Date: 01/11/17 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
this was a good story!
i cant wait for the next part you add to this!
Date: 11/07/15 05:31 am Title: Chapter 2
This was beautiful. I loved it. xxx
Date: 08/16/14 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hey um, I know it's been five long years since you wrote this, but I read it all in two days, cried, laughed, clenched my jaw, smoked a lot, cried some more, and through it all, enjoyed it. Glad tom got his anger therapy, good story, all of the series. Well done.
Date: 11/29/13 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love this universe of stories. It is just so beautiful in its love an emotionality. I hope everything will work out for the boys. They do belong together.
Date: 12/14/10 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm a bit confused but hopefully I will figure it out.
Date: 05/09/10 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
GUH I JUST DIED. THIS. YOU. THIS. TOM. BILL. TOM. BILL. THIS. *____*
Date: 04/17/10 09:36 am Title: Chapter 2
It's just not as strong as your other pieces and it leaves me wanting. I know what you were going for but you just didn't quite get there. It needs a little more detail. More of Tom's though process and the things he learned to be able to move your audience the way you want it to. We need to feel Tom's inner struggle against what Bill has trained him to be and what he has learned and then the realization that words don't matter to Bill would be more powerful.
But on the whole it's still decent!
Date: 04/17/10 09:12 am Title: Chapter 1
It is clear this is a little out of your knowledge base. It looses strengh when you don't have full understanding of what it is you are saying. It's not bad just not as strong as some of your other pieces.
Date: 10/28/09 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
yay!! I'm so glad you are going to write another one. i think the way you incorporated Bill's new hair into this was perfect. I love his new hair, but I also think it makes him look very young, very boyish, very innocent, though no less stunningly beautiful. This was wonderfully done, I'm glad Tom has figured things out. I really look forward to the next piece, and would not object at all if it wasn't the last one either. =)
Date: 09/27/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awesome! Really. I'm so glad you decided to make one more!
Date: 09/27/09 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
You've just made me the happiest girl on the planet. <3
This was fantastic. AND one more part? *dies happily*
Date: 09/27/09 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
When I first saw an update, I immidiately decided to save it for tonight. I didn't want to read this in the middle of a hasty afternoon and it felt right, it feels right.
So sensitive, gentle, sweet and painful just the way I liked it. It made so much sense, you know. All through this chapter I kept nodding, because in the end all they need is each other and even if it sounds simple, it is enomous burden at the same time. Love, just love. No excuses. Nowhere to hide. Just face to face with the purest and rawest emotion of all.
I loved the way you described Tom's feelings here, because rarely people can see beauty behind "unhealthy" love-. Like somehow it seems like everything is so black and white, but things are not like that. The power of creation and destruction, like you said. Happiness can be reached in so many ways and their way can be as good as some other way. They may never collide, but when they fill each other like this, who are we to judge them? I love the idea here even if sensible me wants to say that "oh no, this is baaaaaad, because relationship should never be based on -and blablabla". It doesn't work like that.
You also described Bill's vulnerability very well. Not over-doing, but still making him extremely fragile and it fitted beautifully here. Maybe I've missed that in him lately when seeing them? And I think it gave here nice twist to show that Bill wouldn't understand. It would be obvious that they can reach the same level in everything, but you choose to do differently and it worked somehow so well.
I'm so happy to read how they finally end up back to beginning. Even before you mentioned doind a full circle at the end notes, I was thinking that they are going back to beginning. They needed to wander a full circle, but it ended up to a place they can start all over again. Touching and soothing thought.
I'm waiting for epilogue now. Thank you so much for writing it! :)
Date: 09/27/09 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
AWESOME... you are so good at this. You have to write more! The epilouge and more other fanfics as well!! PLIIIIIZ ;D
danke
Date: 09/27/09 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really happy that there will be some sort of epilogue.
With this installment, I was able to get closure with Tom. Like a full circle that started with 'The Education of Tom Kaulitz'. And I'm there, with Tom, the end of an intense and heartbreaking ride.
But I want to have closure with Bill too because at the end of this installment, I found myself thinking, "Oh, you beautiful creature. How I'd love to touch you but how afraid I am that you'd crumble under the touch." Closure with Bill, yes, I'm looking forward very much.
Date: 09/27/09 11:37 am Title: Chapter 2
i actually love bill's new hair. im my opinion it was way better than the old hair. i didn't think dreads suited him and with this new hair cut his beautiful features really stand out.
Date: 09/27/09 11:32 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh I'm so glad there's going to be more, even though this one on it's own was perfect. Poor, poor Bill. I'm so glad he's better. And I want to squeeze Tom until he pops lol.
Date: 09/27/09 11:22 am Title: Chapter 2
This was really bittersweet. I'm so glad there will be an epilogue because I really don't want this series to end.
Date: 09/27/09 10:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh gosh I loved this!!!!!! I can't believe this series is will be coming to a close *sniff*
Date: 09/27/09 10:08 am Title: Chapter 2
So incredibly beautiful. It tears your heart out and then puts it back together. I hate to see this universe end.