Date: 11/04/09 03:25 pm Title: The Abundant Fortune
LOL Ally is so funny her internal monologue is amazing, XDXDXD, well where i'm from there aren't fortune cookies but once i had my palm read and the fortune teller said she saw nothing odd ...
Author's Response:
O_O Where don't they have fortune cookies?
Ha! I've always wanted to get my palm read, but there is nothing here!...Except fortune cookies. And I'd probably have a panic attack if I ever got a blank one. Lol.
Date: 11/04/09 10:11 am Title: Mission Impossible
LOVE! :)
Author's Response: xD!
Date: 11/04/09 12:04 am Title: Mission Impossible
absolutely LOVE...i'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter :D
it's soooo good :D
Author's Response: I'll try getting it out ASAP xD!
Date: 11/03/09 10:01 pm Title: Mission Impossible
So much love. And monkey.
The chocolate nipples bit is like... my new favorite quote of the month. Anytime someone tries to talk me into doing something, I'm totally saying that. That's effing hilarious, my friend.
I adore this story -- it's funny, it's cute, and it has the potential to be f***ing adorable, as well. Some Bill/Ally lovin' eventually... ah, I wonder how they might change towards each other as this crazy charade goes on.
I wish I had more to say, but my mind has been melted by Bill's mind-goopifyingly beautiful eyeballs. :D
Update as soon as you possible can!!! LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
It took me forever to come up with that! Well...pretty much a whole minute. Lol.
Oh, trust me. It will only get crazier from here on out. First off, Bill's an airhead so once Ally has realized she's in some deep, smelly poo, he is going to be pretty much oblivious to everything. Tsk Tsk. Him and those beautiful, mind goopifying eyeballs aren't going to be her only problems. I can tell you that ;D
I'll be working on the next chapter some more tomorrow and will try to get it out by the end of the week, if possible. Which is more than likely going to be around Saturday or Sunday...no later than Monday that's for sure. Lol!
Date: 11/03/09 09:27 pm Title: Mission Impossible
Love it.
Hate to have to wait for another chapter.
I'll just hold my plush monkey till then.
Author's Response: :O you have a plush monkey?! I am so jealous! I want a monkey. x)
Date: 11/03/09 07:45 pm Title: Mission Impossible
this is really good! Ally WILL fall for Bill, i already know it. no one can resist the Kaulitz charm
more soon please
Author's Response:
Or has she already fallen and simply refuses to see that? Hey, she was probably a guy in a past life. We all know how men are. You can push them off a cliff, have them hit by a truck, break every bone in their body, and throw a couple rocks at them. They will still get up saying "it's all good". Stuborn species. xP
Next chappy's already been started :)
Date: 11/03/09 07:18 pm Title: Mission Impossible
MONKEY!!
I love!!!..
the story...not the monkey...well i do love monkeys but...aargh you get the point!
Author's Response: Yeah I get it ;D Who doesn't love monkeys? Lol.
Date: 11/03/09 06:30 pm Title: Mission Impossible
MOnkey! LMAO, yess Hispanicness here, Mexican to be exact, yes I did live in Mexico so i can call myself Mexicana. xDD Geez me and my sister were talking about Tom's fivehead the other day too and we came to the conclusion that were he and I to have children one day [psht yeah right!] those kids would have a never ending forehead, [I have a fivehead also lol] but I call it a sign of intelligence! Lol
Author's Response: Hehe! Were that the case, the Bill here would have a threehead xD I didn't notice that about Tom until recently, when the banner for the site changed. I was like..."Whoa, Tom. No wonder you always cover that forhead." He's still The Sex, but has a fivehead nonetheless. lol.
Both my mom and my stepmom are from Mexico. (Not my dad. Thanks to him and his genetics I end up getting o_O those looks any time I speak spanish since I look straight-on white girl. Lol.) But I haven't even crossed the boarder in months. Probably around the same time I last had elote :/
Date: 11/02/09 01:39 am Title: Frickin Drama Queen
LOVE IT. LOVE LOVE LOVE.
Okay, you had me cracking up throughout this whole stinkin' chapter. It's a nice break from DBYKI/ADITM, as wonderful as they are. It's nice to have a giggle-fit once in a while :D.
But seriously, Ally is HILARIOUS. I love her internal monologue and all of her snarky comments. I don't even have a favorite moment or a couple of them -- the whole CHAPTER was my favorite moment! I laughed the whole damn time! And it's funny to read about Bill in a different way than in DBYKI -- The kind of Bill that we see in TH-TV, who is a total attention-whore and goofball.
...Princess Bill... bahahahahaha!
I seriously cannot wait for an update! You are so freaking brilliant, I wish your brilliance and awesome writing would just... rub off a little on me so that I could actually post something good here, lol.
Please update soon!! :D
Author's Response: I was getting a little stuffy writing all the angsty drama, so I wanted to try something new. I'm happy you like it and that you find Ally funny.
I'm planning on having a lot more fun with these characters. And of course, plenty of nicknames for everybody. I actually just posted the next chappy and am waiting for it to be validated. xD
Date: 10/28/09 04:42 pm Title: Trouble
i love iiiit!!!! :D
Author's Response: Sweet! xD
Date: 10/28/09 04:42 pm Title: Trouble
i love iiiit!!!! :D
Date: 10/28/09 04:42 pm Title: Trouble
i love iiiit!!!! :D
Date: 10/27/09 06:36 pm Title: Frickin Drama Queen
Please continue this! I really like it so far. =]
Author's Response: I'm so happy you're liking it so far :D Next chapter should be out soon!
Date: 10/27/09 11:17 am Title: Frickin Drama Queen
I love it :D Continue ;D
Author's Response: Yay! Next chappy should be up soon :D
Date: 10/26/09 07:27 pm Title: Frickin Drama Queen
OH MY GAH! I LOVE ELOTE! [corn with sour cream and what not] That is so me in my morning class, lmao. xDD
Author's Response: I am sensing fellow hispanic-ness. Lol! I know, I love it too and have been craving some like crazy lately. I haven't actually had any elote in months!
Date: 10/26/09 06:42 pm Title: Frickin Drama Queen
I really liked it. I love how she was spacing out on random stuff, that was hilarious. And it is deep. What does one do if they see an endangered animal eating an endangered plant? o.O That's going to have to go into my sack of questions, like "Isn't it scary how doctors call what they do practice?" and "Why does a pizza get to your house faster than an ambulance."
Only thing I could say to change would be to tell what person is talking in the meeting. You didn't use "blahblahblahstuffhere," she said or whatever. It was kind of hard to tell who was talking.
Otherwise, I like it x]
Author's Response: I was thinking a lot about that before I posted the chapter, but I chose against it. Mostly because since this is written from Ally's POV, she was spacing out, so all of what they were saying was ust background noise. The important part was just getting the idea out their. Who was saying what wasn't really all that big an issue.
I actually can't take credit for that. My beta came up with it. But it really did get me thinking... All I know is, if I every break a bone or my life is in danger, I'm calling the pizza guy. lol. Kidding...maybe. ;)
And isn't it fishy how dollar stores sell baby stuff and pregnacy tests but not condoms? Hmmm...
Date: 10/26/09 06:31 pm Title: Frickin Drama Queen
love love love it! OMG
Author's Response: xD!
Date: 10/26/09 04:26 pm Title: Frickin Drama Queen
LOVE LOVE LOVEEEE MORE MORE MORE :3
Author's Response: There'll be more soon, promise! xD
Date: 10/26/09 12:14 pm Title: Frickin Drama Queen
Yep! loved it, tomato eating man tomato red hah.
Author's Response: xD!
Date: 10/26/09 10:35 am Title: Frickin Drama Queen
LOVE ITTTTT :)
Author's Response: Yay! xD