Date: 02/21/10 06:30 pm Title: Trouble
ahaha...why thank you! I always use that word! it sums up alot of what Bill is at the moment. so does bonehead xD
I say you include both words in the next chapter xD
but we love him. GAH him and his sexiness should be arrested for being to awesome. lol
Good luck writing the next chapter :D
xoxoxo *hugss*
Author's Response: I have included both words in the next chappy, its finished and has been sent off to my beta. I should be posting some time tomorrow =D *hugs back*
Date: 02/21/10 02:45 pm Title: He Is A Guy
You're killing meeeee
Author's Response: That is a good thing, right? I'm taking it as a compliment =D
Date: 02/21/10 01:39 pm Title: He Is A Guy
this was sooooooooo awesome!!!
i can't wait until you update!!!
once again...i really hope that Bill and Ally have a happily ever after!!
:D
Author's Response: thank you, chica. So very happy you think so! xD
Date: 02/21/10 01:23 pm Title: He Is A Guy
Love it- She's not any more guilty of not telling the truth than Bill! I wouldn't tell him anything till he agrees to tell the truth about the date.
She has rearranged her whole life to help Bill with this media lie, and now
he goes and blows it, with someone else.
I wouldn't get this madd if the story weren't that good but it is that good!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, chica xD
Date: 02/21/10 11:32 am Title: He Is A Guy
a very nice chapter, AGAIN :) jumping around and waiting for the next one ;)
Author's Response: Thank you chica =D
Date: 02/21/10 06:00 am Title: He Is A Guy
1. awww why billa???
2. omg i so want to see andreas' moment!
3. oh no not that hair im finding it hard to believe
4. i DID click the link ohmygosh are bill and ally gonna do it?? or is it bill and adelyn. if its bill and adelyn im not gonna be a happy camper lol
Author's Response: I'm posting a link to a doodle of what Bill's hair is supposed to look like in the next chappy, so no worries. It'll be up soon ;)
Date: 02/20/10 06:41 pm Title: He Is A Guy
If reviews get you to update faster I will review once a day until you update again.
Would that count?
I really do love this. I find that when a lot of authors have stories written in the females POV and they include humor in her thought process it comes across as not very well written, but you my friend should be declared queen of this.
You seem to really understand your characters, which is really important. I find many authors don't. Or it turns into a Mary sue... Yuck.
So onto the part where I actually review this chapter? Yes.
Ally is like a ticking time bomb at the point I think. I mean eventually she is just going to blow. How could she not? I know if I was in the situation I would.
And Bill... Where to start. Either he was a very bad boy on his date which is why he isn't telling Ally about it or he had a terrible time with said Barbie because he was busy thinking about a certain best friend.
As for the whole look change, clearly he has taken what Ally said about being girly to heart. Which proves he does infact care about what she thinks of him, whether its in a best friend sense or a 'I think I might really like you more than a best friend should' sense is the real question.
This is about to get really friggen interesting I think. Pretty much hanging on the edge of my seat. So be the love of my life and update soon!
Wonderful.
And I'm done!
Author's Response:
I love these characters! They’re all so different but sorta similar at the same time. All of them are just so fun to write, especially Ally. She is just such a spazz and so different from any persona I‘ve ever written. I‘m so glad you guys like her too! xD
And you’re right, Bill has taken what Ally said to heart. Her opinion is very important to him and that’s what brought on the whole look change. His motives are a little sketchy right now, but that’ll all clear up with some time along with Ally’s denial. Tic tock, tic tock.
Speaking of time, sorry I haven’t been able to update. Does that mean I lose love? =( Next chapter should be up real soon though!
Date: 02/20/10 06:08 pm Title: He Is A Guy
...Oh, bestill my frantic heart.
I can't believe I'm about to say this but... HOLY CRAP, THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING!
Normally, het makes me scream like spider-finding!Bill, clutch my little slashy stories to my chest and run for the hills, but I actually got all the way through this story without cringing away in fear.
And you know, it takes a certain kind of het author to make me NOT cringe in fear. And you, dear, just happen to make my top five. (I hope I didn't offend you by those last statements, I tend to offend the shit out of people when I'm completely honest... which is why I tend to lie--but not this time!)
I like this story. Alot. Because: a) it's fricken hiliarious.
b) I can thoroughly relate to Ally... her personality, I mean (because if I were in this situation, wouldn't be here reading about it)... I see a little of myself in her... okay, a lot of myself... have you been stalking me? Heh, kidding.
c) I just enjoy it. I cna't help but enjoy it. Really. You, darling, are sublime. Getting me to read AND enjoy het is a feat within itself but huzzah! for you.
So, Bill's an idiot, no duh, but seriously, I hope do god he isn't that thick in real life... I wanna smack him upside the head sometimes. *scowls* stupid boys. Tom is... well, Tom. I like the oc's. Nice, very nice. And am currently 'WTF'-ing at Bill's hair.
Yeah, those are my feelings right about now. *sigh* I can't wait for more. Really, I can't...
Author's Response: Kay, first of all...No I am not offended--not at all! I'm actually not one to BE offended easily so be as brutally honest as you like. Constructive critism leads to improvement. And there is always room for improvement. So it is very much welcomed in my book ;] Secondly, I've taken your review as a huge compliment that'll most likely make my head swell up to rival the size of Tom's (sexy) massive forehead lol. It's always super (I said super! You should try it, its fun 8D hehe)getting new readers. I'm so happy you gave this story a chance AND enjoyed reading it. xD I'm trying as hard as I can to update real soon. Cross your fingers for me so I can hopefully post no later than this weekend since I can't really do it myself while typing ;D
Date: 02/20/10 06:03 pm Title: He Is A Guy
Ahhh!!! I can't believe he cut his nails! XD Update soon!!!!! =]
Author's Response: Believe it! xDD I'll try my best to finish and post the next chappy real soon =)
Date: 02/20/10 09:21 am Title: He Is A Guy
So jealous :DDD More ;D
Author's Response: Soon! Hopefully =D
Date: 02/20/10 06:26 am Title: He Is A Guy
Oh wow, this story is AWSOME!!! I want more now please!! :D I love how random Ally's inner thought process is, she's hilarious.
Naughty Bill for not telling Ally about what happened on the date though!
Author's Response: aww thank you. I'm so glad you think so. Hehe, yeah, Bill is such a naughty boy xD
Date: 02/20/10 02:51 am Title: He Is A Guy
Love.
Author's Response: Yay! Glad you love, chica xDD
Date: 02/20/10 02:18 am Title: He Is A Guy
I love your story...you just don't update often enough :(
Author's Response: If I could, chica, I'd update every day. But with school and the three projects I've got to get done, it seems like the universe itself is set against me Dx But no worries, I've already gotten started on the next chappy and hopefully I'll be able to get that out real soon =)
Date: 02/20/10 01:35 am Title: He Is A Guy
Haha awesome!!
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks babes xD
Date: 02/20/10 01:31 am Title: Trouble
YAY NEW CHAPTER! *party!!*
K so review from me again!!!!
Alrighty. So a couple things:
1) i wanna strangle Bill with my bare hands cuz of his douche-tard move he did there. *i kinda have the feeling that his version of a "date" was getting his hair cut and his nails done at that chick's salon y/y?*
2)Tom is being nosy cuz Bill told him he likes Ally. he's just seeing what Ally thinks of Bill.
3)As per usual, GREAT story. I'm kinda anxious to read the second chappie. I read the hint. NOW I REALLY WANNA KNOW xD
Keep on going. I love it
Author's Response: Ahh douche-tard, my new favorite word of the month. Right next to bonehead. Cuz, that's just what Billy-boy is at the moment. He's a clueless douche-tard bonehead. But you just can't help but love the guy ;D I've already started on the next chapter, so hopefully I'll be able to get that out real soon xD
Date: 02/12/10 05:13 pm Title: Trouble
he is so fucking complicate, bill, boy, your are so in love with ally.
i want to read a bill POV...¿please?.
like always, this chapter was amazing, update more..soon.
Author's Response: I'm planning on writing another HBL one-shot later on in Bill's POV. It wont be for a while though. But no worries, things with Bill will clear up...eventually ;D.
Date: 02/12/10 04:39 pm Title: Man Oh Man
WHAT?! he is such an idiot! Their cover is going to be blooooooooooowwwwwn, the paps will have a fiiield day!
he is sooo just trying to make her jealous,, but idiot she kissed you! Theres no need!
And purlease its so obvious he likes her with him not wanting her to see him as being girly anymores.. *sigh* Bill, your too sparkly for your own good u.u
Author's Response: He's inhaled too much hairspray and sparkle fumes, its all gone to his head. Tsk tsk, Billy-boy you're digging yourself into a muddy hole here.
Date: 02/12/10 02:22 am Title: Trouble
Awesome!!
Author's Response: totes awesomeness xD
Date: 02/11/10 05:22 pm Title: One Thousand Seas
Haha you have no idea how much this saves me, I've been reading it everytime I've managed to take a break from my stupid coursework xD
And the 'ms kellar ms kellar!' bit made me get the 30H! song thingy stuck in my head
... shush Bill shut your lips do the funky chicken and talk with your hips :D *boogies*
Author's Response: Omg, that just made my day! Roflll, I love your lyrics even more than I do the song ;D *boogies too*
Date: 02/10/10 06:04 pm Title: Man Oh Man
I love this story! Ally is awesome and I just love your portrayal of Bill. He so cute! <3
I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you. So very glad you love, chica xD