Date: 03/12/10 08:17 am Title: He Is Pretty
:O It was a dream? aww man D:
I laughed so much at the reseraut bit,, I chocked on my waffle xD
1. Hot and No actually I did not cringe even though I am not used to het,, so good job ;D
2. Tom is a mystery... but he knows Bill so maybe he want to see how she feels? idk xD
3. THAT was what made me choke on my waffle :D
4. I like cats... but kasmir seems like a bad omen o.o
6. You missed out 5 :P
I love this fic btw xD
Author's Response: Are you serious? (goes back and checks) oops. Rofl I did miss five. I knew that...LMFAO waffle choking. Chew your food there missy ;) Don't want my wonderful readers to die in the midst of eating waffly goodness. Then who would review my stories? xDDD I dont know where all my cat hostility is coming from lately. I'm a cat person. I love cats. I have a cat...who just decided to come up to me a bite the shit out of my arm. Yeah, I feel the love kitty. Anywaysies, so very happy you love, chica! xD
Date: 03/12/10 02:54 am Title: He Is Pretty
Happy bday first of hope all your wishes come true!
Loved it it was so good and sensual. I can't wait for them to do the real thing. Oh man I really hope it wasn't dream maybe she passed out after they shared that momment even if they couldn't have sex. It was so good I'm so ready for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! xD Unfortunately, it was just a dream. I'm kinda evil to my characters that way. Mwahaha :3
Date: 03/11/10 11:36 pm Title: Trouble
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Oh i really loved the chapter. For a second i couldn't tell if it were a dream or not, too bad it was. And anyway this is like the Matrix i cant tell the diffrence between the dream world and the real world. lol
Author's Response: Thank you babes! xD I love that movie. Actually, arent there three of them? Crap, I dont remember ever seeing the third. I dont think I even have that one. Dang it, I feel like watching that now. Ally passed out around the time she imagined Bill and Adalyn kissing. I think I mentioned something about her closing her eyes for a second there...it's a hint kinda. lol
Date: 03/11/10 10:57 pm Title: He Is Pretty
Okay so first HAPPY BIRTHDAY BABY!!!!! You can come to Alberta, you're legal here too!
Second, oh my fucking god. Let's recap what happened when I read this.
1) my dinner is now ashes. And no, I didn't notice until my smoke alarm went off.. 2) my cat decided to get rid of a hair ball on my carpet. And because I didn't get it fast enough, I now have a beautiful stain on my carpet.
However at the moment I don't even care. That was just... Gah!!! I can't even function properly right now.
When I saw you updated this, I danced around my living room like an idiot, squealed like a fan girl, then giggled like a 13 year old.
And darling, you will NEVER lose my love. EVER. If anything, you gained more of it.
Alright on to the review.
So... Ally is potentially a little kinky when drunk? I love it. That was the hottest non-sex scene I have ever read. So I am really hoping I get one... At least. I needed a cigarette after that. So to answer the question, yes HOT!
I think Bill really does like her. I don't think this is just his girly boy hormones running amuck.
Also, while I was waiting and waiting for this to update I re-read it about 3 times and I really want to know why Ally dislikes Andy so much. It has to be more than just normal ex dislike.
And Barbie girl... I was happy she did not make an appearance in this chapter. Ally probably would have exploded. But I want to see how this pans out. Does Billa actually like her or is she just a distraction to him? Hopefully its the latter.
Catrin is slowly becoming one of my favorite characters because of this line
"You know what? You should seduce him. Like, totally fuck his brains out. That would show him."
That right there wa just epic, because we all know that is exactly what Ally wants to do.
Also, one more thing. Really? That had to be a dream? WHY?!?!?!?! Ugh.
I think I am done for now. Maybe. I might think of more later. When my brain is not... Goopified.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! xD
Question: that’s in Canada, right? If there’s one thing I epically suck at it’s geography, so I’m just guessing. And are you sure SpiderBill didn’t just sneak into your kitchen? That boy does have a tendency for turning food into ash. You can blame him easy ;)
I’m glad you caught that. Because you’re right. Ally’s resentment towards Andreas is more than just typical ex disliking and she definitely has her reasons. We’ll be delving further into that soon along with the whole Adalyn thing. I’m afraid we haven’t seen the last of Barbie just yet.
I’m actually still debating on the steamy scenes for this story. I want to try to keep this R rated so I can’t be too graphic. I haven’t had much experience writing erotica and my imagery needs some work so this is a challenge in itself. But its great to know I’m doing well so far =D And yes, it had to be a dream because I’m kinda evil that way. Mwahahaha! x3
Date: 03/11/10 10:55 pm Title: He Is Pretty
That is the most adorable drawing ever ^^
Author's Response: aww, thank you =D
Date: 03/11/10 09:47 pm Title: He Is Pretty
I loved SO MUCH in this chapter xD
"My ex-boyfriend was now commenting on my sex life with Bill. My non-existing sex life with my fake boyfriend, who just happens to be my best friend"
"Get you naked, I mean. You know what? Screw that, we should totally have sex...naked.
Well, that depends...is Bill naked?
I peaked at him from a discreet side glance and inwardly frowned. Nope, not naked."
The car kissing drunk thing was very hot, you should know. I stared at my Bill poster like =O
The out-loud mental message about the dress nearly killed me, too. Oh my god I laughed my ass off. My poor twin brother just blinked at me and then I had to read it to him too and then we both exploded.
And last but not least...HAPPY FUCKING BIRTHDAY!! *picks you up and spins you about*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! xDD Oh, I'm sure he was looking back at you all smexy with that one eyebrow thing he does lol. I just realized how creepy it would be if your poster winked at you :| ...I'd prolly be all =O myself and have a heart attack if that ever happened. Anywaysies, I'm so very happy you love. Also, I see you've finally updated missy =D I'mma get to reading and reviewing later today since I have a dentist appointment I need to start getting ready for. Again, thank you! xD
Date: 03/11/10 09:25 am Title: Trouble
UGH CAN'T WAIT!!! :D
Author's Response: xD
Date: 03/08/10 11:42 pm Title: He Is A Guy
Yes, I clicked the hint link. Please tell me it will be Ally. If it was Little Miss Fangirl, then how would Bill have time to get his hair done, etc? And he doesn't want to give up any details on the date cuz then he'd have to tell Ally the same truth that she's scared to tell him. I'm hopeful over here that he thought of her and got cold feet. Some things, like real love, just shouldn't be spoiled for the sake of an angsty story. I'm dyin' over here!!! Update soon?? Pretty please?
Author's Response: Dont die on me pweez x3 I like my readers alive! Trust me, it all serves a purpose. Things will clear up soon enough, promise. =)
Date: 03/05/10 03:00 pm Title: He Is A Guy
1. I hope 'Barbie' was a slut on this date, and it made Bill back off? But I'm guessing he sat thinking of Ally all night, instead of his date, so he couldn't wait to get back to see her!
2.Tom's adorable, he hints and then spills the beans on what he knows. He sets the mood for her to realize her raging jealousy!
3. Cut it off, shave it, or let it grow to your knees--it won't matter. Still the most beautiful creature I've ever laid eyes on.
Sorry this is short but I'm having to borrow a computer- Mines trashed. And is going to cost big bucks to fix! Later.
Author's Response: Omg, that sucks. About your computer, I mean Dx But thank you for taking the time to review. It means alot to me that you did =) Oh and I agree full-heartedly. Although, I prolly wouldn't want Bill to shave his entire head, it is his hair and he has every right to do whatever he wants will it. No matter what, he's still some serious eye candy. Yum. xDDD
Date: 03/04/10 10:57 am Title: Trouble
Wonderful. Ally is amazing character and you have portrayed Bill very nicely you write well! Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you think so xD
Date: 03/03/10 01:18 am Title: He Is A Guy
Gah I've been WAYYYYY behind on my fic reading which is why I didn't review for the last one =x SOWWIEZ but okiez heres one for this one lolz
1) Hmmm see my theory here is either Adalyn mentioned his girliness which, added to Ally's comments, lead him to tone it down OR on the date Bill may have realized some of the same things Ally did, due to her "Just as long as I get a little fun too. It's only fair, right?" comment which made him start thinking about her going with another guy annnnd maybe he kind of had a epiphany and Adalyn liked his girliness so he got rid of it because Ally sort of hinted that she was indifferent to it -shrugs- though I'm probably just reading too into things like always xD ((Btw you don't really have to confirm or deny anything, I just like voicing my predictions because then I have proof if it happens that I am psychic =D xDD))
2)Tom... I loved his game... but the way he just left bothered me... which leads me to another theory that maybe he was the reason Bill showed up... huh... can't believe I didn't consider that before xD
3) Ok here is a real review-ish point. I love that you actually used his newest look. Most fics have pissed me off because they were written AFTER the faux-hawk stage and still have him with the hedgehog puff and that just annoys me because I fully stand behind the idea that Bill has EVERY right to change his image if he wants to and these bitchy little whiny fangirls need to just accept that, especially if it makes him happy. Ugh. I will admit that this new hairstyle is taking a bit more for me to get used to than the faux hawk, but like the faux hawk, I'm starting to see it as just Bill and learning to love it xD
4) I clicked the link annnnnd um... I dunno... I think I like Gackie better than Gueline xDDD or even Gaqueline xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD and I think it should be Gustair xD sounds french =D xDDD and Andrally sounds all space alienish =D okiez I think I'm done but I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter xD
Author's Response: Rpfl, use your psychic powers as much as you like ;) I love hearing what you guys think and your predictions. I agree full-heartedly. Hair is hair and it's his hair, Bill has every right to do with it as he pleases. xD Omg, your couple names pwn, lol.
Date: 02/26/10 11:51 pm Title: He Is A Guy
-_- not his hair!
Oh well, is it kinda like how it was when he was fourteen-ish? Or like a cute little emo kid OR normal-ish, but it can't be normal ....cause Bill is just not normal.
Anyway can't wait for an update. ^_^
Date: 02/26/10 11:46 pm Title: He Is Confusing
Big hands are always good for something ...O_o
Author's Response: Rofl xD
Date: 02/25/10 11:29 am Title: He Is A Guy
HA I knew Bill wanted to be less girly for her!! And I like Tom moments,, theyre always funny :D
I still think Bill is stupid though,,, maybe his and Tom's brain got split when they were in the womb so they only have half a brain each... yeah, that would explain it xD
Author's Response: That would definately explain a lot lol.
Date: 02/24/10 07:09 pm Title: He Is A Guy
OMG i feel so mean, i havent reveiwed in like 542346456435783489675893762348957689720 years... Even if you've already heard this from me, i want to tell you again because i lobe you so much.
Shelia, this chapter makes me want to throw Billas head agaist the wall and throw him into a pit, far worse than the Nile, of mospitos and killer spiders bigger than Koalas.
This chapter is awesome, like always. you should feel NO IFFYNESS. NONE. Full stop.
I feel so special (: Don't worry, Billa will save you from that Nile, you rock too, mate 83
Author's Response: OHMYGOD that makes us both old!...Well, considering how big that number is, ancient or possibly prehistoric like birdman 8D. I feel like throwing Tom's forehead into that same pit and beating him with Billa's high heeled shoes. You are special, sheila. Special and crazy, which is why I lobe you so much! 83
Date: 02/24/10 03:10 am Title: He Is A Guy
bill is the most strange person in the world, so he put ally in that lie cause he don't want to date a fan...and then he goes and date with a fan...what the hell?
and ally is so jealous.
i hope that the hint means what i am thinking hehehehe.
the chapter was,,,wow no words to described it
Author's Response: Oh yeah, she is so jealous. Lol, I dunno, was it what you were thinking? (insert eyebrow wiggle here) xD
Date: 02/23/10 06:47 pm Title: He Is A Guy
'Gasp' :O Okay, first of all, I must admit that this fic is probably one of only three fics on this site that I actually get excited about when I see an update... And I pin that down to your unique style and finesse for writing... Anyway, back to the story... Something had to have happened on Bill's date, he came back all flustered and bizarre... I think Ally had every right to be upset with him... There were several points in this chapter where I was just willing Ally to slap Bill for being such a douche, muhaha. Anyways, brilliant as usual, I look forward to reading more soon! (=
Author's Response: Lol, the evil laugh. I am so happy you're enjoying this story and thank you for the compliements, chica. Means a lot xD
Date: 02/23/10 01:33 am Title: He Is A Guy
Geuline (geo jackie) i would so call them georkie (like gorky) lol -coughcough-
bill is such a goddamned airhead, guh! he's blind and insensitive and just stupid, but you've already mad ehtis clear, i just really hope he's actually in reality TRYIONG to win ally over caus eotherwise he's a betch... somethign else we already know.
lol i absolutly love bill in this story, he's osmly guyish, lol withut being all that machoness that guys try to put on, i love it.
Author's Response: lol, i'm glad you like his character. i love writing him (i'm pretty much in love with all these characters, but bill's top three faves). also, georkie is actually way better rofl xD
Date: 02/23/10 12:05 am Title: He Is A Guy
lmfao I love how Ally is now believing she has superpowers. Also, I liked Bill's dreads (pretty smexii), but the fauxhawk isn't bad either.
When I read this story I'm shaking with joy (literally, yeah that's not awkward at all...)I'm also sad because I know the more I read the more it's coming closer to ending and I'll have to wait for another chapter...damn your writing skills.
Author's Response: And to top it off, there's like a thousand year wait in between chapters. But no worries, that wait is almost over! xD I'm posting later today and it's gonna be an extra long chappy. In fact, it's practically monsterous. Oh boy... x3
Date: 02/22/10 06:31 pm Title: He Is A Guy
This is the only story i REALLY look forward to reading here now.. SERIOUSLY lol
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy reading this story so much xDD