet. I'm so happy it'll be soon! *glomps*
And the banner is oh so pretty, I love it! =D
LOVE IT ALL. XD
Date: 10/04/09 09:00 pm Title: "So this is it?"
Ohh....hmmm....I don't know what to say about this...can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 10/03/09 03:59 pm Title: "Good boy, my little Tom."
AHH Nicole, I love ittt!!!! It is like, amazing. Will we get to find out who Gustav's lover is? Hmm..hmmm?!?! *wink wink*
Oh, its capristar2213, shelby, or rose, haha btw. I forgot to mention that. YAY!
Author's Response: xD Thank you! ...And maybe
Date: 10/02/09 06:22 pm Title: "Good boy, my little Tom."
wow. love it.
Date: 10/02/09 05:20 pm Title: "Good boy, my little Tom."
AW. POOR TOMI! *huggles Tom*
Tom needs LOVE, and now. So sooner you enter Bill, the better.
However, I don't like Tom with anyone but Bill, so this May girl's already inching toward my black book, but I think she'll be interesting to have around later.
And by that, I mean, she should get jealous over Bill and Tom together. :)
Bitch doesn't know what she's missing.
Can't wait till they meet, I'm so excited. Don't worry about it being rushed, it's all chapters leading up to something, so if anything, speed it up, or give us a definite chappy were they meet!
Loved it, really, cannot wait for the next chappy!!!! XD
Date: 10/02/09 03:50 pm Title: "Good boy, my little Tom."
Oh...I'm not so sure I'll hate tom....I kinda like him
Date: 10/02/09 02:45 pm Title: "Good boy, my little Tom."
awwww,poor Tom...Bill is going to have a fucking field day with Tom when they meet...
Date: 10/01/09 10:14 pm Title: "Ridiculous, isn't it?"
zomg!!!!i love this!!!!! more soon?