Date: 07/06/10 06:13 am Title: He Is Unreachable
actually, yes! ally is totally in need and it was good to read tom was there for her. but in a way, it was clrearly understabdable she wanted to be with bill. that little faker player. I'm pretty sure ally is right. and it must hurt like hell. and your readers hate him right now xD
1.) sure she is. ally is in love even she doesn't want to, though. it's natrual, she's human.
2.) well sure again. he does not want to hurt her anymore. if bill's being a jerk and can't stop hurting her... get her caitlin. she needs her best friend.
3.) promise? which promise? not to tell bill anything? come one! we all know the twins can't keep a secret! even though tom knows ally is suffering. he's her friend, too, and he wants the pain to stop. anyhow. no matter what. who wants to see his friend suffer?
4.) what the hell?! *lmao* please, don't do this to ally, it'll crack her.
nice chapter :) hope you're doing better now
Author's Response: Thank you, darling. I'm doing well :] Yeah, poor guy, everyone hates Bill right now. Don't blame 'em though. Oh, we'll be seeing the girls in the next chappy! And don't worry, she's having a moment of weakness but Ally is really a tough cookie to crack ;]
Date: 07/06/10 05:19 am Title: He Is Unreachable
I want you to update before this Friday please :D because then I'll have to be in total suspension because I have to wait two weeks before I have internet access again!!! By the way... I have no idea what the beginning is x) I've never done that. Great story though!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be trying my best to get the next chappy out ASAP, darling ;]
Date: 07/06/10 05:15 am Title: He Is Unreachable
Yey!! I've been waiting for a new chapter! Sexy new year? o.O
Author's Response: Oh yeah, sexy New Year ;D
Date: 07/06/10 04:33 am Title: He Is Unreachable
LOL thanks, and no I dont mind at all, its great! :D
Author's Response: Thank youuuu, darling :D
Date: 07/06/10 03:58 am Title: He Is Unreachable
;-; oh poor Ally.
God I hate that Bill's being so stupid. >.>
Of course Ally's affected by Bill's lie, she really really likes him and he's being a jerk! >.>
Hm... now Tom being all defensive makes me think it's really nothing between Bill and Adalyn. >:D
I don't think Tom will tell, but he should. Then maybe Bill will get a clue!! >.>
You make me really mad at Bill with this story. XDD
Oooo! Spoiler, does it mean what I think it means? :D
And I really loved seeing Tom being so comforting to Ally. This whole time they've been kinda mean toward each other and I'm glad to see that they really are close despite that. :]
Updates soon, I hope! :D
Author's Response: Hmm, that depends...what do you think it means? (insert eyebrow wiggle here) lol. Yeah, basically Tom is like her annoying older brother x] I'll do my best to update ASAP, darling!
Date: 07/06/10 03:31 am Title: He Is Unreachable
oh, and one more thing LMFAO.
Maybe I'm just completely and utterly delirious but did Ally just admit to Tom that she wanted to see Bill naked?!
Author's Response: RIFLL no, you aren't delirious, my crazy sheila. She totes just did ;]
Date: 07/06/10 03:27 am Title: He Is Unreachable
CRAZYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
I hate seeing Ally upset - it's kinda like seeing my own sister upset. Look what you've done to me! RIFL.
Billy boy's a big bitch - it's simple >:34
I actually have a heart for the forehead in this chapter but I have a funny feeling that I'm going to regret it.
Sheila, you make my day so much better. I needed a chapter and then *poof* chapter appears. You're magical.
Sexy time, aye? *wiggles eyebrows* sounds... interesting. Intriguing. So guess what? START WRITING! or if you've already started: WRITE LIKE THE WIND!
I'm exciting for the next update 8)
I LOBE YOU, CRAZY!
Author's Response: SALSDKGLBWPHSLSDGS BIRDMAN HAS A MUSTACHE! OHMYGOD RIFLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL! Okay. I'm going, I'm going. Wait...since when does the wind write? LMFAO. I LOBE YOU, TOO, CRAZY!
Date: 07/06/10 01:35 am Title: He Is Unreachable
I love this story;
hate that you leave it off at all the good parts.
:)
Author's Response: All part of the plan, darling ;]
Date: 07/06/10 12:05 am Title: He Is Unreachable
hngggg HURRY! :D amazing as always
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie. I'll try getting the next chappy ASAP! xD
Date: 07/05/10 11:37 pm Title: He Is Unreachable
1. That's cuz she loves him, the twit. At least she finally said it out loud!
2. I get the feeling Tom is being defensive for his brother. Maybe? *pulls hair out*
3. Yeah right.
4. HNNNNGGGG *flails*
Please update. PLEASE. I AM DYING HERE! I promise to update Uninvited like...tonight? Maybe tomorrow. But yes. Please? I love you girlie, hang in there < 3
Author's Response: Yes. Update, woman! Pweeeeez xD I'll be trying my best to get the next chappy out before the weekend. I love you more, missy :D
Date: 07/05/10 11:36 pm Title: He Is Unreachable
This chapter leaves me wanting the next one so badd! I wanna know what she's gonna say to Bill..
MORE MORE MORE! :D
Author's Response: Soon, darling ;]
Date: 07/05/10 10:46 pm Title: He Is Unreachable
Bill is a complete douche. Lying to his Best friend with/benefits.
She should still find herself a hunk a man(although it doesn't get better than Bill Lol) to "forget" Bill. It would be interesting to see what he would do. He has someone on the side why shouldn't she. =]
Update soon!
Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see what happens ;]
Date: 07/05/10 09:36 pm Title: He Is Unreachable
Ummmm, what was Tom's promise to Ally?
Author's Response: That he isn't going to tell Bill anything > . >
Date: 07/05/10 09:33 pm Title: He Is Unreachable
poor Ally, yeah we need some happy chappys.
Author's Response: Next chappy will be for sure ;]
Date: 07/05/10 09:03 pm Title: He Is Unreachable
Hahahaha, my uncle told me to do the pinky thing. It feels good in a weird way. Now off to read the story.
Author's Response: I dont remember who told me to do it lol.
Date: 07/05/10 09:02 pm Title: He Is Unreachable
I so hate you right now, Bill, you bitch.
You don't even deserve a masculine insult, glitter boy.
*coughs* lol ok, hmm
Anyway, I love that Tom was nice to her for once,, all big brother like
Author's Response: Omg, sweetie, I can believe I forgot to credit you for that! D= Thats an airhead momeent, I'm so sorry. I've been running on absolutely no sleep all day. My brain is practically fried. Acutally, I just came back from a nap. I hope you don't mind that I used it. I'm going back and crediting you!
Date: 07/05/10 09:02 pm Title: Trouble
please update cause this is my favorite story on here. :)
Author's Response: I'll be trying my best to update again real soon :]
Date: 07/05/10 08:34 pm Title: He Is Unreachable
OK I havent read the chapter, just the first line and I dont understand the pinkie thing, but I just bit my finger.
It hurt, ok reading the rest of the chapter now, I'll be back >D
Author's Response: It just means shes in a lot of pain.
Date: 07/05/10 08:29 pm Title: He Is Unreachable
HAPPY CHAPPY (ies) HAPPY CHAPPY (ies) HAPPY CHAPPY(ies) !!! plx!!!
1) i deff don't think Bill i soblivious as she thinks he is, and i ALMOST wonder if he's asking adalyn for advice... maybe.... ?
2) m thinking Tom know how Bill feels about Ally, and bill has told him not to tell ally, and .... gah i dunno?
3) O.O why do i not know what tom promised to ally?.... O.O
4)OH JA YOU NOW I WANT IT!
Date: 07/05/10 08:27 pm Title: Trouble
MORE MORe MOre More more!
Author's Response: xD