Thanks so much for updating

Author's Response: *Huggles* Thank you for reviewing, darling. =]

i haven't even read this chapter yet, i just had to tell you that OMG I LOVE YOUFOR UPDATEING!!!!!

Author's Response: Here to serve, love. xD

Ok, so I was just reading throgh all the reviews of fics I've left and realised I hadn't left one for yours for a couple of chapters. My bad. Is laziness a disease?

1) I think Bill is really confused, like Ally is with him but they're both too worried about they're friendship to try and work it out.
2) Hmm Tom-Tom is confusing me. I think either he's trying to tell Ally Bill isn't really interested like that or that he is but he doesn't get that Ally is too.
3) Andreas seems like a meddling little shit and I kinda want to just hit him but I think he's gonna try and get Ally drunk and shag her because he like still has feelings for her or something.
4) Poor Ally, maybe she just needs to get laid. lol
5) I really, really love this story. I'm confused about Bill's present, did he give it to her to keep up appearences in front of the parentals or was it him trying to show her he feels more. or did he just not think that much into it? I guess we'll have to see :D

Nice update, keep them coming.

Author's Response: It's a growing epidempic. We all catch it from time to time ;] Next chappy has already been posted, darling x]

gah! finally I got through your fantastic story! gosh I love it so, the way you describe everything in your story.
thanks to you, I now like KSM :D fantastic band. your trailer is great! xD I think I watched it a bazillion times 'til now. I like the way you practice neologism. I adore the word "mind goopifying" (was it written well?)

andreas is actually acting weird. does he want ally back? then why is he jelous?
and tom is worried. uh huh. I'm thinking of what he wanted to tell ally before they got interrupted by andreas. something is up with Universal? bill IS actually in love with ally? gah, you're leaving too much place to speculate!
by the way, what's the meaning of PSMing? I'm not native english, so...


good job, go ahead, please :]

Author's Response: Aww, thank you, sweetie =3 Yes, it is perfectly written hehe. PMS is a term stading for Premenstrual Syndrome. It deals with hormonal emotional changes and bloating and breast soreness and stuff but typically when someone says they are PMSing it means they're being bitchy: irritable and have crazy mood swings. =]

Oh my God! That had me on pins and needles to see how far the kiss would go.
And then you left it there so I can chew off the remainder of my fingernails.

Wonderful to read! Sorry I'm not able to stick around to comment on every point- maybe tomorrow. But I like that Andreas is jealous, I hope Bill notices.

Author's Response: Thank you, darling. I'm very happy you took the time to review =]

Oh my god, honey, I was chewing my snakebites to death through this whole thing!!! The kiss in the hallway was...unf. I've been in this situation before: I feel poor Ally's pain! But mine ended happily. Hopefully it will for her, too!

I'm sorry things have been hard for you, love. If you ever need a friend, I'm here to talk to < 3

The trailer was wonderful, too! Such a creative girl you are ;]

*wanders off to read 'too close for comfort'*

Author's Response: I'm trying to figure out what unf stands for...is it a good thing? lol. Thank you, darling. I really appreciate it =]

Hola, lady! Suuuuper duper happy for an update! I honestly shouldn't be reviewing at this hour (I have to be at work in a few hours -- yikes!), but I always seem to get distracted or I forget... so I owe 'ya. :D

1. Billy-boy rescuing Ally = YES. YES! I'm so grateful -- I was reading the chapter and thinking, "Oh no, pleasepleasePLEASE don't do that thing that authors do -- you know, the thing where the ex gets the girl alone, argues with her, kisses her, and the boy or his friend/brother sees? And it ruins everything?" But you didn't do it! Thank you for not falling into typical and overdone clichés!! His coming out of the shadows, really pissed off, threatening HOTNESS had me giggly. It was marvelous. And Ally's thank you? SIGN ME UP! That was hot, and Bill loved it! I loved the flirtations -- I went kookoobananas for the flirting! I was like, "YES! Finally, they're ALMOST on the same page... meaning sexytime and naked twister! Yay!!"

2. Tom-Tom is acting weird because he's worried about his brother, or maybe even Ally. I think it's the former, personally. I think Tom knows how Bill feels about Ally (let's face it; they tell each other everything, and HBL-Bill probs can't keep a secret to save his life), and Tom is worried that Ally doesn't exactly feel the same way. So he's trying to get her alone to figure it out, because he's trying to save his brother from getting his pretty-pretty heart broken. Ally isn't an open book to anyone who ISN'T reading this story (a.k.a. her mind), so it's not like they know what's going on (unless they had magical micro-expression analyzing powers!! ...I've been watching WAAAAY too much "Lie To Me," sorry).

3. Andreas is having a bad case of "It's not mine anymore, and now I want it!" Ally hasn't been all-up-ons the dating scene until now (sort of), and if she did, it probably didn't last long. With Bill, Andreas knows it's a serious threat; they're obviously made for each other, and Andreas is panicking because he still wants her and considers her "his" or something. Stupid boy.

4. Ally's imagination is awesome. I love it.

5. Watched the trailer -- so much fun :D! I love that you make trailers for your stories, and I LOVED the bit about Tom's gigantic forehead hahahaha. I laughed so, so hard. And the end with the naked bit and everyone heard? So much epic lol.

Normally I'd leave a longer review, one that was positively filled with wittier comments (I hope?) and things you usually laugh at. Sorry this review is a bit devoid; I'm really, really sleepy. But! I wanted to review for you before I forgot or got extremely lazy :D.

Update as soon as you can! It's starting to get reaaaaaally good, seriously. I was on pins and needles the whole time!!

Author's Response: Sweetie, you're reviews always brighten up my day xDDD I smile and laugh like a total dork all the time and I love you for it. You’re very witty, don’t kid yourself ;D Thank you so much for the lovely reviews. I'll try my best to update real soon just for you, kay?

Heres the thing... iM dying :C and the Dr.s Said the only thing that can cure me is if u update this story DAILY XD

Author's Response: DONT DIE! Lol, I wish I could update daily. It is summer but I'm uber busy at the moment. I've moved in with my pops. So between unpacking my junk, driving practice, and job hunting I've got a limit on computer time. But I'll be trying my best to update again soon, kay? =]

1) A timely rescue from an ex deserves a thank-you like that! ;) Why would it be awkward if it's soooo right? Flirting is so full of win - they definitely needed that private moment. It's a beginning that's been a long time coming...

2)I think Tom has observed them enough to realize that Bill also has feelings for Ally, but they're unknowingly taking advantage of the whole ruse, thinking that's the only way they'll ever get to express their newfound love without possible repercussions (ie, rejection, loss of friendship, etc). I believe Tom is just trying to protect his lil bro from getting hurt since Ally /insists/ there's absolutely nothing going on. Whatever, Ally. ;) PLEEEEZ let them figure it out on their own before Tom opens his big mouth again! lolz
3)Andy's just jealous. He had his chance. Pht.
4)Judging from Bill's reaction to Ally's reaction, I think Ally didn't imagine what she thought he said. Methinks Bill, having new feelings of his own to deal with, had a bit of a "did I say that out loud" moment. Sound familiar, Ally? ;)
5)Anything else? Ok, I'm just gonna say it... These kisses/falling asleep together/makeout sessions, whatever you want to make of them... Bill and Ally can't deny it much longer if he happens to pop a boner one day during an incredibly heated kiss. lol You know it's gonna happen the way they're going. Just sayin'... ;P *cough* *wonders how Ally would react to Bill's morning wood* *cough*

Author's Response: Lol, it's inevitable. Those two have quite the sexual tension going on. You can slice through the steaminess with a butter knife ;]

there was so much sexiness going on, I couldn't even conentrate on Tom's forehead haha

1. Bill should start rescuing Ally like 50 times a day if it's going to lead to that. He can save her from little things like tripping and being clumsy. Anything to get some sexy time between the two of them. I love their kisses better when it's not for a show or to prove anything to anyone. They seem more real that way.

2. Tom-Tom and the presents was too freakin funny. I want to know what he was going to say about Bill but stupid Andy always has to ruin things. He was obviously going to say something important. I have a strange feeling that he's going to tell Ally that Bill isn't in love with her and only sees her as a friend or a friends with benefits. Everyone says they are more alike than we think so what if he just wants to mess around and nothing else. Tom was worried more than normal, especially at the end and it had to be for a good reason. I hope Bill loves her though, as more than a friend but you never know.

3. Andy is just an idiot or he knows that Bill doesn't really love her. Who knows what's wrong with that kid.

4. Ally's overactive imagination is awesome and entertaining. She should have taken Bill up on that shower offer though.

5. This story is so kickass. I looooooved looooooved looooooved the gifts! and Tom's childish behavior. I'm about to check out the one-shots now.

Author's Response: Thank you, chica xD I'm very very glad you loooooove! Hehe, Bill's an idiot. Ally's a spazz. And Tom...well, Tom's a sweetheart at heart. Oh my, I almost typed in "sweetheart at forehead"...How would that even work? O_o lol