Date: 09/25/09 11:02 pm Title: With Absolutely No Shame
Some parts of this story just made me laugh xD
Author's Response: In a good way, I hope! :)
Date: 09/25/09 10:03 pm Title: With Absolutely No Shame
Sequel?
Author's Response: Maybe, I don't really know how there could be one, though! :)
Date: 09/25/09 09:25 pm Title: With Absolutely No Shame
i want to finish reading this i really do because it seems to have a good story line...but....you jump around a little too much, i think if you would have taken a little longer on this and read through it once more it would have been perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks. My writing style can get jumpy, and I don't notice when it jumps. I didn't have anyone to read it over for me (I did it a few times) and I do realize that it could have used some more work, but I'm happy with the way it is. Thanks for your advice.
Date: 09/25/09 09:05 pm Title: With Absolutely No Shame
whoa, there's typos in that review VVV nein! :(
Author's Response: *pets* Angry German Day was 9/9/09. You missed it. NEIN, NEIN, NEIN! <3
Date: 09/25/09 09:03 pm Title: With Absolutely No Shame
LOL, this was epic. And can I say slut-cute-ish at the end? Yes, it was slut-cute! xD I hope Bill didn't give the wall any STDs, that'll wouldn't be good for the next person that attempted getting themselves off on it.
Author's Response: AWWWW. XD Dyslexics are teople poo. Remember that. :) And who knows! Maybe...GEORG AND ANDI could get STDs off of it. Hint hint. Wink wink. Nudge nudge. <3