Date: 03/31/24 12:29 am Title: "Goodbye, David."
One can tell you’re sick and enjoy hurting the most angel like beings that are the TH boys with writing something as gross as this and even trying to condone it like there would ever be anything positive about the villain here and how you yourself wrote you felt comfortable writing about the gore, made me sick.
Date: 03/31/24 12:27 am Title: "Goodbye, David."
One can tell you’re sick and enjoy hurting the most angel like beings that are the TH boys with writing something as gross as this and even trying to condone it like there would ever be anything positive about the villain here and how you yourself wrote you felt comfortable writing about the gore, made me sick.
Date: 04/18/23 01:42 am Title: "You have a twin brother."
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 03/14/19 07:10 pm Title: "Goodbye, David."
this was a good story!!
i hope u did a sequel to this
Date: 02/08/19 09:13 pm Title: "Goodbye, David."
Decided to revisit to THF after 5 years(?) and stumbled upon this fic. There were very few imperfections but i love the plot!!! Thanks for this! Love this!!!!
Date: 07/07/15 02:03 pm Title: "Goodbye, David."
Your story was beautiful! Hard but well done!
Date: 02/19/15 11:27 pm Title: “You finally gave me the courage.”
Omg I just don't what say! So many emotions, I almost cried! Beautiful story
Date: 02/01/15 02:12 am Title: "Goodbye, David."
Make this into a book dude I'd buy the shit outta that
Date: 01/31/15 05:38 pm Title: “Let me see you.”
-lays face first flat on the floor-
Feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels
Date: 01/31/15 03:43 pm Title: “Let’s end this, Bill.”
-dies-
-dies again-
DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOURE DOING TO ME
Date: 01/30/15 07:08 pm Title: “Someone has been a real naughty boy.”
I DONT USUALLY REVIEW BUT GOD DAMMIT IM CRYING RN
Date: 12/25/14 04:28 pm Title: "Goodbye, David."
Thank you for an awesome story. What a ride that was! I enjoyed the plot tremendously. Great stuff and so happy to see them end up together like that:-)
Date: 08/24/14 08:06 am Title: "You have a twin brother."
I perfectly understand what situation Bill is in.
No I’m not adopted but my mom got an operation which causes me to have no sibling ever again.
Date: 08/24/14 07:48 am Title: "You have a twin brother."
I perfectly understand what situation Bill is in.
No I’m not adopted but my mom got an operation which causes me to have no sibling ever again.
Date: 02/13/14 10:46 pm Title: “Simply stunning, you are.”
Gustav!?!?!?! NOOOOO!!
Date: 10/06/13 06:00 pm Title: “I would really hate to ruin the softening process, Tom.”
xD Bill bottoms.
Date: 08/25/13 03:18 pm Title: "Goodbye, David."
I've wanted to read this fic for a long time, but I have to say, it took me by surprise. Maybe I just don't look at warnings cuz I'm blind or something, but I really didn't expect all the torture and horror. Lol. That being said, it was pretty good. :) I love how you move the twins' relationship along, how they grow to like eachother and grow closer. It's not in your face that they're lusting after eachother and I think that made it a bit more realistic. Until! Yes, until the chapter where they go out on a date and Tom is being super romantic and then the bed scenes!! Omg, that part, I have no idea what happened to your usually good writing, but for that bedroom time with them being so madly in love, it was so over the top and unrealistic, it took me for a loop. I was like, "I hope to Jeebus the rest of this story isn't gonna be like this..". Yeah, sorry. :( Then the fic went back to its normal goodness. Lol. It's not like a don't like twincest and hate horror- in fact it's exactly the opposite, I LOVE twincest, and am meh about horror... But this fic turned things around, lol. I love your twins as they get closer and try and save eachother and how you build the plot. It was just that one chapter than I know was supposed to be them at their happiest and the unrealistic mushiness ruined it for me. :( sorry. Ok, anyways, I'm gonna shut up. Well done on this fic- really unique and captivating and a great read. Few grammar booboo's here n there but not anything too bad. Well done!! :)
Date: 07/13/13 10:31 am Title: "Goodbye, David."
I loved this story! Amazingly written and kept me stuck from first chapter. My family gave me weird looks though, I was kind of sitting here shouting at my computer when I for a moment thought Tom died :P Great story, I seriously loved it!
Date: 07/12/13 06:21 pm Title: “I want you to know how I feel.”
Oh my gosh what a sweet chapter! Been reading this for some hours now and sadly my body wants to sleep... So I'll continue reading tomorrow *-* (random, kinda pointless review ftw!)
Date: 06/10/13 01:24 am Title: "Goodbye, David."
Don't think I ever left a review but I thoroughly enjoyed this entire series! Read it pretty quickly! You're a talented writer for sure! The only thing that bothers me is that they will always have a visible reminder of the asshole. I don't think Bill deserved what he was left with. Nevertheless, I'm glad they finally ended up happy and I loved the development of their love. :]