Date: 02/10/10 05:43 pm Title: He Is A Girl
IIIIIII think Bill has told Tomi he has feelings for Ally >D
... just a guess xD and the billboard fight? BURRRRRRRRRRRRN!! :D
Author's Response: xDD
Date: 02/10/10 04:44 pm Title: He Is Confusing
LOL Tom eating fried chicked... sexy hexy *wiggles eyebrows*
... this is simply genius my friend, GENIUS! :D
Author's Response: I know, so hot...ROFL. Thank you babes. xD
Date: 02/10/10 04:06 pm Title: He Is Mind Goopifying
:O Kissy wissy!!
This story is so funny.
I can not stop laughing,, and its not my cute little giggle either its my propper dorky-faced--grinning-silent-laugh-that-looks-like-a-clown-having-a-panic-attack-laugh xD
Author's Response: Lol that is such a fun mental picture xDD
Date: 02/10/10 02:33 pm Title: We're On Fire
LOLOLOL I seriously love this HILARIOUUUUUS!!
Author's Response: Hehe, glad you think so chica xD
Date: 02/10/10 05:56 am Title: Man Oh Man
Nice again :) just don't let Bill have to much fun with the barbie girl ;) I think he should save it for Ally :D Hope you write again soon!
Author's Response: I've already started the next chappy. I'll try getting it out real soon ;)
Date: 02/10/10 05:21 am Title: Man Oh Man
Great Update. I thnk Bill needs a Captian Obvious shirt. He's almost predictable to a certain point.
Author's Response: Thanks babes. I'll make sure that shirt is extra sparkly ;) lol.
Date: 02/09/10 11:17 pm Title: Trouble
Haha I love your stories and glad to have found you again.
I couldn't sleep it was 5am and found your story I was like yayy haha. Can't wait for more *hugs*
And Bill its so trying to make her jealous haha.
Author's Response: *hugs back* Its fabulous to hear from you again chica xD hehe, i'll try my best to update real soon ;]
Date: 02/09/10 09:41 pm Title: Man Oh Man
darn you!!! i wanna read moooore!!
you're a bigger tease than bill's sparky ass.
Author's Response: I'm taking that as a compliment ;D
Date: 02/09/10 07:00 pm Title: Man Oh Man
This story will be the death of me O_O
Author's Response: I hear fairy dust prevents death. I'll ask Bill to share his stash. x3
Date: 02/09/10 05:39 pm Title: Frickin Drama Queen
LOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
....LOL! xD
Author's Response: xD!
Date: 02/09/10 03:01 pm Title: Man Oh Man
Oh no Bill didn't.
Someone needs to get that boy some brains.
Like now.
Poor Ally ):
And I would've just about killed Bill's cat by now if I were Ally >.>
Can't wait for the next chapter (:
Author's Response: Oh yes Bill did ;] lol. I'll try to get the next chapter out real soon =)
Date: 02/09/10 01:48 pm Title: Man Oh Man
awww this is awesome
Author's Response: So very happy you think so chica :)
Date: 02/09/10 01:25 pm Title: Man Oh Man
1. omg that was crazy he acted like nothing happened it drove me insane.
2. i can see why bill gets touchy hes so sensitive hahaha
3. lol i felt jealous for her hahaha
4. ooooh that made me so mad at bill lol
5. a reunion does sound good
maybe andreas should put a move on ally so then bill can know what it feels like. thatd be total drama XD
Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see ;)
Date: 02/09/10 11:40 am Title: Man Oh Man
Aww, I love kisses :D they act like little children... and that makes this story amazing ;] more more more soon soon soon please please please
Author's Response: I'll try my best to get the next chappy out asap ;D
Date: 02/09/10 09:25 am Title: Man Oh Man
Love this!!
Author's Response: Holy bajesus, it's been a while since I've heard from you missy! I'm glad you love xDD
Date: 02/09/10 06:49 am Title: Man Oh Man
I absolutely enjoy points 1,2 and 3 in your chapter end notes! It's fun and mmm it makes Bill look so sweet and sexy...He's not as stupid as Ally would like to believe, since he gets the courage to kiss her again and then go flirty the same day, right under her nose! I love his mixture of girliness and boyshness (God, I start making words too!)
Author's Response: :3 Ally's got Bill pictured a certain way; girly, weak, a pansy, bratty, pouty-princess ect--due to all those years they've been stuck in the friendzone. But in reality (i use the term loosly lol) Bill really isnt like that. At least not entirely. Even though he is girly xD thats a gimme. Rofl. We've just met the flirty-boyish side to Bill. So yeah, there's bound to be quite a few things Ally herself doesn't know about Bill...yet! xD
Date: 02/09/10 05:22 am Title: Man Oh Man
Ajrjhthhthwhefhehrhwkwjdhfhturghfrhrg OHMYGOD. BILLS A WHORE! Fhrjhtehdhfgjkerjjrekeotjgd
ok, I feel muuuuuuuch better now x)
when you mentioned an ending to the chapter that would drive everyone crazy, I wasn't thinking that. Bill the bitchy birdman whore (:
so disapointed in him right now. Tsk tsk.
I guess all this means NEXT CHAPTER (: interesting to see where this takes things.
ONE MORE THING:
there should not be one tincy wincy -spelling fail-bit of iffyness in your not-feeling-so-good body (speaking of that, hope you feel better. Maybe listen to a little Pain of love remix) right now because the chapter was perfect (: if there was iffyness, you know where you're going.
Ok, I'm sure this is, like, the longest review ever so I'll shutup before you fall asleep (:
keep writing, my dear pickle dancer - omg just imagined a pickle bellydancing 8)
Author's Response: sdjkfgsdlfgjdkaghdfgdshglajkdghi LMFAOOOOOOOOOOO! A belly dancing pickle!!! That just made my day so much brighter 8).
I OHMYGOD now the song is stuck in my head!!! RIFLLL thank you person of the future. Oh no! Not the Nile! My lips are sealed...kinda. I do not feel better Dx I actually feel like a bazillion times worse. But thanks anyways 83 LOBE!!
Date: 02/09/10 03:21 am Title: Man Oh Man
Oh man... I don't know why, but I feel this urge to cry. This is so sad! I can't believe Bill is so... blind to Ally's feelings. What an a-hole (sorry Bill). But that whole kiss scene was amazing hahaha I wish one of them would have said something about it.
Hehe and the parts about her super powers completely failing to destroy Bill totally crack me up everytime and so does the whole everlasting patience thing. I literally think of it on a daily basis. Someone will tell me "be patient!" and I can't help but think to myself "EVERLASTING PATIENCE!" XD hahaha
I also would like to mention that I LOVE the fact that you use "themes"/characteristics of Bill as the title of each chapter. It clearly defines Bill's character (well, as clear as Bill's confusing character can get at least lmao).
Fantastic chapter(or chapters/story I should say lol)! Excited for another update! :)
Author's Response: Would it make you feel better if I updated real soon? =3 I'mma try my best to do just that! Rofl, at least I know I'm not the only one. The other day I actually ended up saying the words "gerf" and "purrtyful" in front of my dad. He gave me a WTF face -_-'...let's just say I wasn't allowed to play boggle on Sunday...
Date: 02/08/10 11:11 pm Title: Man Oh Man
ok i'm going to throw his high heeled boot at his head. What a *tard! ugh!
Men! I say she finds herself a hot hunka man...if it happens to make Bill jealous i wouldnt mind one bit =] hehe.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Hahaha I hear ya ;]. I'll try my best to update real soon! xD
Date: 02/08/10 10:11 pm Title: Man Oh Man
GRRRR BILL!! WHAT THE H!
I kinda have the feeling he's doing all of this to make her jealous. He probably got that chicks number, but he most likely won't use it. He just has proof to back him up is anyone asks xD
GAH HE MAKES ME MAAAD >=[
Ally and Kasmir? LOL. now we know.
Bill hates it when he's called girly (esp. by her) cuz in his eyes, he wants to be her "man" lol. does that make sense? xD
oh and most importantly...HE LIKES HER JUST AS MUCH AS SHE LIKES HIM. There. I said it! lol
Thanks again :D
Author's Response: Bad Mr. Sparkles, bad! ;] Lol, i love your thinking missy. And yes, it does make perfect sense.(insert smirk here)But we're just gonna have to wait and see.