Date: 09/21/10 08:47 pm Title: “This is my favorite game with Tom.”
omg hurry up tomi billa needs u
Author's Response: Yes! Hurry and run like the wind!
Date: 09/21/10 08:06 pm Title: “This is my favorite game with Tom.”
*runs and hides in the corner* :O
David's line of, "This is my favorite game with Tom," seriously sent shivers down my spine. I can imagine a huge beastly guy looming over Bill's fragile naked {which I'm sure in any other situation would be sexy, but the sexy is a bit overshadowed with the "HE NEEDS HELP" feeling} wrist-cuffed body. Ugh, It's these type of moments in which I find myself wishing I had a super duper magical cape and could transfer myself into illustrated/alternate universes to save people. But sadly, that's impossible *sigh* /done rambling.
I love how you interwine everything together, with the realization from Tom that Gustav has been a menace in disguise. Everything about this fic has been wonderful, even the rough patches in the twins relationship (:
I apologize for my lack of reviews though. I'm always up-to-date on my readings but Guilt consumes me when I click away without dropping a word or two. Procrastination & Lazyness are bad tendencies of mine XD
I'm excited to see how in the next chapter, Tom will regain dominance of the situation and take back his life. {& hopefully, Give David a big punch right in the middle of his fucking face XD Even a full-on "beatdown" would be nice *teehee*}
Update Soon? *P L E A S E* (:
-----Samantha
Author's Response: xD Ah, yes, a chained up Bill would be hot in any other given situation. And thank you so much! =3 Haha, I'm a bit lazy when it comes to reviewing on my favorite stories. I procrastinate and be really lazy about it. I wont take too long in updating. Promise ;)
Date: 09/21/10 07:50 pm Title: “This is my favorite game with Tom.”
ON MY GODDDD. YOU ARE GOING TO BE THE DEATH OF ME. I've never hates gustav so much in my life.. I NEVER HATED GUSTAV PERIOD. Hahaha. But this David dude needs to take a fuckin chill pill or a tranquilIzer...
Author's Response: I know! >.< stupid nasty David!
Date: 09/21/10 07:35 pm Title: “This is my favorite game with Tom.”
OMGGGGGGGGGG PLZ MORE LIKE NOW OMG
Author's Response: :O I wont take too long in updating!
Date: 09/21/10 07:17 pm Title: “This is my favorite game with Tom.”
oh nooooooooo!!!!!!! love this story, its so sad... b ut yet so sweet with bill/tom. hope to see another update soon:D
Author's Response: =3 thank you so much
Date: 09/15/10 09:00 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
I HATE YOU!!!! lol, jk. omahgawd, dont be too harsh! my innocent lil heart might not stand it! ;)
Author's Response: ;) no promises
Date: 09/12/10 11:40 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
NONONONONO!!!!!!!! This is horrible! Gustav can't be evil! I love him too much! And Tom and Bill don't deserve this! No no no!!!!!!!
Author's Response: D: They don't deserve it at all! But David is a horrible bastard!
Date: 09/12/10 12:35 am Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
:((( plz more. no hurting billa or tomi. plz moreeeeeeee
Author's Response: More is coming on the way =)
Date: 09/11/10 01:59 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
:( NOOOOO!
GUSTAV!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: D= horrible Gustav
Date: 09/08/10 05:06 pm Title: "You have a twin brother."
Okay, so I feel so f'n horrible right now for reading this whole thing & not commenting until now. Plz don't shoot me! I know as a writer how comments are gold but I swear I have a really good excuse! This story is so f'n fantastic that all I could do was click 'next.' My mind was so into the plot & characters that I really stop to leave anything intellegent for u. I'm so so sry. But I have to say this: OMFG! I would have never guessed Gustav was the one watching Tom! My heart aches for Tom's life & i'm so happy that he has fallen for Bill & that he finally has someone who can love him unconditionally. This last chapter left me sickened & I want to kill David myself, more now than ever. Ahh! Plz post again soon. I absolutely NEED to know what's going to happen next. I'm hoping Bill kills the bastard. But not before putting him thru a litte torcher of his own. Sry again for not commenting before now, but it was just so good I couldn't stop reading.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. You simply enjoying my story is gold enough. Thank you! And I wont take too long in updating ^^
Date: 09/08/10 06:04 am Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
Oh. My. God, I seriously feel like killing you right now. Okay, I know this is my first comment so I should probably be nicer, it's just that, Jesus, you left me dying here. Okay, I also want to say that I love the story, the way you tell it's amazing, so thanks and bye:D
Author's Response: ;D I was scared for a moment, but thank you! ^^
Date: 09/08/10 02:41 am Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
Okay. I'm am pissed. I AM BEYOND PISSED. I am murderous. I swear to god if he touches Bill....
Author's Response: I suppose David is cruisin' for a bruisin' ;)
Date: 09/07/10 09:01 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
What? Gustav's a dick! How could he do that to Poor Bill and Tom?!
Author's Response: I know! =O
Date: 09/07/10 07:46 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
Oh no!! Update again soon please!!!
Author's Response: =D soon, soon
Date: 09/07/10 06:54 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
Awwww, poor Tomi! I'm glad Bill is there to comfort him.
David is one sick bastard. I have a feeling Gustav is up to something, I don't know what it is yet but it's something.
awesome chapter
Author's Response: =) thank you
Date: 09/07/10 04:43 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
What the fuck, Gustav? I mean, really, what's his deal?
Author's Response: He's an asshole that loves a bigger asshole. ;P
Date: 09/07/10 04:30 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
.....Why do I have this painful feeling in my chest that it's not actually Tom... It's a recording...
Author's Response: Hmmm...possibly...;)
Date: 09/07/10 03:10 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
I hate David so much I hope that when Bill finds them, that he will beat David up. Update soon.
Author's Response: ;) promise not to take too long
Date: 09/07/10 01:31 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
>:@ I really want to kick Gustav and David in the nuts!! They're so evil, God knows what they're planning for the twins
Author's Response: D=< Do more than a kick in the nut sack!
Date: 09/07/10 12:51 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
God-Bill is running right into the trap, with that bastard Gustav on his heels-WTF is gonna happen now?!?! Please please update soon!
Author's Response: ;) wont take too long