Date: 01/09/08 03:16 pm Title: Discovery
*gasp* damn you for that ending!! XDD loved it =] =]
Date: 01/09/08 03:10 pm Title: Discovery
Wow I love this! Your stories are so good! I mean everything you write turns out to be gold *_* Just amazing! And they way you write is just priceless! Great work!
Date: 01/09/08 02:58 pm Title: Discovery
It's funny..I got to this line, He could barely take in air as Tom further demonstrated Bill belonged to him and him alone, screwing him into the mattress and calling Bill’s name against his throat, in his ears and over his face, and I had to stop because I started to cry. And then when I started reading again, Bill started crying. And that made me want to cry again.
I really felt the emotions with this one. There is this desperate need they have for each other, and it's fucking horrible. My heart breaks every time they have to hide it.
Perfect. Jost can unlearn how to breathe for all I care.
Date: 01/09/08 02:42 pm Title: Discovery
oh god, i really love the way you write.
this is amazing. i couldnt get any words out even if i wanted.
and the end was perfect.
you're so good.
Date: 01/09/08 02:39 pm Title: Discovery
omg.....one hell of an ending huh? that was AWSOME!!!!!!!! like omg i loved the whole thing!!! every little word was so well written!!! please write more!!! pretty please?!?!!?!?!?!
Date: 01/09/08 02:33 pm Title: Discovery
That was beyond anything I can say that Ive read in a long time. If this wasnt a oneshot, I would be screaming for more. It was amazing. GREAT JOB.
Date: 01/09/08 02:11 pm Title: Discovery
Oh my.
you certainly have more than just a knack for writing, I'm almost waiting to see what happens next, although i know it's a oneshot.
words cannot descripe the awsomeness that is your tallent,
if you write a book that gets published tell me, just so i can go buy 5 copies.
Date: 01/09/08 02:03 pm Title: Discovery
OMG! My heart dropped when i read the last couple of lines! That was so intense! Great!
Date: 01/09/08 01:48 pm Title: Discovery
Like i said before, you have a talent in forming erotic and sexual situations into beautiful and tastsful images.
i swear i was holding my breath the whole time.
i only released it when i read the last line.
Tom leaned forward and kissed him with a different kiss, one he hadn’t had before. It said mine.
That line made me shudder, it was just right and so perfect.
AMAZING!!
i should make another deal with the devil, cause you killed me XD
Date: 01/09/08 01:42 pm Title: Discovery
That was amazing! I love the way you can create such raw emotions with your words. You have the amazing talent of being able to generate just the right pace within your stories. It gives you the feeling of being inside the story with the characters; experiencing what they're experiencing. That last line was a killer. Absolutely amazing :D Well done!!!
Date: 01/09/08 01:30 pm Title: Discovery
Sophia's stories = PURE FUCKING LOVE