Date: 12/20/09 04:00 am Title: He Is Confusing
ahhhhhh....you finally updated!!
thank youuuuu :D
k so first off you shouldn't be the least bit iffy about this chapter!! you did an excellent job as usual :D
now unto the stuffing...lol
1) She pictured him naked!!! I knew she would sooner or later. (yay for sooner xD).
2) It was totes cute-tastic how he kissed her. one second he's mocking her, and the other he's gently slurping at her face...xD. but seriously it was cute)
3) Cat ist RICHTIG! she likes him, but she's in denial....until after the whole bill naked image.
i think now she'll start really falling for him and realizing it along the way. She's still gunna be as stubborn and sarcastic about the whole thing, but i think in time, she'll realize that she likes him alot; that she always has.
THANKS FOR UPDATING...UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's Response:
I took forever, I know xP But thank you, you're too kind. I laughed so hard at that kiss discription. Nice choice of words. I'm lovin' it!
O_O Holy monkey, I sound like a Mickey D's comercial. Rofl.
Totes liking the way you think ;)
Date: 12/20/09 02:50 am Title: He Is Confusing
*___* I love this
Author's Response: Yay! xD
Date: 12/20/09 01:11 am Title: He Is Confusing
"Hell, I pictured Tom eating fried chicken"
best line ever xD
and she shouldn't feel so bad! ally, i mean. i have tons of gay friends that i've kissed/pictured naked. but maybe that just goes to show you how nuts me and my friends are xD
anyways, this story is a blast to read and i hope you update soon. i cross my heart i'll update in return! =]
Author's Response:
Hehe.
Ally's a spazz, I had to make her freak. No worries, she'll get over it soon enough.
I'm trying my best to post before the 25th. So imma hold you to that :D
Date: 12/19/09 07:10 pm Title: He Is Confusing
This is actually awesome
Author's Response: Thank you x)
Date: 12/19/09 05:06 pm Title: He Is Confusing
GAHH! I could kill you right now. Stop it there?! >< Start writing woman, we're going to need another chapter (: By the way, don't be iffy on this chapter, it's fantastic
Author's Response: AHHH!!!!! (insert OHMYGOD/Gasp face here) I thought you said no one would bite my head off! You can't kill me! I'm too young to die! I have yet to rub the lucky forehead and witness Tom's excitedness! LMFAO! I've written a bit today but the rest will just have to wait. I am off to the land of obsession that holds the answer to life. WALMART!!!! Promise I'll write more once I get back. =D
Date: 12/19/09 06:21 am Title: He Is Confusing
Yes, I am pissed you left it there.
But I still love you for this story, damnit!
Update soon! :)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks you. I love you for being such an awesome reviewer, damnit! Lol. I'll be trying my best to update before Christmas. xD
Date: 12/19/09 05:16 am Title: He Is Confusing
Finally, another chappy :D I love the last sentence. It kills. :D
More...
Author's Response: I know, I took forever, lol. There's much more to come. Hopefully that last line wasn't too fatal. I like my readers alive! xD
Date: 12/19/09 05:00 am Title: He Is Confusing
I think this chapter was good :) and catrins assuptions was good And hoppfully true ;D
Author's Response: It is true...in a way (insert smirk here). A vague little comment, I know. But it'll all clear up soon. :D
Date: 12/18/09 11:45 am Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
1. wow i was expecting this but just WOW
2. Bill likes her his body knows but his mind hasn't accept it yet.
3. that was unexpected, i wonder what bill thinks of andy.
4. For some reason I can't don't know why
5. Ally hurt him, and maybe he's confussed about the whole dating his best friend thing, maybe he likes the idea too much and that is upsetting him
update soon please :)
Author's Response: I hope that's a good wow =D
Date: 12/17/09 08:59 pm Title: We're On Fire
Ally is amazing I just love her, she's so funny.
Well I like Billy senses it sounds good but how about sparkly senses since bill is so sparkly XDXD
oh by the way, la paz bolivia is where there aren't fortune cookies and also where i live.
Author's Response: xD Glad you think so. Ah, so I'm sensing fellow hispanicness, awesome =D
Date: 12/14/09 10:23 pm Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
i love LOVE this story, darling. it's fabulous! please update soon!
Author's Response: You have just made my day! I cannot express how awesome it is that you took the time to read and review to my story. You're my favorite author on the site. Saying you like my work means so much *hugs* xD
I've already finished the next chapter and am waiting for my beta to email me back with the corrections. I'll post as soon as I can. Hopefully you can update soon too. I need my fix of Lex/Bill lovin' ;D
Date: 12/08/09 03:18 pm Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
OMG! I love this story! It's so funny, there's been so many points where I've just started creasing. So different from DBYKI. Well done :)
1) Shock horror! Get in there Ally.
2) Mmhmmm. I'm sensing something thats not friendship.
3) I do sense drama. I would love to see Bill get jelous and kick his arse, disproving the he 'hits like a granny' theory
4) No, I totally see that too. My friend sent me a picture from one of their recent photoshoots and you can totally see a little stubly outline. I loled a bit. It's not that odd a thought, Bill with a mustache. But Tom. All I picture is Tom with a Stalin mustache.
5) She damaged his ego and he totally likes her so it hurt his feelings more so than t normally would. Or he was in a bad mood anyway because he's jealous of what Tom has.
I proper love it! Go you!
Author's Response: Yay! I am so happy you're liking it. It's my first comedy so I kinda went out of my comfort zone to write this. But it's fun. I'm loving Ally's character so far. She's just so sarcastic and spunky xD
1) I just had a Everybody Hates Chris Moment "You are so in there" hehe.
2&3) I'm liking your senses ;D
4) Rofl, Tom with a mustache!
5) Those are basically two of the major reasons why Bill was being bitchy. There's another but we'll see what it is with time ;)
Date: 12/08/09 06:55 am Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
Wow, awesome story by the way. Andy will of couse bring drama, and I think just maybe a little more, that Bill and Ally.....connect....with each other more often than what is. Bill should seem to be into her more, cause she should fell rejected here soon.Just my thought on what I want to happen.
Author's Response: xD Thanks! I'm so happy you think so. Of course, Ally and Bill will be connecting more, much more, and soon. I just didn't want to rush into things to quickly but I promise, from here on out the two of them will be getting more friendly on a less friend-like basis. Then there's also the upcoming drama. And I assure you, feelings of rejection will be coming into play too.
Date: 12/08/09 06:55 am Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
Wow, awesome story by the way. Andy will of couse bring drama, and I think just maybe a little more, that Bill and Ally.....connect....with each other more often than what is. Bill should seem to be into her more, cause she should fell rejected here soon.Just my thought on what I want to happen.
Date: 12/06/09 10:40 am Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
AWESOME
Author's Response: xD!
Date: 12/06/09 10:40 am Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
AWESOME
Date: 12/05/09 08:12 am Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
I really can't imagine Bill shaving :D
More :D
Author's Response: I know, it's hard. I can actually picture him with a mustache easier than I can imagine him shaving. And that's mostly because a friend of mine actually photoshopped him a mustache once lol.
Date: 12/04/09 02:35 pm Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
This is a great story, and I hope that bill starts to like ally more then as a friend :)
Author's Response: xD Thank you! We'll just have to wait and see now, won't we. ;D
Date: 12/04/09 12:26 pm Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
Gasp!
Ally is SO funny :D
Well done, and update quick, please?
Author's Response: =D ASAP, pinky swear! (Hopefully that's within the week)
Date: 12/04/09 08:27 am Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
I forgot aout the banner: good choice!
Now i have to pee, I haven't gone to the bathroom till I finished the whole story in one session! Bye!
Author's Response: Lol, thanks xD!