Date: 05/01/10 10:08 pm Title: Trouble
Ahhhh, when are you gonna update? >_
Author's Response: Very soon, I promise! Next chapter has already been sent off to my beta. So sorry for the wait.
Date: 04/10/10 11:51 am Title: He Is Pretty
I read both- slash and het. And I love your stories. The pic you drew looks like Adam Lamberts hair now.
Are we gonna get more soon? Chews nails, and wonders, whens Bill going to
jump her?
Author's Response: I'm so very glad you love and am so sorry for the wait. It's been too long, I know. Dx
Date: 04/05/10 08:12 pm Title: We're On Fire
I love this story. Ally is so funny!!!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you love and that you find Ally funny. I must be doing something right then ;)
Date: 04/03/10 08:50 pm Title: He Is Pretty
1. It was pretty hott let me tell you lol
2. I agree with Catrin that Ally should TOALLY tell bill!
3. Andy's comments are totally cuz of jelousy i hope i get to see more of that so then it can cause more drama hahaha
4. Kasimir is adorable I wish I had a kitty lol
5. I loved how long this chapter was and it kept me on the edge of my seat. keep up the good work! your doodle of bill is adorable XD oh and happy late birthday!! hope you update soon :)
Author's Response: Oh we'll be seeing more of Andy soon. And trust me, there will be drama ;] Thank you very much for the birthday wishes. Sorry it's taken me so long. But I should be posting real soon with another lengthy chapter =D
Date: 03/28/10 07:14 pm Title: Trouble
*gets on knees* COME BACK TO MEEE MY LOOOVEEE
Author's Response: I'M A COMIN' LOVEEEE!!! The next chapter has been written up and sent off to my beta. I'm so sorry for the wait, but I should be posting real soon. Pinky promise.
Date: 03/17/10 12:03 am Title: He Is Pretty
Okay so totally not a review.
But I had to respond to your response.
1. Yes, that is in Canada... Haha. Calgary to be excact. Don't ever vacation here. It sucks.
2. I cannot wait to find out why Andy is always harassing Ally with his douche baggery ways.
3. She doesn't have a name. Its Barbie. I refuse to acknowledge that she even exists. Blak. If you are told you look like a Barbie by a 7 year old, its a total compliment. They just think your pretty (this actually happened once). If its used to describe you by a grown up... Not so much haha(this also happened once. I was not a happy camper)
4. If spiderbill was I my kitchen, I would not be writing this. I would be doing very naught things that really should not be spoken about in public. Lol... Uhm..
5. I happen to think your imagery is fantastic. I am still drooling over what I have dubbed "the non-sex scene". But I defs won't pressure you into writing about the nasty.awkward.
Okay so this is kind of turning into a review. As of now!
Ally is going to have more than a nervous twitch and involuntary eyeball rolling when little miss perfect comes back into the picture. Although the drama that will ensue will be highly entertaining me thinks.
Also, Tomi is becoming entirely too smart for his own well being. I really think Cat told him shit all. But Billa clearly has...
On to the topic of Bill. I think I found a good theme song for him from Allys point of view... Monster by Lady CaCa (yes I know its GaGa... But I prefer the first) listen to it. It somewhat describes Allys reluctance as well what we all know what her inner desire is and that is well...Bill naked. That boy is a monster.
And you know... A few chapters ago I thought Ally was going to explode because of the mental stress this is all having on her. But now, not so much. It may be the toll this is taking on her self control when Bill is n the room. Which could go one of two ways for her. Very bad, or very good. Hopefully its the latter.
Tick tock.
See I told you I would have more substance when I was not a pile of goo.
Author's Response:
Lol.
I totally agree. If SpiderBill were ever in my kitchen, I wouldn’t be writing this either. However, that would probably be due to the fact that my head would have exploded from all the blood in my body rushing to my face all at once.
Although that’ll probably end up happening anyways with all you guy’s amazing compliments. You’re gonna give me a swelled head one one day BAM! Bits and pieces of my brain will be splattered everywhere.
There will be future smexy scenes. I’m just debating on how “nasty” ;) I do want to keep the rating so we’ll just have to wait and see what I come up with.
Omg, I’ve had that song stuck in my head for days. DAYS! All thanks to you missy. I actually LOLed at the “he ate my heart and then he ate my brain”. I actually don’t listen to much of Lady CaCa. My cousins love her though. I started humming Monster today and my cousin started singing the entire song which didn’t really help with getting it unstuck from my brain.
Ally’s still on the clock. We’ve got quite a ways to go and that bomb is still counting down.
I’mma try my best to not take forever with the next update. But unfortunately, I’ve got this effing huge mountain worth of writer’s block and it sucks serious eggs Dx
Date: 03/15/10 01:33 pm Title: He Is Pretty
CONGRATULATIONS! (: and the chapter, was the BEST! My eyballs were as big as tennisballs when i read this and i couldn't sit still(: wery nice! post soon again!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, chica! xDD
Date: 03/14/10 06:35 pm Title: He Is Pretty
OMG! when are they getting together?? ;D
Author's Response: Well, I could tell you...but I think you'd rather read and find out. Patience is a virtue ;D
Date: 03/13/10 03:11 pm Title: He Is Pretty
Poor Ally ._.
So much sexy thoughts in one night only to be woken up by Bill's kitty ):
Truely horrible. You need to be nicer to her.
Loved this chapter anyway :)
And congrats, you totally turned Bill into the hotter-straight-verison of Adam Lambert.
You get extra Kudos for that.
And HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Author's Response: I know, I will be nicer to her...eventually, sometime in the nearby future xD I'm so happy you like. Thank you! =D
Date: 03/13/10 03:08 pm Title: He Is Pretty
I should have been the one to offer you something on your birthday, instead you give us this wonderful chap! Funny and smart, as always! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, chica! =D
Date: 03/13/10 03:05 pm Title: He Is Pretty
You're perfectly right, Bill is totally fuckable. The point is that there is noting new in this, except that you made a fucking sexy writing subject out of it. I love it to pieces and trust me, I have a powerful imagination and I read a lot on the guys.
I'm sure Tom is lying about both subjects: Catrin telling him so much and Bill telling him about his date. BTW, did he actually have a date?...
Long chapter, but addicting to read. Girl, you need to make them all so big!
Author's Response: Originally, this chapter was even longer. I had to go back and cut out some stuff because it was just ridiculously long. But I'm glad you like it =D Billy boy was with Adalyn but we'll get back to that soon. I'm afraid we aren't through with Barbie just yet ;]
Date: 03/13/10 02:09 pm Title: He Is Pretty
Happy Birthday!
Loved it all. You did it again girl, now go out and celebrate the big eighteen!
Author's Response: Thank you so much =D
Date: 03/13/10 01:28 pm Title: He Is Pretty
First gratz on your birthday! And second thanks for wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, chica. Means a lot to me =)
Date: 03/13/10 11:34 am Title: He Is Pretty
first of all... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! Second... I LOVE THIS STORY! Words can describe how much I love the constant sexual tension between Ally and Bill. The dream was such a tease!! I literally shrieked out loud when I read it was only a dream! So close and yet so far! Gah! Please, for the love of God, more!! :) Awesome job and again, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Being legal rocks! lol
Author's Response: Hehe thank you so much! All these compliments are going to make my head swell xDD
Date: 03/13/10 11:22 am Title: Trouble
And by the way, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! xD
Date: 03/13/10 11:21 am Title: He Is Pretty
FUCKING AMAZING!
Author's Response: I'm very happy you think so, chica =D
Date: 03/13/10 02:41 am Title: He Is Pretty
HAPPY 18TH!!!
once again you've made a fantastic chapter. i got butterflies myself reading the steamy scenes haha.
the ending was a smack in the face though, poor ally =[
Author's Response: Thank you =D I know, I'm kinda being evil to Ally at the moment. But things will start looking up soon... kind of ;) Embrace my cryptic ways. Embrace it! xD
Date: 03/13/10 12:58 am Title: He Is Pretty
First off: HAPPY 18TH BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!! you are now also legal in Quebec in Canada!
And guuurl! you know you're MORE than welcome to use whatever you want :D but you totally made my day when i read that word in your fic xD. I feel so honored! *hugs*
Author's Response: *hugs back* Thank you so much chica! =D lol that is very good to know. If I'm ever in Canada, I'll be sure to use that to my advantage hehe. And hey, it's an awesome word, it needed to be said! xDDD
Date: 03/12/10 12:29 pm Title: He Is Pretty
Hola,
Happy Birthday mate, 'Pen-blwydd Hapus' as we say here (:
Doing anything nice for the special day??
1) I actually kind of hate you for making it a dream. If they just bonked it would solved so many problems.
2) Maybe Bill's been thinking of Ally naked and told Tom so Tom just guessed she was doing the same.
3) Andy is a douche bag. A douche bag who I personally think is totally into Ally and is really jealous...or maybe he's into Bill.
4) She's gonna end up killing that bloody cat :L
5) you missed five :P
6) Did Bill actually go out with 'Little miss perfect' as a date or was it something else? Maybe she's a beautician and he asked her to cut his hair and nails and stuff to make him more attractive for Ally. Or maybe he did date her and Ally should punch her (: or maybe on their date he wouldn't shut up about Ally so perfect girl got all upset.
Yeah, it's really bugging me, I want to know >.<
Happy birthday anyway, have loads of fun. Unless your birthday was yesterday...In which case I'm a bit late.
Author's Response:
Firstly, how do you pronounce "blwydd"? I'm trying and failing epically here lol. I didn't do anything on my actual b-day. Just kept it simple (stayed in my pjs all day and watched tv). The day after the fam got together. Cake, chips, prezzies, and pizza - the whole shebang. I also watched The Crazies the day after that. It’s been pretty fun, thank you =D
Andy is a douche but he’s not into Bill lol. We’ll learn more about his character soon enough x) As well as the whole deal with Adalyn. I’m afraid we haven’t seen the last of Barbie girl just yet.
Oh boy, you’re the second person to point that out to me *face palms* A fail on my part.
Again, thank you ever so much! xDD
Date: 03/12/10 08:18 am Title: Trouble
Oh and HAPPY BIRTHDAY xD
Author's Response: Thank you! xDD