Date: 09/26/09 03:54 pm Title: 1- “They can't make me!” - “You know they can and they will.”
oh please let Bill be pregnant! Tom is so cute and im sure he would love to obey if Bill started it, even if he was drunk
Author's Response: haha, we'll see... i'm thinking it over, okay?? :D
Date: 09/26/09 03:14 pm Title: 1- “They can't make me!” - “You know they can and they will.”
well, i love this story, so if you need something you can add me. this is my email: twincestkaulitz@hotmail.com
thanks for the story!!! XD
continue!!! mmm i prefer regular post once in a week!! XD thanks!!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that (:
Date: 09/26/09 02:20 pm Title: 1- “They can't make me!” - “You know they can and they will.”
who is tm in this story? did bill and tom have sex? i would hate for bill to carry davids baby. the baby should belong to bill and tom. please update soon.
Author's Response: haha, as told in the chapter, tom is the stable boy and what role he will play will be shown in the next chapter, i guess. hm, who knows what happened there :D, and who knows if bill will actually ever get pregnant... we'll see... thanks for the review (:
Date: 09/23/09 08:30 pm Title: Prologue
ohhhhh poor bill!!!! he is so innocent!! please continue!! XD i love it!!
Author's Response: :D yeah he is... but i don't know if he will stay like this... we'll see, right? xD
Date: 09/23/09 08:19 pm Title: Prologue
Ok so it's a good story and theme but you need a beta. keep it up :D
Author's Response: actually, i had a betareader, but a few parts were not betad ^^""... there were the mistakes... rnand now my betareader hasn't got time for that anymore... now i have to find a new one .___.
Date: 09/23/09 07:17 pm Title: Prologue
wow. pretty ace start. can't wait for more of this!
Author's Response: so have fun with the new chapter (:
Date: 09/23/09 07:16 pm Title: Prologue
this is really good!
if you changed the phrase " Jeremy was only while his holidays with them." to jeremy was only home with them during his holidays it would make it much better.
anyways, this is really good and i hope that you stick with this story and dont quit on it like many authors do :)
Author's Response: thank you! when i read this sentence again i also recognized it was wrong oO... i really don't know how i coul dhave written this oO... it was totaly wrong and i think this was because i thought german... this is german wordorder oO""... rnrnyeah, i hope so too... when i look at the other stories i have on my pc... well, there are only a few completed and tons of unfinished stuff... so i hope i won't loose my ideas here .___.
Date: 09/23/09 07:15 pm Title: Prologue
Hmmmm I like it so far but how old is bill?
Author's Response: actually i'm not so sure atm, but i think he'll be between 15 and 16