awww...bill no.....

loved the prequel to this and can't wait to see their whole story pan out. this time you seem to be slower pace and more detailed. love the surprise of Tom remembering Bill eventhough he was under Bill's spell. quite interesting start want see what happens from here because I know that Tom's the one to make Bill mortal.

Author's Response: I am glad you liked it. I know I think this one will pan out better because I am getting better at details slowly. Yeah i do too i actually wasnt planning that lol but yeah when i can get in the mode it just flows and te characters take more form.