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Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/14 09:31 am Title: 10 - Why don't you believe me?!

I hope you will continue this story, because i love it

Reviewer: lalaabanana Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/11 02:36 pm Title: 5 - Goodbye to yesterday

Boy-Leon and Girl-Hope
cause you know, toms baby gave him hope if it was a girl :) and grr i want to stab David and Jorg with a butchers knife... >:O

Reviewer: Sarah22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 04:42 pm Title: Prologue

How about that? David dies on his way back home and Bill will mourn for a year and than a misterious gentelman apears out of no were to win Bills heart. (this gentelman is of course Tom)?

Author's Response: mhhh i'll think about that :) thanks for the review

Reviewer: Sarah22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 10:47 am Title: 10 - Why don't you believe me?!

Ok I got three wishes: 1. I wish for Bill and Tom getting together 2. I wish for David to just disapear and 3. I wish(hope) for you to continue and end this story.
Is this like x-mas? Cause I wasn´t a good girl this year?

Author's Response: haha well, if it was like christmas you would only get one of these things, so you'd better hope it is not :P xD rnthanks for the review :D

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 01:44 am Title: 9 - Bastard

You don't need to improve it. It's good. People don't always review because there's nothing to say most of the time. People are enjoying reading the story. A lack of review is not a bad thing. The read count is wayyyyyy more important.

Author's Response: okay, i will look at that but although it's a little disappointing when you get so little amount of reviews... :/

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/10 06:00 am Title: 9 - Bastard

Well I'll be damn! I have never read any fic where Bill could breast feed that's pretty cool : ) Tom has the right to say all that shit why? Well he does not know that's his kid and like it or not Bill is married. Now for the homework part I really don't know sorry hun.

Author's Response: yeah, well, i guess i've invented the car new with that xD... and actually, now that you've said it, i think i haven't read one yet, either. rnthat thing about the baby will need some time for both to be solved. and hey, it's just half part of their talk. thanks for the review :D

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/10 01:04 pm Title: 9 - Bastard

none of it should matter anymore, as long as Tom realizes that the baby is his.

Author's Response: yes... but i guess i can tell you tom will need a long time to do so... :/... thanks for the review :D

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 06:48 am Title: 8 - First step to the truth

i love it!!! just kill david off and Tom and Bill can be happy with their baby~

Author's Response: haha, well... i guess david would not like that.. xD... and who knows, if they will be happy. you should wait till the next chapters; maybe that'll change your mind ... ;) thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 07:10 pm Title: Prologue

i said maybe for a reason. im guessing that you found a beta.

Author's Response: yes i've found one but thanks for offering :)...

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 05:20 pm Title: 7 - Gone

ill do it, just email me and we can talk. i like that things are going better for Bill's health. it saddens me that he thinks he can learn to love david when he is deeply in love with Tom. maybe things will get better when Bill and Tom reunite.

Author's Response: jep... or worse?

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 11:26 am Title: Prologue

Woot!!! Can't wait I hope David doesn't hurt bill because of this that would make me sad. Looking forward to it

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 10:57 am Title: 7 - Gone

I'd like to be yur beta reader because. Absolutely love this story and your writing :) loved the chapter I can't wait to see what happens and if Tom finds out that te baby is his and not david's

Author's Response: well, we'll see what happens if Tom finds out... x3... and with the beta-reader-thing. i'll contact you :)...

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 10:17 am Title: 5 - Goodbye to yesterday

Ack where is Tom!

Author's Response: you'll find out soon x3...

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 10:16 am Title: 4 - they made him--

I can't believe that Bill is pregnant with Tomi's baby!!! That's so sad!

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 10:13 am Title: 3 - Who actually cares?

Yupp. Jorg is an asshole.

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 10:10 am Title: 2 - I wanna run away

Aww the twins love each other! Damn. I hate Jorg and his stupid arranged marriage.

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 10:06 am Title: 1- “They can't make me!” - “You know they can and they will.”

I really like this!!!

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 10:03 am Title: Prologue

I like the idea of this fic. I'm on to read more!!!

Reviewer: Sarah22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 03:53 pm Title: 5 - Goodbye to yesterday

If it is a boy it should be Leon (or also Tom??) and if it is a girl it should be Hope (or Julia for Toms death sister)!

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/09 09:03 pm Title: 6 - Julia loves Tommi

what more!

Author's Response: soon, soon :D

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