Date: 08/05/11 10:13 pm Title: “I would really hate to ruin the softening process, Tom.”
That was hilarious with the whole georg and waking up gustav thing xD you are such an amazing author, the way you made the house bond with eachother so soon, yet so natural is amazing! :')
Date: 05/21/11 12:43 am Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
omg, I finally got around to reading the rest of this story, and I felt as if I was mind-f***ed within the last few chapters. Oh... Do I hear some BotTom action that's going to take place with Bill topping soon? I think I did (but of course you decide)!!!! Looking forward to the next chap.
Date: 04/28/11 01:16 pm Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
amazing! cant wait for the end to this epic stale :)
Date: 04/25/11 10:34 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
AH!!!!!!!!!!
Nooooo!!!! Tom can't die, because if Tom dies than it's most likely Bill will too!
Sequel?! Oh... so maybe Tom isn't dead... YES! I WOULD SO READ THE SEQUEL!!!
Date: 04/24/11 04:56 pm Title: “Simply stunning, you are.”
Gusti... Meine kliener Gusti! Is an evil dwarf head?! What?! WHY?! I love Gustav! He's like a teddy bear! You just wanna hug the man!
Now I just wanna rip his round belly open and strangle him with his intestines!! I was sooo not looking out for that one!
My gawd! It's Easter... and Gustav is ruining it for me! NEEEIIIN!
More! I must continue reading!
-May
Date: 04/24/11 12:15 pm Title: “If not now, then never.”
"Somewhere 'he' can't hear"?
Oh dear God! Don't tell me David has hearing devices! That would just be flat out crazy!
March 21st? Mine's March 24th XD Creepy! Lol either way you're still older than me! And you're not old! You're only as old as you feel and if you feel old, you might as well be!
Enjoy life! Live Every Second!
-May
Date: 04/24/11 11:38 am Title: “You always had the best tasting blood.”
...BILL NEEDS TO CALL THE COPS!
What's up with all these rules! I need to know more about the "Deal"! I honestly think I will die if I read that David is abusing Tom again! I can't deal with it!
I just wanna kill the man! And I know it's a story, but the truth is... people like him exist! D:
-May
Date: 04/24/11 10:48 am Title: “He’s quite a looker.”
....I need a shotgun! Someone give me a knife or something... Yes, a knife works perfectly! I'll do the Chinese torture cuts! David can bleed to death and I'll burn his body. Then I'll call the cops, pretend I was told to go into his "Office" (Aka Apartment) for info on renting and I just so happened to stumble on the blood bath, but no body.
Yes! This is perfect! And Tom wont even have to get blood on his hands! I'll do it all!
o.o okay, she's officially gone bloody bonkers!
-May
Date: 04/24/11 12:13 am Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
AH! I just started reading this... And it is such an amazing story! I'm so glad Tom and Bill are okay!! I was about to cry! Can't wait for the last two chapters! Oh, and I would love a sequel! (: This is a great fic! Thanks for writing it! You deserve a cake (made by Tom)! (;
Date: 04/13/11 01:27 pm Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
this story is amazing!!
Date: 04/04/11 02:50 pm Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
You updated!!!!!! I was so exited when I saw this. I loved it, can't wait to see how you wrap it up.
Date: 04/03/11 04:38 am Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
the only thing I could think of is poor bill :( he can't move a part of his face forever D:
Date: 03/31/11 09:04 pm Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
"So, yes, even though hatred may take up most of his heart for the man, Tom, in smallest of ways, will forever have a love for the demented man.
Bill would probably never understand the odd bond Tom still felt for David. It was useless to try and explain anyway.
Tom and David were brothers after all.
A bond that could never be broken in Tom’s mind."
I have to say I don't undertand this part, or better said, I can't understand Tom's mind. Sorry to say that but he must be really crazy to have any warm feelings toward someone who was so inhumane.
Tom and David weren't brothers, they didn't know each other for their whole lives, Tom knew himfor only 8 years and all he got from him was hate and abuse. I understand this could damage his mind pretty badly but still it's not normal to have love for someone like him.
"A bond that could never be broken in Tom’s mind"
Excuse me? What bond? It's not like they were closer at the beginning, after Tom was adopted. How could he feel any bond then? And later, when he saw what David did to Bill, who, as you wrote before, was Tom's whole life? It's hard to imagine he would feel anything other than hate for him. I'm repeating myself but those feelings of love and gratitude are highly abnormal.
Also what Tom could possibly learn from David? How to be strong? He didn't learn it from David but from Bill, so it's not like he should be grateful for anything. If he feels so he's much more twisted and sick than he appears.
Another thing that can't get out of my mind - I feel really strong sympathy for Bill and this what happened to his face. One could say it doesn't really matter, look isn't important, he should be grateful that he and Tom are alive and that Tom is finally free... Yes and no. Yes because obviously life is the ultimate value. But then, wasn't Tom alive when he was a slave of David? Shouldn't he be happy to be alive? The answer is no, because I think freedom is the next value, after life. Freedom of mind is as important as the freedom of body. When you feel restricted by your look yit's hard to feel free. Of coure when so much drama happens it's easy to think that permanently damaged face is not important, but later, when normal life will be resumed, such damage can be really big problem. For sure having a person who will love you no matter what can help a lot, but there are a lot of small moments in everyone's life when such harm can cause a lot of mental pain. You say beauty is not everything... Well, maybe not everything but first of all, it gives self-confidence and helps to live a better life. And I'm not saying that only beautiful people are living happy lifes, I mean it more like "when you feel beautiful you feel stronger". It's not as much about the look as it is about the state of mind. When things like this that happened to Bill happen to a someone said person has every reason to feel devastated. We can't think that it's OK to endure such mutilation with a smile because there are more important things.
Date: 03/31/11 12:26 am Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Date: 03/30/11 02:10 pm Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
Oh you made my day, i was afraid yo have abandoned this story!!
It was a chapter to reflect upon how blood is not what ties people up, it's something deeper, it might be that David was a heartless bastard, but Tom wasn't, so, if that kindof 'affection' was the only one he learned for years, it's just normal he cares for David deep down. Not that I can really comprenhend how mind works...
Bill will have time to heal from the horror hw suffered and, he will also be able to help Tom get over it as well.
I'll be waiting for the next chapters, please do not disappear again for so long =)
Date: 03/30/11 01:30 pm Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
oh gosh. tears. such a lovely chapter. david is finally gone! but i still think it's sad that he and tom were brothers and shared a bond and that made david's death a teeny tiny bit sad.
Date: 03/30/11 12:53 pm Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
Wow. What a story! loved it!
Date: 03/30/11 06:48 am Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
i am so incredible happy tom survived! and also that david and all of those problems are gone! this story is just love!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 03/30/11 12:41 am Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
Thank God Tom survived, I've been terrified all along :O
Oh, and at the end of the chapter it nearly sounded as if you were ending the story, that scared the hell out me. I went all: You can't stop it now, I wanna know what happens afterwards, how...? Oh... THEN I read the Chapter end notes and felt like an idiot xD
But thank you so much for the journey this far. It's two more chapters to go, and even though every story needs an end, it will be hard to say goodbye to this story. Because I really do love it.
Despite all the evil things taking place, I do love the story, so thank you.
I'm looking forward to the next two chapters =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3
Date: 03/29/11 10:02 pm Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
Oh my god!!!
Author's Response: :O Thank you for the read!