Date: 10/30/09 09:26 am Title: “I can get away with anything I want.”
That is defiantly not a good! That's the kinda thing I used to say,.. Really not good! 0_o
Can I please kill David? I promise to do it nice and slowly! =D
Author's Response: Is it me or does everyone want to kill David? xD Thank you for reading
Date: 10/30/09 08:38 am Title: “I can get away with anything I want.”
Eek I just started reading this. Its awesome! David's a bastard. Can I kill him?
Author's Response: xD Thanks. And I'm sure Tom wouldn't mind that at all. ;P
Date: 10/17/09 11:25 pm Title: "You have a twin brother."
I'm absolutely head over heels for your whole idea. It's not often you see Tom fucked up like this, and it's one of my little perversions that I love to read. I just can't wait to find out what Tom and David's deal is, nor can I wait for Tom to actually let Bill in.
However, reading through this last chapter, it looks like you need a beta. Maybe you have one and they just didn't look at "This is Georg’s house, not yours!", I don't know. Not that I'm qualified, but there were several typos in it and a few grammar issues. Just trying to say in the nicest way possible. :)
Author's Response: I understand, thank you =)
Date: 10/16/09 09:12 pm Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
Wow....Tomi got butt-raped.
That's pretty subtle. xD
Its a great story nicole, keep writing more!
Se u on yahoo!
Date: 10/14/09 05:16 pm Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
OMAIGAD!! this storiie is awesomee! its well writen n got lots of good ideas to fill it n make it a truly interesting storie, not that it isnt already! XD
excellent job!! congratz!
Date: 10/14/09 03:11 am Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
Yay! It's back, you have me intrigued again. The last chapter was a little bit dry to me and I''m unsure why, but it was. But this chapter brought it back. The detail, the excitement, the mystery. Looking forward to the next chapter, you seem to be updating quicker than most of the fictions I be following. Keep it up. Smiles! :)
Date: 10/13/09 08:39 pm Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
I'd love to know what that 'little deal' is!
Date: 10/13/09 05:56 pm Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
I already hate David.
But i liked the fight on the bed :) kinky :p
Thanks for updating.
xx
Date: 10/13/09 04:58 pm Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
I feel so sorry about him.Maybe he should kill David and hide his body(just saying:D).Is David the guy who adopted Tom?
Author's Response: No. It was David's parents that had adopted him. "What is the cause of his unhappiness?" chapter explains it.
Date: 10/13/09 03:08 pm Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
I already do hate David. He should die a slow and painful death. Can't wait for more.
Date: 10/13/09 11:33 am Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
OMG! the last chapter was so funny till it came to David. Who is this piece of shit and why is he doing this to Tom? I mean, why can't Tom escape, just run away? I am so nervous and impatience to read the next chapter.
Date: 10/13/09 11:01 am Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
I really really REAAAALLY want to read the rest of it.. it's a wonderful story! and i already hate david! Grrr let's kill him!.... Hmm.. not until the story's done
Date: 10/13/09 10:57 am Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
Oh Tom! i think I love May (^_^)
Date: 10/13/09 08:37 am Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
kill kill kill kill kill kill
KILL DAVID!
Date: 10/13/09 03:11 am Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
Oh no poor Tomi D: ... I'm so glad that Bill could stay in Georg's house I hope he can help Tom...
I wonder what is the deal that Tom and David have...
More please soon!! this story is so good
Date: 10/13/09 01:00 am Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
Ah man...I gotta have more...update soon?
Date: 10/13/09 12:48 am Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
I laugh pretty hard while reading the fight between bill and tom lol I can just see them fighting like that..=)
Oh and I would like nothing more then to kick davids ass right now....
Date: 10/13/09 12:32 am Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
What the f*ck?! Why do I get a bad feeling about this?!
Love your fics!
Date: 10/13/09 12:10 am Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
What's there arrangement? I hate David. W/ a passion.
Date: 10/12/09 10:52 pm Title: “This is Georg’s house, not yours!”
awww, I think Bill should accidentaly kill David.. or rescue Tom from him...