Date: 04/12/11 11:32 pm Title: Trouble
I miss you and your wonderful, fabulous, glitter boy-infused story! update soon s'il vous plait!
Date: 03/30/11 08:16 pm Title: Heartache
ARE YOU ALIVE???
I miss youuuu! Come back to me!
Date: 03/04/11 10:07 pm Title: Heartache
update soon? PLEASE? :D
Date: 03/01/11 09:34 am Title: Heartache
Oh i hadn't seen u had post a new chapter! Yej this was good, but full of drama but that's life u know :D please update soon!
Date: 02/12/11 11:58 pm Title: Promise Me
Im sitting here, 12 in the morning, and all of a sudden i read the spider scene.. i laughed so hard, and woke some people up... hilarious :D
Date: 02/12/11 02:21 am Title: He Is Pretty
haha yupp. this chapter made me tear up a bit :/ love ur story though =]
Date: 02/11/11 09:42 am Title: The Abundant Fortune
Another great chapter. I haven't had the time to read cuz I've been busy with work, 2nd semester of college, and hw and such, but I plan on reading the whole story so don't worry! ^_^ Onto the next chapter...
Date: 02/09/11 01:01 am Title: Heartache
I love this story!! I'm soo addicted!! :) Are you ever gunna finish A disaster in the making? Please Do!! :D
Date: 02/05/11 02:47 am Title: Trouble
yesss! cant wait to read it!!
Date: 02/05/11 02:46 am Title: Trouble
omg! i bet it was you!
lol
cant wait to read it!!
Date: 01/31/11 11:18 pm Title: Heartache
1. Not too much longer, after all, Ally isn't known for her everlasting patience.
2. Well maybe she'll be happy again soon..ish?? Maybe?
3. Hm, i've actually always kind of liked Andreas...but that's all over now.
4. Bad Bill, bad baaad Bill.
5. Oh noes, more trouble to come?
This chapter made me very sad...and yet i still love every word of it, especially the part with Tom-Tom's all-seeing gigantic foreheaad. :D
Date: 01/31/11 10:34 pm Title: Trouble
OHMYGOD YOU UPDATED!!!!! so happy. ^^
however: Bill. really...really Bill. he's being all perfect and then Andy comes in and it's 'oh...just kidding...not perfect.' damn. and I honestly hope that she's so wrong about something going on with Barbie girl...I mean, yeah, Bill kept that one secret...but it's BILL. He can't...he wouldn't...he's Bill. yeah? I hope so. :/
But regardless it was a wonderful chapter and I nearly fell out of my chair with joy when I saw you'd updated. ;)
Date: 01/31/11 04:21 pm Title: Heartache
omg finally you uploaded it! :o oh God women I thought you were dead :DD
Poor, poor Ally ;( I hate Andreas now, fucking moron! And Bill...hmmm...Isn't he an idiot? But I don't hate him that much as Andreas :DD
Date: 01/31/11 12:50 pm Title: Heartache
O.o but.... What.... I don't....
OMG WHAT THE FUCK.
I lied, I lied, I lied!! I don't want drama! Omg nooooooo!
Just... WTF. I hate Andy! He deserves a gold medal for biggest, most sucssesful douchebag of douchebaggery ways EVER.
Although Bill maybe deserves the award for douchebag of the year. This bad! Bad, bad, bad, bad!
Okay. I need to calm down, I am at work and causing a scene over fanfiction may not be the best way to go. But DAMN.
I think all I am capable of is WTF.
This SUCKS SO BAD.
I think I'm done for now? Maybe, we'll see.
Good chapter my darling!
Date: 01/31/11 10:33 am Title: Trouble
I just noticed some spelling mistakes, damn it and it ain't the first time too. I review from my phone and the buttons are so DAMN tiny and my fingers are too damn big. It annoys the crap outta me!! Ahzhdbdjjdnd GAH. My sincerest apologizes if I don't make any sense sometimes love.
Date: 01/31/11 10:28 am Title: Heartache
Yippee! So lovely to read from this story again *yayhands* I am in LOVE with ur writing style it is so...so... Damn it I can't discribe it....errr...crap. No! not ur style *facepalms* I mean crap I can't find the word. But u get it?? Right?? *pouts* OH DEAR! It's Monday sue me!!
Anywho one of the things that stuck in my head was the way u discribe such simple unimaginable noticed moments, like when catrin wa crying and u discribed the running make up from her tears as " rivers of black streaking her cheeks" and that is just one example.
Bill got himself in a nut, but then it I think I am on Bills side tho. She did kno Andy was cheating on her, SHE broke up with him first. But it still does stig tho that if bill did open his gob it might've helped a bit. But she better keep her promise to Tom and start yapping. Running home to dad shows her character that she is not string as others think, but knowing she has comfort and hope back home is not cowardly at all!
Ok I think I have bored u enough so take care Hun, as always Lurved it!!
Date: 01/31/11 05:31 am Title: Heartache
1) Tom's right, she needs to ask Bill because the wonder is killing me! I mean he went iceskating with her? WTF!?
2) Dada should kick some arses for hurting her like that.
3) She's definatley better off without him. Scumbag.
4) What a knob! I would have headbutted him.
5)Well, Alley shouldn't feel so bad about holding back now when those two aren't sharing anything. Tom is such a hypocrit having ago at Ally for not talking to Bill when he's not talking to his fiance....
You did your job perefctly, I am pretty bummed.
On a similar note, I warn you I love happy endings. If this ends badly for them or God forbid someone dies, I may cry and spend the rest of the day in a foul mood.
Date: 01/31/11 01:42 am Title: Trouble
There's more drama?! I AM VERY CURIOUS WITH THE BARBIE GIRL...
Date: 01/26/11 07:23 pm Title: Promise Me
I would rag on you about updating... But it took me a month to leave a review. So let's call it even, I'm reviewing and you will be updating soon? Maybe? Hopefully.
In all honesty? I had re-read it just for this.
Okkaaaayyyyyy here we gooooooo
Alley needs to tell Bill how she feels about Barbie AND about him. Its probs gonna blow up in her face, if she doesn't that is.
I want drama drama drama! Where is Andy? What's going on with him??? It's killing me to not know... Just so you know.
Also, I am clearly still alive. I still love you and I basically said "I love you darling"
Now, get what I am assuming is a cute tushy, in gear and UPDATE. Love ya!
Author's Response: I just posted the new chappy. So the drama is offically about to start! That is, as soon as the chapter gets validated. Prepare youself ;) It is sooo good to hear from you, hun! Aww I love you, too xDD
Date: 01/03/11 02:35 pm Title: Promise Me
Yay, a great update! :D
1. Spider wins!!! however, spider vs. ally is a completely different story.
2. FINALLY!! Go ally, lol
3. Yes, unfortunately...doesn't look good.
4. I loved the mini flashback! younger bill and ally are so cute! No, can't say i did miss barbie...at all. I had a theory as to why Ally hates Andreas...thing is, i forgot it.
Nooo, not ready for the drama! *runs in other direction of said drama*
Author's Response: Sweetie, there's no where left to run. The drama is here DUN DUN DUUNNNNNNNNN! D: