Date: 09/29/09 05:57 pm Title: the first and only chapter.
That was so cute and sweet! And your English is great.
Author's Response: thank you! :D
Date: 09/29/09 04:01 pm Title: the first and only chapter.
I loved it.It was really sweet.I smiled while i read it and now my cheeks hurt.I'm speechless...
Author's Response: aww, haha. :D thanks!
Date: 09/29/09 01:27 pm Title: the first and only chapter.
That was a super duper cute story.
Your english was really great. i only noticed one mess up.
" He released the dogs and went to the kitchen, where he found Bill, standing with his back against Tom."
it should be, "standing with his back facing Tom."
but other than that i really think this was a great story. i hope you keep writing, i like the way you write :]
really good job.
oh, and i just found this swedish song on youtube, Jag minns varje studd, really cool.
...so that's a little random, but...yeah, haha.
Author's Response: oh, thanks for pointing it out for me, i appreciate that. :Drngreat that you only noticed one mess up. ;) i really don't think that much when writing in english, i just write, haha. but thank you! :)
Date: 09/29/09 11:51 am Title: the first and only chapter.
:D
Author's Response: :D
Date: 09/29/09 11:45 am Title: the first and only chapter.
bra jobbat! ;D ehm.. I liked it, your english was good and the story was cute =)
Author's Response: bwaha, thanks! :D