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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/18 06:43 pm Title: 1.

this was a good story!!

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/10 12:24 pm Title: 1.

This was a sweet and haunting story and I loved every word. Danke.

Reviewer: RomeIsFalling Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/09 08:36 am Title: 1.

Aww, that was great. Conflicted feelings, then smut. Good job. ;)

Reviewer: miki-chan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 02:50 pm Title: 1.

AH! SHEER BLISS!!!

 

I like a sweet Tom/Bill pairing!!! 

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/09 08:24 pm Title: 1.

It went perfectly w/ the song.

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/09 04:34 pm Title: 1.

Awww I loved it!

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/22/09 12:28 pm Title: 1.

Oh yes, smut worked just fine .). I didn't listen to that song, so I can't say anything about it, but smut was great. God, I never get bored of certain things between Bill and Tom *sigh*

I liked the beginning as it was very poetic and dream-like somehow. Those little chapters reflecting the moment are my favourites. They built up nicely the smut in the end.

I liked this. Dream-like buzzle of moments.

Reviewer: broken2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/09 05:16 am Title: 1.

OMG! this was so cute! I loved it! you have to write more!

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/09 04:39 am Title: 1.

oooh that was beautiful!!! SEQUEL please :d x

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/09 02:25 am Title: 1.

That was awesome! (Although now, I am sure to be found humming this song, for like, eight billion days!)

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/09 01:51 am Title: 1.

gah.

this was beautiful.

and sexy.

and beautiful and it pulled at my heart string and made me wanna hug you for writing it.

i loved the aprt where he couldn't breathe and realized why his pen was empty.

that was SO visual i was like WOAH.

i loved it

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