Date: 11/26/10 02:20 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
ah!!!!!!!!!! what a cliffie. thank god david is dead, but our boys better be ok. and yes i would read a sequel!!
Author's Response: ^^ thank you
Date: 11/25/10 01:11 pm Title: "You have a twin brother."
What the fuck? It ended?! o.o
I got confused by the other reviews.
I've read this story ever since the first chapter! Only back then I had another user than this one.
Oh my fucking God. This is and will forever be one of my favorite stories. It is so clever and for a person like me, who loves bondage and torture, it's absolutley a perfect fic! I love, love, love it!
And Bill; I drooled when I pictured myself him in those leather cuffs. *_* Amazingggggg.
Will forever love you for writing this story.
Date: 11/25/10 07:59 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
This fic is horribly good! I´ve read this now up to this point and I can tell that through my reading I´ve felt all the emotions possible! David is so cruel and twistedminded that there´s not even words to describe it. And the fucking Gustav, die you sick bastard! : D Okay, emotions took control of me. All I wan´t to say is that this chapter, oh gosh, I knew this weren´t to end well and May! What the hell is wrong with her!? I would´ve called immediately to 911 and shouted to get some help at David´s place but I kind of understand her because she didn´t know ANYTHING. But well, David is now dead, good job Bill. But poor Bill what he had to go through, mein Gott. And then there´s Tom! Who just can´t die, they have to fix each other with Bill after all they´ve been through. Now, ambulance, police, anyone go there and save my precious twins... I think my review is pretty freak but, yeah your fic caused it so it´s you to blame for : D Okay, not really, I really like this even though it get´s me feel all crazy because you just write so good!
Author's Response: :D Haha, thank you! I'm glad I have that effect...Did that sound weird? ;P
Date: 11/25/10 12:27 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
No!! Tom can't leave Bill all alone in this world, especially since he finally stood up to David. He has to pull through and live for Bill's love.
Author's Response: :) yes he does
Date: 11/24/10 06:09 pm Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
omg :::::::::::
Author's Response: :O
Date: 11/24/10 03:45 pm Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
WOW!!
I Have no words..great chapter!
and sequel? YES PLEASE!
Author's Response: ^^ thank you
Date: 11/24/10 03:40 pm Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
oh. my. fuckin'. god.
good that that son of a bitch is dead but tom, he cannot die!! i love this fic very much so yes, i would read the sequel!! wanna read more!
Author's Response: =) thank you!
Date: 11/24/10 01:15 pm Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
NO he can't die!!!! Don't let him die!!!!!
Author's Response: =O Tomi!
Date: 11/24/10 12:06 pm Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
wait if u are thinking to put up a sequel that means that Tom will survive!!!!!! =DDD thanks honey! I was about to cry! I'm in love with this story since the early star and I don't wanna see a sad end >.< it will take me down and make me cry =(
the chapter is something more that amazing! I cannot decrypt it with words! =) u are amazing!!!!
Author's Response: :) thank you
Date: 11/24/10 10:54 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
*tears* no, dont Kill Tomi!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no!!!!
this is pure torture, it was so hard to read!!!!!! i lvoe it though, and i cant wait for the rest!!! (btw, i think you should put slavery as the warning, cause that's really what it is.)
Author's Response: :) thank you
Date: 11/24/10 09:04 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
What a cliffhanger!!!!!Can't wait for the next chapter!And yes please,write a sequel,I would definitely read it.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 11/24/10 06:08 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
ooooo myyyy GOD!!! i could barely breath during this chapter! This truly is a masterpiece! and YES i would totally read the sequel! ;D
Author's Response: :D thank you!
Date: 11/24/10 03:03 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
I would put slavery as a warning. Tom was a slave, and he kept it with him mentally for a long time. Heck yes i would read it. Thank you for writing!!
Author's Response: ^^ thank you
Date: 11/24/10 02:04 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
Oh no! nonono!!
Don't let him die! Don't let Bill be charge for murder and jailed forever! Please, just tell me there is hope at the end of this mess.
Great chapter, as usual, I read it twice in a record time just to be sure that Tom was being shot.
See you soon ^^
Author's Response: :) thank you! aaannnd...there's hope!
Date: 11/24/10 01:08 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
he cant die!!!!
Author's Response: :O Poor Tom!
Date: 11/24/10 01:06 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
O.O you ended there?
Author's Response: ;) I did, but I wont leave ya hanging.
Date: 11/24/10 12:20 am Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
Yes for the sequel!!! As for slavery... I don't think so...
Author's Response: Whoo for sequels!
Date: 11/23/10 10:58 pm Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
Okay. I have alot to say. So, the fuck was that?BILL'S FACE AND HAIR IS RUINEDD!!! WHY?! OH MY LORD N JESUS WITH SATAN IN THE BACK SEAT OF THEIR EL CAMINO~ I have never hated AND loved someone more than you. Nevertheless, I'm glad that son of a bitch is dead. BUT MY POOR BILL. AND TOMI! HE HAS A FUCKIN HOLE THROUGH HIS STOMACH. HDHDHDHJDHDUCDUSHWUNSNCIWUREYJI. I ALL BUT GIGGLED WHILE READING THIS. NO ONE BETTER HAVE FUCKIN GIGGLED WHILE READING THIS. I swear, a tear slid down my cheek. AND EVEN THOUGH DAVID WAS BEING A SICK FUCK, it was hot and ALMOST made my panties wet O.O I LOVE YOU BABE~
Author's Response: ;D you're welcome
Date: 11/23/10 10:19 pm Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
Awesome chapter. I'm not sure about the slavery part because this isn't what people typically think of when thinking of slavery. And yes, I would read the sequel.
Author's Response: That's what I thought. :) Thanks for the input and the read!
Date: 11/23/10 09:45 pm Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
I hate David, glad that Tom stood up to him for once. I hope Tomi's okay. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: ^^ thanks for the read!