Date: 05/31/10 07:35 am Title: He Is Pretending
OMG WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MEEEEE?!
My hands and face are seriously abused right now from all this flutterclapping, grinning and slapping my hands to my face in shock/yayness/ or mgwweeeeeeing!
Plus my chair has been squeaking non-stop from my wiggling that it just sounds wrong O.o
1) Ok so its now sooo obvious theyre in love JUST COME ON!
2) I love Tom-Tom's protectiveness... though I'm not sure who hes trying to protect, Aly or Bill... I'm guessing Bill, ITS CUTE and Aly needs to stop abusing him, geez if I was her I would have hugged him instead of glaring so much D:
3) Andy is one jealous son of a bitch... I think he wants Aly back? mmm? hmmmm?
4) Aly may be crazy but I dont think she imagined the shower incident.
5) Ohhhhh I'm going to watch the trailer.
And I'm cutting this review short because I'm been needing to go pee for a while but had to finish reading this first ^.^
OH AND UPDATE SOON :D
Author's Response: Hehe, all part of the plan. I hope you aren't too bruised up. Because this crazy rollercoaster is still going! We're in for a quite a few loops and twists, darling. Hold on tight ;]
Date: 05/31/10 06:32 am Title: He Is Pretending
1. The flirting is more on Bill's side, I think. She is much too "brain melted" to flirt, she just "dives" for it.
2. Tom Tom must know something, of course. Could there be something about someone else? Or does he doubt the serious involvement of the two? Hm, can't say.
3. I had the strange feeling that once in his life,Andy wasn't going to lie about what he had to say. Could it be the same "secret" Tom had? I'm rambling, am I? But my guess is that we can't answer correctly those questions of yours and this only means you've written it nicely. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chap, so hurry!
Author's Response: Thank you, chica. All will be revealed in due time ;D
Date: 05/31/10 05:17 am Title: He Is Pretending
oh my goodness. this story is so fantastic. it brightens my day right up when you update. please tell me that you are will/currently are/have published a book and the exact location i can find it/them
Author's Response: Aww, well I don't have anything published but I've been thinking about de-fandoming this story and maybe one day publishing. But it is so long and nowhere near finished! Plus I'd have to change so much and to be honest, I'm lazy. I'd rather just write a whole other story from scratch lol. Thank you, darling. I'm so happy you're enjoying this :D
Date: 05/31/10 04:14 am Title: He Is Pretending
Ouch. Someone sure isn't getting any tonight.
Funny, I meant Tom but yeah, I'm not getting any either. Thanks for the input. Not.
Bitches.
GAH that killed me!! lol!
(1) FUCKING HOT
(2) Tom knows Bill is in love, caus ei sqwear he is, he just think's ally's not. cause he's an idiot.
(3) andy's just jealous
(4) She's totes not imagining it, gah shower, billl GAH.
(5) love LOVE LOVED this chapter! it was amazing, i don';t know how i mak eit throuh the days you don't update, but someone how i do, but every day i see you have updated is so a million time sbetter :D
Author's Response: Hehe. Thank you, darling =D
Date: 05/31/10 03:43 am Title: He Is Pretending
Aw, poor Ally. I think she might be a schitzo ... just saying (shesh).
Anyways can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: lol, Ally is a lot of things. A spazz, sarcastic, kinda bitter. Bill drives her nuts but she isn't a schitzo. Not quite yet anyways ;]
Date: 05/31/10 03:08 am Title: He Is Pretending
Awesome chapt!!! Moreeeeeeeee!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie. I'm glad you think so xD
Date: 05/27/10 09:42 pm Title: Just Bill
Why do I get the feeling that Bill isn't as dense as Ally thinks he is? Hehe. Update soon? Pretty please? :3
Author's Response: Because he really isn't AS thick as she thinks. But Bill is still pretty clueless lol. Already updated, darling. Enjoy! =D
Date: 05/26/10 02:57 am Title: He Is Pretty
I love ur drawing :) it's so cute :):) o and I liked this chapter a lot :):)
Author's Response: Thank you, chica. I'm glad you like xD
Date: 05/25/10 01:06 pm Title: Just Bill
OMG OMG OMG! I LOVE IT! :D I'm really curious to see what Bill's up to.. O_o Well I can't wait for the next chapter! :D This is my favorite story
Author's Response: Awww thank you :3 Hehe very happy you love, darling xD
Date: 05/25/10 03:25 am Title: We're On Fire
Hahah still luvin it!!! Sitting in bed lmao!!! O and I think it shud b be "bill senses" cuz it sounds better :):)
Author's Response: You know...its been a while since i've mentioned Ally's Billy Senses. I'll have to bring that back soon. I miss em. =]
Date: 05/25/10 02:48 am Title: Frickin Drama Queen
Hahahaha I luv this story!! It's sooo funny!!!
Author's Response: xD
Date: 05/23/10 04:31 am Title: Just Bill
i seriously love your writing. it never gets old. you're one of the few i keep up with anymore on thf!
Author's Response: Thank you, darling. I'm very glad you love, makes me feel like I'm doing well with this xD
Date: 05/22/10 05:32 pm Title: Just Bill
Ohh my god!! You are alive!!!
I am going to warn you that this review a probably not going to be nearly as long as normal. Mostly because putting anything into words right now seems to be impossible but I blame this on one particular boy who lives on the other side of the country. Ugh.
Anyway, I though this chapter was good. It seemed to be a filler more than anything but it was still good. Ally is starting to figure out her feelings more though which is always good.
We haven't seen Barbie yet.. Kind of wondering when she is going to come back into the picture.
And no Andy and his douche baggery ways, which was nice.
It really was just ally and Bill and it was nice.
Please don't take 2 months to update again. I thought I was going to die!
Author's Response:
You can't get rid of me that easy ;D
I know, I hate writing fillers but it was necessary. Think of it as a transition chappy, setting up for all the stuff I've got in store. Don't get too comfortable though, not everything will be rays of sunshine. Things are going to get better before they get worse...Barbie will be making her reappearance soon. And as for Andy...we'll he's coming back alright. I don't want to say too much and give something away. You might want to buckle up, though, cuz we're in for a bumpy ride ;]
No worries, I should be updating sometime within the next few days! Don't go dying on me, kay? xDD
Date: 05/22/10 01:58 pm Title: Trouble
hhaha well good at least that hint narrows it down lol
and thank you :) im glad that took the concept of bill holding her safe well XD im so excited for the update.
Author's Response: Hehe. That should be sometime within the next few days =D
Date: 05/22/10 11:58 am Title: Just Bill
This was so great and i feel a bit sorry for Ally, who would'nt be crazy around THE Bill Kaulitz? :) But yeah, no words can really discribe how good this is so please update soon! :D
Author's Response: Thank you, darling! xD I should be updating some time within the next couple days. I'm just about done with the chappy =D I just want to try to fix the trailer I'm also working on. I've been experiencing a few technical difficulties.
Date: 05/22/10 08:35 am Title: Just Bill
Im not even sure if it was 50 pages... i think more than 50 :) You're still not even at the half of it? Cool! Im so excited to read more!
Author's Response: Soon, love. I've been working on a trailer for this story and got caught up with some technical difficulties, it set back my writing a bit but still, it shouldn't be too long before I get this chappy finished and post again =]
Date: 05/20/10 08:20 pm Title: Just Bill
Ah, yea. I missed this. XD I love how one second you're all over the place and the next you're being a serious as anyone could ever be.
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you darling xD
Date: 05/20/10 06:57 pm Title: Just Bill
I'm dying here I can't wait for them
To get together. Thanx for the update :D
Author's Response: Patience is a virtue ;D
Date: 05/20/10 04:07 am Title: Just Bill
Im addicted to this Fic. I actually printed it just to read it again. it took me about 50 pages. back to back. font size:8. that's how long it is xD Please continue this!
Author's Response: omg, thats a lot! And we arent even half way though the story yet, lol. I'll be trying my best to get the next chappy out ASAP xD
Date: 05/19/10 09:58 am Title: Just Bill
Hdfhuedhfhjddbfbhdshdhhdhdgshhdhrdusjshqhqhdhfhfh OHMYGOD CRAZY I LOBE YOU AND MISS YOU! I feel so special being mentioned.
I most certianly noticed all the stuff you put in there, I couldn't stop laughing LOL it's 12 pm and I have an exam tomorrow so I'm sorry if none of this makes sense :3
you don't need to feel ANY iffyness, sheila, because that was just down right amazing.
I'm so glad the forehead is finally looking after you! You deserve it.
Keep writing, sheila! To get me back on the writing track -hehe I made a rhym- I've began blogging. This means mr mechanic will be getting a whole lot more attention 8)
I will talk to you soon you amashing girl
Author's Response: RIFLLLLLLL Crazy, what is going on in that head of yours? What are you doing up at this hour, hmm? LOL 12 pm? LMFAOO shouldn't you already be at school? You should feel special because you arrrrrrre sheila :3 Actually, I'm planning on finishing up the trailer tonight. I still need to do the narations. And Tom is actually being an uber bitch. I feel soooo bad - sick. Blugh, I dont even know whats wrong with me! I just feel plain awful. OHMYGOD I can hardly even think properly. The forehead is going down...sometime in the future when I can hopefully stand up and not feel dizzy or the urge to hurl into the nearest bucket.