Date: 09/28/09 10:13 am Title: Heart and Soul
I had a discussion with Steinsgrrl about this prompt and we were really hoping someone would take it up. You did a fantastic job! It's sweet and hot and loving and perfect
Author's Response: If you had that discussion on LJ, I just might have seen it. ;) That clip of Tom playing piano really caught me, and I wanted to try something a little different. Thanks so much! I'm very happy to hear that it's all of those things.
Date: 09/28/09 09:32 am Title: Heart and Soul
You are the queen of Sexy Fluff; I bow down to you. I love the way you write their romantic dynamic: it's so easy and comfortable, exciting and hot, and all-encompassing and enduring all at the same time. Now I won't be able to hear Zoom without remembering this story, and I thank you for that. =D
Author's Response: Hee, and what a title! Thank you, I'm so thrilled to hear you love the dynamic. And those are all definitely things that I want to come across with my twins. I'm pleased that you'll make that association. ;) I know I won't be able to hear it without thinking of that image, myself.
Date: 09/28/09 09:14 am Title: Heart and Soul
This is just absolutely amazing. It was so slow and languid, matching Bill's and Tom's pace perfectly. I was really able to get a clear picture in my mind, not only of the setting and actions, but also of the emotions going on. This is just pure love!
Author's Response: Oh, wonderful; that's the pace I was going for. So pleased that the imagery and emotion came across. Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 09/28/09 09:01 am Title: Heart and Soul
I was so excited to see this up this morning! You've been spoiling us so bad with all these sexy one-shots. :D I loved it! The thought of Tom playing that song while Bill does that to him...*dies* Very hot.
Author's Response: I'm so wrigglingly happy you were excited! =) I've definitely enjoyed writing them; the twins are throwing me some irresistible bunnies lately. (And I'll always think of that image now when I listen to Zoom.) Thank you!
Date: 09/28/09 07:12 am Title: Heart and Soul
It was really good, don't worry about that! Very romantic and sweet, but still hot. I loved the idea of using piano here... It was very breathtaking for me to watch Tom playing for the first time and when connected to this fic, it's pure love. Perfect example of romantic fic, I guess.
I'm not a big fan of blow jobs, so I liked to concentrade on twins romantic relationship, connection here. It was very beautifully written. Four am. is a perfect time.
So very romantic, sweet and relaxing fic, well written. And I think I'll go now to watch Tom playing :D
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks so much. I do worry sometimes when I pull something out quickly. The image of Tom playing the piano was so utterly romantic and wistful, there was this longing somehow... I definitely wanted to do something with it. It showed us a sensitive side of Tom that I'm sure very, very few people get to see. Thank you for your review and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 09/28/09 02:36 am Title: Heart and Soul
lovely. absolutely lovely. *purrs contentedly*
Author's Response: Thank you very much. =)
Date: 09/28/09 02:33 am Title: Heart and Soul
Oh! That was so positively sweet and heart achey. Just beautiful. Especially the words left unspoken by Tom. Ohh~
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to evoke that reaction! That's what I was aiming for. I appreciate your review.
Date: 09/28/09 02:15 am Title: Heart and Soul
"Pretend I'm not here," Bill tells him helpfully, and drags the zip down.
Not so helpful, Bill! Lol, awesome story. I shall read it again later when I'm not so distracted by work but it was still very much enjoyable. You got me wriggling for the home scene! Good thing my imagination is imaginative enough XD Unless there's a sequel plot bunny hoping to escape...?
Author's Response: ...Not so helpful, no. ;) Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And of course you can take it as read that they got home and had some fabulous sheet-rumpling sex. After Tom walked the dogs. ;D
Date: 09/28/09 02:14 am Title: Heart and Soul
love it love it love it but you knew that :)
Author's Response: Thank you thank you, and I appreciate the support. =)
Date: 09/28/09 02:01 am Title: Heart and Soul
I loved this! That line at the end, when Tom says "it's still you" seems to echo my own feelings about the hair. ;)
From what little I've heard of the song, I really flet this whole scene fit with the mood--it was slow and easy, a bit melancholy.
Now I can't WAIT to own this song! You know I'm going to be thinking of this story every time I hear the song now--just like Tom will think of Bill blowing him under the piano each time they play it. :D
*draws lots of pretty hearts for you*
Author's Response: Yeah, me too, very definitely. It's still Bill and we love him and that's all that matters. ;) But he can make it work!
I listened to the song a couple of times; well, the video clip of Tom playing it. I definitely wanted to make it fit. Melancholy, but still aching with love.
SUCH WAS MY INTENT. ...I know I'll be thinking of that wonderful image every time I hear the song. Thank you for your lovely review!
Date: 09/28/09 02:01 am Title: Heart and Soul
I LOVED IT!!!
and shame on Bill for not playing fair.
Author's Response: Thank you! I have the feeling that Bill stacks the deck whenever he can. ;)
Date: 09/28/09 01:59 am Title: Heart and Soul
Oh girl, I don't know how it could have been better. You know, that's a blowjob, but even more than that, that's love. I thought it was beautifully done, and I'm so glad you did it. Thank you for this! :D
Author's Response: ♥ ♥ ♥ ! Thank you. And THAT is a wonderful thing to hear, and I'm so pleased that both came across so clearly. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. =)
Date: 09/28/09 01:57 am Title: Heart and Soul
It was lovely, light, cute, and sexy. Nothing wrong with that, in my book. :)
Author's Response: Oh, awesome. ♥ That's what I was aiming for and I'm glad to reach it. Thank you for reading!