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Reviewer: PhantomRider Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 12:08 pm Title: Epilogue

Ok so I admit I'm usually one of those who reads without reviewing, but this was just too good. The poor girl has luck like mine, haha, and I was able to relate more than I wanted to in terms of the 3 year relationship and all that happened to her. But, that made it all the more easy to get into, along with your use of "you" as opposed to a third person point of view. Charly's happy ending was the perfect reward for all she's been through. Now I can only hope my luck will turn around the same way too, lol. Great work!

Author's Response: Wow, I have to say, wow! I'm so overwhelmed by your review! I put a lot into this story and the fact you could relate to it and get caught up in the story makes me so happy! I truly hope your life get's better! Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: Kaycee23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 03:31 am Title: Epilogue

awwwww i loved this story so much!!

Author's Response: Yay!! That makes me SO happy!

Reviewer: Cynnn Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/09 12:42 pm Title: Epilogue

i loved this chapter und story since the beginning. i am sad the story is over.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you SO much! I'm sad it's over too. :(

Reviewer: oreosweetie25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/09 02:36 am Title: Chapter 10

LOVED IT! :D

Author's Response: awesome!! :D

Reviewer: Kaycee23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/09 04:32 am Title: Chapter 10

LOVED IT!!!

Author's Response: Yay! You rock!

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/09 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 9

SEXXXiiii TiME?????

Author's Response: maaaaybe ;)

Author's Response: maaaaybe ;)

Reviewer: oreosweetie25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/09 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 9

I like it :)

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: oreosweetie25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 8

awww hurry up and post another :)

Author's Response: I'm on it! :D

Reviewer: oreosweetie25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

so sweet :)

I love how Tom freaked out about his Ipod! HA!

Author's Response: :D I know! That part was fun to write!

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 01:26 am Title: Chapter 8

in my opinion i think bill is a dick for letting that bitch straddle him. I probably would have done the same thing charly did.

update soon. please?

Author's Response: will do! :)

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/09 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 7

awww! thats soooo romantic.
i really liked how tom flipped out about his ipod!
i want more! N0W!
haha

Author's Response: AW! you're amazing!! thank you SO much for the positive review! I'm working on the next chapter now, be patient ;)

Reviewer: oreosweetie25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 6

ooh la la! love it! :D

Author's Response: haha

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 04:49 am Title: Chapter 6

whatever that sex scene was soo romantic. you should write some more in this story.

ooohh maybe tom should accidentally walk in on them

Author's Response: AW!!! Your review makes me SO HAPPY!!! Thank you SOO much for the feedback! rnrnI'm pretty sure there won't be a lack of "scenes" in this story now that I know that people are actually likin' them :)rnrnThanks for the idea...I just might use it ;)

Reviewer: oreosweetie25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 5

LOVE IT! :D

Author's Response: Yay!

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 5

aww! so romantic!

altough, i some what think that bill is going to break her heart?

Author's Response: We shall see, won't we? :P thanks for the review!

Reviewer: oreosweetie25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 4

very cute my dear cousin! ^.^

Author's Response: gah! again with the cute! you're killin' me here ;D

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 4

Russian Hooker? God Tom

Author's Response: haha! I know right? Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: meandtokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/09 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 3

kwl chapter :) Love it please write more

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: meandtokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/09 12:05 am Title: Chapter 2

awesome chapters please write more

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Keep reading :D

Reviewer: oreosweetie25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very cute ^.^

Author's Response: Psh. cute..lol

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