Date: 12/04/09 08:23 am Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
1. I like the new words you're inventing
2. I am strangely attracted by the very tattooed star you're talking about...
3. He seems to be exactly like you describe him, it's so realistic
4. Well written, the humor made me laugh all by myself, it's absolutely adorable
5. i don't know where i've been when you started posting this story, but now here i am, i've faved it from the very first chapter.
6. I can hardly see drama coming from Andy, he's pictured rather like a harmless guy and besides it's over and done with him
7. I think Bill shaves, he's actually the kind of hairy guy, just notice his arms. I don't know about his hormones though, if you're right in your story so far, he is a more lady like, so the beard...less probable.
8. As for the kiss, i still have to read more. They might feel attracted to each other, but since their brains don't keep up with their bodies, I'm already prepared for a delicious development in the events.
9. I LOVE the story and please hurry with the update!
Author's Response:
1) New words are fun x)
2) So am I
3)Awesomeness, lol.
4&5) Thank you xD!
6) I've got a few things planned for Andy's character. He'll be quite a little shit stir-upper (OMG that just sounds so smart xP)
8&9) There will be more, soon I hope. I actually haven't felt that great the past couple days, I think I've caught a bug or something and I know it's been affecting my writing. So hopefully, I'll be able to finish the next chapter before the week is out.
Date: 12/03/09 10:58 pm Title: Frickin Drama Queen
lmao! she's such a sarcastic narrator!
Author's Response: xD
Date: 12/03/09 10:47 pm Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
i HEART this chappy
i read it over like 3 times. i mean, it just doesn't get better than this...or does it *dun dun duuuun*
They like each other and that's that. andy and ally? can't see it...maybe in later chapters my mind will wrap around the idea...i smell DRAMAAAA :D
KEEP GOING!
Author's Response: It so gets better, lol.
Date: 11/30/09 11:39 pm Title: Trouble
I'm going through withdrawl!! Update soon?
Author's Response: I finished the next chapter yesterday, sent it to my beta, and am now waiting for her to email me back a corrected draft. So update will be soon, I promise =D
Date: 11/23/09 07:21 am Title: Frickin Drama Queen
This chapter so made my day! :3 its so funni i was laughing my ass off
Author's Response: xD!
Date: 11/19/09 08:37 pm Title: Trouble
iii LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOOOOVE this story!!!!!
Author's Response: Yay xD!
Date: 11/14/09 05:55 pm Title: The Abundant Fortune
LOL I would start screaming "DEATH!" while running around where ever I was, arms flailing. I would then prorobly steel everyone else's fortune cookie and claim them to be mine *evil laugh*. If they were also blank I think I may have gone into some crazy cardiac arrest.
That's just me (:
BTW, I'm in love with this fiction and not just because the word 'Goop' is in it xD
Author's Response: It's all because of Tom's giant forehead. ;) That thing has it's very own gravitational pull. Hehe. My brother did that to me last time I got a fortune cookie! He didn't like his so he stole mine. ROFL! I can sooo picture that happening.
Date: 11/12/09 04:29 pm Title: We're On Fire
1) UBER LOVE
AND 2) gaydar? emo detector? German Glitter Whore Service? xDD
Author's Response: ROFL, I ubber love! I am so using that! xDDD
Date: 11/12/09 04:29 pm Title: We're On Fire
1) UBER LOVE
AND 2) gaydar? emo detector? German Glitter Whore Service? xDD
Date: 11/10/09 10:28 am Title: We're On Fire
I love this chapter :) But it was litle hard to understand when ally sayd somthing or when she tought about it..
It wuold be nice to if somthing fluffy, romantic wuold start soon ;D
Author's Response: *face palms* that wasn't supposed to happen...Haha, there will be fluffy romance really soon, promise. Like, within the next two or three updates soon ;)
Date: 11/10/09 04:09 am Title: We're On Fire
ahhh...this makes my life considerably brighter and cheerful...lol
i love this story...sarcasm and humor are my favs in a story...5 starzies!!!!
oh and i love how you make up words..your awesome :P
Author's Response: Aww :3 Thank you so much!
Date: 11/10/09 12:44 am Title: We're On Fire
Mmhhh.... Something that takes a stab at his masculinity. Glitter radar or something of the sort.. xDD
Author's Response: xD Just because stabbing his masculinity is so fun, lol!
Date: 11/10/09 12:03 am Title: We're On Fire
1 love love love, please post more soon, like tonight maybe?
2 bill-dar which is basically what you already have. :)
Author's Response: how did I not think of Billdar? lol xD update is on the way, promise!
Date: 11/09/09 11:33 pm Title: We're On Fire
This is so funny! I couldn't stop snickering as I scrolled down the page.
Author's Response: xD !
Date: 11/09/09 11:09 pm Title: We're On Fire
1) LUVVVVVVVVVV XD
2) U SHOULD CALL IT BILLDAR :D
Author's Response: I didn't even think of that! lol xD
Date: 11/09/09 06:01 pm Title: Mission Impossible
God, thanks to you, my parents think I am mentally challenged. Because aparantly it's not normal to burst out laughing randomly and fall off the sofa in the process, taking your laptop with you... :S
Author's Response: I giggled, picturing that. Sorry :P Pft...who wants to be normal? Normality is way overrated ;D
Date: 11/07/09 11:12 am Title: Mission Impossible
i just finished reading all the chapters and ists awesome
update soon please :D
Author's Response: xD glad you think so. Next update is on it's way!
Date: 11/04/09 06:01 pm Title: Mission Impossible
XDDDD
I fucking love this story. It's seriously great.
Write more soon.
Author's Response: Hells yeah! Now, that's the kinda enthusiasm I like to see. Lol. I'll update again soon, promise! xD
Date: 11/04/09 04:01 pm Title: Mission Impossible
XDXDXD i like it, keep updating i want to see where the whole dating thing ends up great job. Ok I'm off to go grab a monkey ;)
Author's Response: Sooo happy you're liking it. I really appreciate the feedback. I've got tons of craziness planned for Ally and...well everyone really. xD Mind bringing me back a monkey? Bill took mine. That monkey hogging pretty boy...aargh! Lol.
Date: 11/04/09 03:43 pm Title: Frickin Drama Queen
This is so funny, is hilarious, her internal thoughts are good. I really like this story. keep writing
Author's Response: xD!